英语书面表达之建议信VIP

.,1,书面表达-Aletterofgivingadvice,.,2,写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。,.,3,3.基本框架：开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.),.,4,4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式,.,5,常用套语,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3Knowingyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtoandIlltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.,.,6,B.表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondlythen，afterthat，intheendfinallyMeanwhile,whatsmore2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat4.IfIwereyou,Iwould5.Youmayconsiderdoing6.Itwouldseemtomethatyoucould7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan,.,7,C.建议信结尾常用句式,1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.,.,8,4：建议信常用常用关联词,1.表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语:ina/oneword,altogether,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup/conclude/summarize,inconclusion/summary/sum,inshort2.表示递进/增补的过渡词或短语moreover;whatsmore;besides;inaddition;also;whatsworse;worsestill;evenworse;tomakematters/itworse;even;again;aswell(as);apartfrom;too/either;furthermore;notonlybutalso;and;neithernor;bothand,.,9,3.表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:but;however;yet;although;evenif/though;Evenso/not;whatever.;however.;.as.;despite;inspiteof;regardlessof;while.;ontheonehand,butontheotherhand,;afterall;some,butothers;otherwise;foronething.,butforanother(thing).4.表示原因的过渡词或短语:because,since,as,for,nowthat,becauseof,thanksto,dueto（由于）,owingto（由于）,inviewof,onaccountof（考虑到）,asaresult/consequenceof（由于的原因）,.,10,5.表示结果的过渡词或短语:so,thus,therefore,consequently,accordingly,asaresult/consequence,sothat,forthisreason,thereasonfor/why.isthat.6.表示条件的过渡词或短语:if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat.,once.7.表示时间的过渡词或短语:(and)then,afterthat,next,finally,eventually,later,intheend,recently,atthesametime,(inthe)meanwhile,atfirst,atlast,fromnowon,until/till,afterwards,on/upondoing,shortly/soonafter,beforelong,atthebeginningof8.表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,tobegin/startwith,lastbutnotleast,lastly,.,11,9.表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:inotherwords;thatis(tosay);namely;.,whichmeans10.表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语:forinstance,forexample,suchas,like,examplesinclude.,.andsoon,and/orthelike,take.forexample11.表示比较对比的过渡词或短语:instead;insteadof;meanwhile;onthecontrary;unlike;differentfrom.;as.as.;ontheonehand,andontheotherhand,;some,and/whileothers;.while.;foronething.,andforanother(thing).;similarly;equally;similarto.;inthesameway/manner,.,12,12.表示强调事实的过渡词或短语:infact/reality/truth/practice,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank/sure,asamatteroffact,honestlyspeaking,actually,aboveall,afterall,anyway,anyhow,certainly/surely,indeed,really,especially,inparticular,truly,importantly,mostimportant,obviously,only/just/simply/merely,withoutdoubt/outofquestion（毫无疑问）13.表示选择的过渡词或短语：either.or.,or,orelse,otherwise14.表示表目的的过渡词或短语：forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto,withthepurposeof,.,13,5.尝试使用多样化的句式,定语从句e.g.Isuggestthatyoushouldtakeadeepbreathbeforeyougiveaspeech,whichwillbehelpfultomakeyourelaxed.2.主语从句e.g.WhatIwanttoadviseyoutodofirstistomakeaspecificplanforyourtravellinginChina.3.表语从句e.g.ThereasonwhyIwritetoyouisthatIwanttosharesomesuggestionswithyou.4.强调句型/倒装句型e.g.Onlybycommunicatingwithyourparents,canyouknowwhattheyarethinkingabout.,.,14,5.尝试使用多样化的句式,5.虚拟语气e.g.IfIwereyou,IwouldputuppostersaboutChineseKongfuoncampussoastoletstudentsinourschoolknowmoreaboutit.6.非谓语动词e.g.IamdelightedtoknowthatyouwanttosetupaChineseKongfuclub,lettingmorepeopleknowmoreaboutChineseculture.DelightedbyyourideaofsettingupaChineseKongfuclub,Iamreadytosharemyadvicewithyou.,.,15,假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议内容：1.不要灰心，保持良好心态；2.掌握学习方法；3.培养对英语的兴趣爱好。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,建议信写作范例,.,16,第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。高考书面表达是半封闭性的写作，审题十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,第一人称,书信,对英语学习给出建议,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,.,17,第二步：构思-建议信结构及内容要点,三段式：第一段：点明主题：表明写作意图，（有时要简单介绍自己）。第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由（是什么，为什么，怎么样）第三段：总结全文，表明希望,草稿,修改,誊写,审题,.,18,建议信重点,第二段：说明建议的内容；（是什么）提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,.,19,适当运用模板,.,20,DearLiHua,Ivereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的问题.Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,youdbetter_,because_.Thirdly,youdbetter_.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_.Whatsmore,_.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,.,21,DearLiHua,Ivereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.Whatsmore,th