英语书面表达专项训练课件（共38张PPT）.ppt

,ImproveyourComposition,Descriptionofacartoonorpicture-高考作文指导,小结,15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里？,Whatmakesagoodcomposition?,Discussion,Everythingneededincluded,Goodbeginningandending,Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped,Properlinkingwordsbetweensentencesandparagraphs,Describingapicture,1.Whatdoesthepicturesayandreflect?,2.Howcanweexpresstheidea(s)properlyinEnglish?,Problems：,读图与立意,参考词汇：hogwashoil地沟油,Theuseofhogwashoilandpoisonousriceinrestaurantshasalreadyraisedawiderangeofsocialconcern.,细节,寓意,细节,寓意,Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.,读图与立意,细节,问题,Twosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsontheovercrowdedroads,whichreflectsthatheavytrafficjamhasbeenaproblem.,读图与立意,读图与立意,细节,寓意,Positivepeoplealwaysseeanopportunityineverydifficulty,whilepessimisticpeoplearealwaystakinganegativeviewofopportunities,细节,寓意,Dontcopyotherswayofsolvingtheproblem.Doeverythingintherightway.,读图与立意,Describingapicture,1.Tenseandperson,4.Waystoadvanceorimprovewordsandsentences,Process:,2.Sentencepatterns,3.Properwaystodescribeapicture,（南京2011年二模)请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：1.描述这幅漫画的内容。2.是否同意他们的教育方式,并陈述理由。3.对家庭教育提出建议。注意：1.词数：150左右。2.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。3.参考词汇：溺爱spoilv.Ascanbeseeninthecartoon,theyoungcoupleeducatetheirchildindifferentways._,Whichtenseandperson？,Whichtenseandperson？,Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Inthepicture,thereis(are)/is(are)doing,Commonlyusedsentencepatterns,Comparedifferentdescriptions:,要求：描述图片内容，如人物、动作、表情等等,3.,aglassbottle,withonlyalittlewaterinit,istryingtoattachalabeltoitsbody,toannouncetotheworlditisfull.Itsexpressionsuggeststhatitsveryproudandlookingdownontheothers.,1.Inthepicturewecanseeabottleoflesswaterwhoselabelreadsfull.,2.Fromthepicturewecanseethatthereisabottle.Ithastwohandsandtriestoputanlabelreading“full”onitsbody.Asmileisontheneckofthebottle.Insidethebottleistherealittlewater.,思考：你能想到哪些词汇使用的原则？,？,Words,1、词组优先原则,2、地道原则,1.Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.2.Throughtraveling,Igainedobtainedalotofknowledge.,1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.,原词workhardhappymoreandmorepeopleinordertodo,3、避免重复原则,1.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.2.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.,4、高级原则,替换词workdiligentlydelightedanincreasingnumberofforthepurposeofdoing,词汇使用的原则,1、词组优先原则,2、地道原则,3、避免重复原则,4、高级原则,四项原则,思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？,Sentences,？,一、IT作形式主语或形式宾语句型操作难度写作效果,ItisconvenienttokeepintouchwithyourfamilybyusingtheInternet.,TokeepintouchwithyourfamilybyusingtheInternetisconvenient.,二、主动句与被动句的互换。操作难度写作效果,Thegovernmentshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.,Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.,三、将陈述句改为倒装句。操作难度写作效果,Wecanachieveourgoalinthisway.,Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.,四、将几个简单句合并为复合句。操作难度写作效果,Themagicofsilverscreenisfascinating.Itcannotbereplacedbyotherwaysofwatchingfilms.,（2013镇江）Themagicofsilverscreenissofascinatingthatitcannotbereplacedbyotherwaysofwatchingfilms.,2.Theintellectualpropertylawhascomeintoeffect.Websitesareforbiddentoprovidefreemusicdownload.Thatiscertaintobenefitthewholesocietyinthelongterm.,（2013南通）Astheintellectualpropertylawhascomeintoeffect,websitesareforbiddentoprovidefreemusicdownload,whichiscertaintobenefitthewholesocietyinthelongterm.,五、分词结构代替状语/定语从句操作难度写作效果,Thegirlrealizeshermommustbeverytiredafteradayswork.Thegirlhelpstoremovethebagfromhershoulder.,（2011江苏）Realizinghermommustbeverytiredafteradayswork,thegirlhelpstoremovethebagfromhershoulder.,六、WITH引导的短语或者复合结构操作难度写作效果,（2009山东）WiththeSpringFestivaldrawingnear,peoplewillholdvarietiesofactivities.,TheSpringFestivalisdrawingnear.Andpeoplewillholdvarietiesofactivities.,Attention:1.使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；2.要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。,多读多背多模仿,书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，得分,0,卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得分,5,Practicemakesperfect!Letshaveatry!,（南京2011年二模)请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：1.描述这幅漫画的内容。2.是否同意他们的教育方式,并陈述理由。3.对家庭教育提出建议。注意：1.词数：150左右。2.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。3.参考词汇：溺爱spoilv.Ascanbeseeninthecartoon,theyoungcoupleeducatetheirchildindifferentways._,（2011年江苏卷）下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；举例说明你能为家长减负做