高中英语--祝贺信-(公开课)

DearHenry,IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua,大声朗读,DearHenry,IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua,祝贺信“三步走”：,观察思考：文章的体裁？写作目的？结构（几个层次？）时态？过渡词？,1.写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情；2.对喜讯进行积极评价（包括肯定被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；3.表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福。（注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）,作文训练之祝贺信,常用语块恭喜/祝贺_2.实现/成真_3.很高兴听到_4.我想表达我对的祝贺,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationson,congratulationson,cometrue,HowhappyIamtohear,5.我知道这肯定是因为6.我希望,Iknowthisissurelyowingto,Ihope(that)Iwish.,套用句式我很高兴听到你梦想成真。2.我想表达我对你被北京大学录取的祝贺。,HowhappyIamtohearthatyourdreamhascometrue.,IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissionintothePekingUniversity.,3.我希望你在大学中取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。,Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.,假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(PekingUniversity)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2.努力学习将来为家乡服务。3.对未来祝福。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,根据题目要求审题：,文章的体裁？祝贺信2.写作目的？祝贺王强考上北京大学3.结构（几个层次？）3个4.时态？一般现在时5.过渡词？,实战演练：,假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(PekingUniversity)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2.努力学习将来为家乡服务。3.对未来祝福。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,实战演练：,根据题目要求审题并列出提纲：,1.写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情2.对喜讯进行积极评价（包括被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；3.表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福。（注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）,祝贺信“三步走”：,写作：15分钟完成,互评作文（2分钟）,任务：1.看看别人如何表达你的疑难点；2.看看同学的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。,评判依据：1.字数:100词左右。2.卷面是否整洁？3.内容是否齐全？4.句子结构是否完整？5.用了哪些核心句型？,评分档次：第一档：21-25(优秀）内容齐全，错误很少；第二档:16-20（良好）内容齐全，错误较少；第三档:11-15（及格）内容基本齐全，错误较多；第四档:6-10（较差）内容不齐全，错误很多；第五档:1-5（差）只写了一两个相关词句。,DearWangQiang,Congratulations!IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissiontoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowhappyIamtohearyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouanditsgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.AsforasImconcerned,youareintelligent.Besides,youhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soImreallyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua,Homework：熟读范文和关于祝贺信的核心短语、句型。,Thankyou,课堂练习假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(PekingUniversity)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2.努力学习将来为家乡服务。3.对未来祝福。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,DearWangQiang,Congratulations!IhavelearnedwithdelightthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Iknowyouhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soImtrulyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.,IjustwantyoutoknowhowpleasedIamtowitnessyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouanditsgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.Iwishyougreatersuccessinuniversityandserveforthehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua,课外作业假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：1.天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。2.继续努力，有机会来中国留学。3.希望见面和交流。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest,DearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.,SoImsosurprisedthatyoubecomechampionofthiscompetition.IfyougoonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Atlast,Ihopetoseeyouandcommunicatewitheachother.Sincerecongratulationstoyouagain!Yours,LiHua,DearHenry,IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentpers