2017年高考英语书面表达 建议信写作ppt课件.ppt

2017年高考英语书面表达书信、电子邮件类建议信,写作攻略1：什么是建议信？1.建议信是写信人针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告。2.建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得目的明确、简明扼要，具有合理性和说服力。,Page2,写作攻略2：建议信写作的注意事项a.这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b.这类文章的基本时态多用现在时和一般将来时。c.掌握建议信的语言特点：语气要诚恳，有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各条建议之间的衔接。d.熟悉建议信的常用句型。,Page3,写作攻略3：建议信常用句式,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料，表明意图)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3.Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter.4.Iamwritingtoyouinreplyto.5.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowtoandIlltrytomakesomesuggestions.6.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning7.Itsmypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon.,Page4,B.建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）1.Haveyouconsidereddoing./Sowhynotdo.?2.Dontyouthinkitmorebeneficialifyoucould3.Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)4.IfIwereyou,Iwould5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketomakeasuggestionthatyou(should)7.Youdbetterdo./Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo.8.Thebestwaytodosthistodo/Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth.9.How/Whataboutdoing.?10.Whatif.?11.Itwouldbeagoodideaif.,Page5,C.建议信结尾常用句式（归纳总结，提出希望）,1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard(在这一点上).4.Idohopethatmyideaswillwork.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindtheseideasuseful.6.Iwouldbereadytofurtherdiscussthismatter/discussthismatterwithyouinfurtherdetail.7.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.8.Letskeepintouch.Ihopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.9.Ihopewhatsmentionedabovemightbehelpful.,Page6,10.Iwillappreciateyourconsiderationofmyadvice/suggestions/tips.11.Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thankyou.12.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureof.,Page7,写作攻略4：建议信常用常用关联词,1.表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语:ina/oneword,altogether,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup/conclude/summarize,inconclusion/summary/sum,inshort2.表示递进/增补的过渡词或短语moreover;whatsmore;besides;inaddition;also;whatsworse;worsestill;evenworse;tomakematters/itworse;even;again;aswell(as);apartfrom;too/either;furthermore;notonlybutalso;and;neithernor;bothand,Page8,3.表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:but;however;yet;although;evenif/though;evenso/not;whatever.;however.;.as.;despite;inspiteof;regardlessof;while.;ontheonehand,butontheotherhand,;afterall;some,butothers;otherwise;foronething.,butforanother(thing).4.表示原因的过渡词或短语:because,since,as,for,nowthat,becauseof,thanksto,dueto（由于）,owingto,inviewof,onaccountof,asaresult/consequenceof,Page9,5.表示结果的过渡词或短语:so,thus,therefore,consequently,accordingly,asaresult/consequence,inconsequence,sothat,forthisreason,thereasonfor/why.isthat.6.表示条件的过渡词或短语:if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat.,once.7.表示时间的过渡词或短语:(and)then,afterthat,next,finally,eventually,later,intheend,recently,atthesametime,(inthe)meanwhile,atfirst,atlast,fromnowon,until/till,afterwards,on/upondoing,shortly/soonafter,beforelong,atthebeginningof8.表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,tobegain/startwith,lastbutnotleast,lastly,Page10,9.表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:inotherwords;thatis(tosay);namely;.,whichmeans10.表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语:forinstance,forexample,suchas,like,examplesinclude.,.andsoon,and/orthelike,take.forexample11.表示比较对比的过渡词或短语:instead;insteadof;meanwhile;onthecontrary;unlike;differentfrom.;as.as.;ontheonehand,andontheotherhand,;some,and/whileothers;.while.;foronething.,andforanother(thing).;similarly;equally;similarto.;inthesameway/manner,Page11,12.表示强调事实的过渡词或短语:infact/reality/truth/practice,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank/sure,asamatteroffact,honestlyspeaking,actually,aboveall,afterall,anyway,anyhow,certainly/surely,indeed,really,especially,inparticular,truly,importantly,mostimportant,obviously,only/just/simply/merely,withoutdoubt/outofquestion13.表示选择的过渡词或短语：either.or.,or,orelse,otherwise14.表示表目的的过渡词或短语：forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto,withthepurposeof,Page12,假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议内容：1.不要灰心，保持良好心态；2.掌握学习方法；3.培养对英语的兴趣爱好。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,建议信写作范例,Page13,第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。高考书面表达是半封闭性的写作，审题十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,第一人称,书信,对英语学习给出建议,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,Page14,第二步：构思-建议信结构及内容要点,三段式：第一段：点明主题：表明写作意图，（有时要简单介绍自己）。第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由（是什么，为什么，怎么样）第三段：总结全文，表明希望,草稿,修改,誊写,审题,Page15,建议信重点,第二段：说明建议的内容；（是什么）提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,Page16,适当运用模板,DearLiHua,Ivereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的问题.Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,youdbetter_,because_.Thirdly,youdbetter_.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_.Whatsmore,_.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,Page18,DearLiHua,Ivereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.Whatsmore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,范文,Page19,其他模板,Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_./Iknowthat_from_.Backgroundsandproblems,（1）,Page21,Hereareafewsuggestions/Hereissomeadvicethat/on_.First,itisimportantto_.Then/Second/Also,_.Besides/Inaddition/Furthermore,itshouldbeagoodideato_.Iamsurethat/Ihopethat_.Suggestions,thanksandhope,Page22,Thanksforyourconsideration.Imlookingforwardto/Lookingforwardto_.Yours,_,Signature,Page23,Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).Imsure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Yourssincerely,LiHua,（2）,Page24,Dear_,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto.,andIlltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:First,.Ifyoudothis,.Second,.Thisway,.Andlast,.Bydoingthis,.IhopeyoullfindtheseideasusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXX,（3）,Page25,写作训练1假设你是的李华，下面是你校英语报第一期第二版的主要内容。请你给编辑写一封信，对该版内容发表评论并提出改进建议。版面主要内容：体育新闻、学习方法、疑难问答等。,注意：词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Page26,Deareditor,IwasgladtoreadourEnglishnewspaper,especiallySectionBeditedbyyou.AsfarasIknow,mostofthestudentsarefondofthissectionbecauseitprovidesuswithalotofnewsbothfromtheschoolandaroundtheworld.Whatsmore,itgivesussportsnews,aswellastipsonhowtostudy.Myfavoritepart,though,isAskandAnswer,sinceourquestionscanbeansweredbyteachersintime.Italsohelpsuscommunicatewithourteachersandschoolmates,whichisofgreathelptoourgrowth.,范文,Page27,Despitethegoodithasdonetous,Iwouldstillliketomakesomesuggestions.Thesectionwouldattractmorereadersifyouweretoaddmoreentertainmentcontents,suchashunorousstoriesorjokeswhichwouldmakeitmorelovelyandinteresting.ImlookingforwardtoreadingmoreinterestingstoriesinourEnglishnewspapers.Yours,LiHua,Page28,写作训练2假设你是的李华，最近你发现学校里的浪费现象非常严重。请给英语读写园地（EnglishReadingandWritingSpace)的编辑投稿反映该现象，并提出自己的建议。注意：,词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：美德virtue;提倡advocate,Page29,Deareditors,IamLiHua,astudentinclassOne,GradeOne._Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,Lihua,Page30,Deareditors,IamLiHua,astudentinClassOne,GradeOne.Recently,Ihavefoundthatthewasteonourcampusisgettingserious,suchasthewasteofwater,foodandelectricalenergy.,范文,Page31,Facedwiththesephenomena（现象）,Ireallyfeelworried.SohereissomeadviceIhopewillhelp.EnglishReadingandWritingSpaceisagoodmediumtoadvocate（倡议）thatsavingisatraditionalvirtue.,Page32,Sowouldyoupublishmoreinstructivearticlesonthistopicfirst?Then,someactivitiessuchasholdingdebatesorseeingmoviesaboutthephenomenonwillhelpstudentsgetawareoftheharmofwastingandrealizetheimportanceofsaving.Doyouagreewithme?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,Page33,假设你是学生李华，你的英国朋友Tom目前正在努力学习汉语，但在学习中遇到了一些困难，因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样才能学好汉语。请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件：1感谢他之前对你英语学习的建议和帮助；2介绍汉语语言的特点以及学习汉语的方法；3邀请他暑假期间来中国，交流语言学习经验。注意：1词数：100左右;2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,写作训练3,Page34,DearTom,Imsogladtoreceiveyourlastletter.IcantthankyouenoughforyouradviceandhelpinmyEnglishstudy,duetowhichIvemadegreatprogressinlearningEnglish.,Page35,Asforyourlanguagestudy,ImconcernedtoknowthatyouarefacingsomedifficultieswhenstudyingChinese.Imwillingtoofferyousomehelp.Asyouknow,Chineseissoflexiblethatyouneedtopayattentiontothedifferentmeaningsofawordorphraseindifferentsituations.Besides,itisdifficultforforeignerstowriteChinesecharacters,especiallyforthebeginners.SoIadviseyoutolearnsomeoralChinesefirst.ThenyoumaybegintotrywritingsomesimpleChinesecharacters.Finally,thereisonepointforyoutoremember:practicemakesperfect.,Page36,AnothersuggestionisthatyoushouldexperiencethenativeChineselanguageenvironmentinperson.HowaboutcomingtoChinaduringthesummerholiday?Wecantalkaboutourexperienceinlanguagelearningwitheachother.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua,Page37,精华点评,建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯,使对方容易接受。很多学生习惯使用祈使句或者Youshould的句型表示建议,这样比较生硬，因此应转换不同的句型使语言丰富,如使用youshould.,youhadbetter.,remembertodo等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候,可以用简明扼要的句型,如wishyougoodluck/wishyousuccess/mayyousucceed,使文章长短句结合得当。,Page38,附：请求信模板,Dear_,Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto_(请求的内容)Thereasonfor_isthat_(给出原因).I_,soI_(给出细节)Iwouldalsoliketorequest_(提出进一步的要求).IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhavean