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Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwebroughtwithus.Delightedandexcited,Mompersuadedustosetupourtentinaparkthatnight.Themoonwasheldupabovethesky,shininghersmoothandcharmingmoonlight.Twinklestarsblinking,fragrantbreezegentlystrokedmyhead.Socomfortablewerewethatwefellasleepsoon.Thenextday,Dadbroughtustothecarandaskedmetoclearallthethingsaway.Notlongafterwecamebacktothecar,Momarrived,thenwecontinuedourtrip.Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Iwasstillrecallingthesplendidscenerywhenwewereinthelivingroomofmygrandparents.Davidnarratedourexperience,eyesblazingwithenthusiasm.Worrycametohisforeheadwhenheexplainedthetrouble.Sadnessappearedonhisface,whenhetalkedaboutthehomelessmanwemet.Asmileliftedthecornerofhismouthwhenitcametocamping.SuddenlyMomshoutedoutinastrangevoice.Hauntedbyastrongsenseoffear,IheardMomscreaming,Iforgotthetent!,11,24,1,ContinuationWritingwithemotions,2,delighted使某人高兴的是toonesdelightjoy突然笑了burstintolaughterburstoutlaughingbewildwithjoy欣喜若狂_,Ihaveachancetogiveyoualesson.,excited,toonesgreatexcitementHetoldthestorywithexcitement.Hisfacelitupwithexcitement.脸因兴奋而发光Seeingmyfavoritestar,Iletoutascreamofexcitement.发出兴奋的尖叫声SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldnthelpcrying.,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures(accumulation)细腻的情感描写丰满人物（积累）,happyjoyful,Tomygreatdelightandexcitement,3,cry,无声抽泣,呜呜呜,cry,weep,sob,sadupset,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures(accumulation)细腻的情感描写丰满人物（积累）,4,Tearsrolledstreameddownherface.Tearsofexcitementandreliefstreameddownherface.Tearswelledupinhereyes.Tearscloudedhereyes.,Trytotranslatethefollowing“cry”:,泪如雨下,泪如泉涌,泪眼模糊,喜极而泣,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures(accumulation)细腻的情感描写丰满人物（积累）,5,nervousI_(充满)anxiety.Agreatsenseofanxietyfloodedoverme.Awaveofanxietysweptovermeflashedacrossmymind.Mylegswere_andmindwas_.afraidWhenIsawasnake,I_.(吓死了)Myfaceturned_.Iwasrootedtothegroundwithterror.吓得呆若木鸡。,wasfilledconsumedwith,(涌上),(闪过),trembling,blank,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures(accumulation)细腻的情感描写丰满人物（积累）,(席卷),pale,席卷涌上闪过,wasscaredtodeath,worriedanxious,frightenedscared,6,介词+情感性名词做状语Davidnarratedourexperience,eyesblazingwithenthusiasmHetoldusthegoodnews_.(excitement)_(delight),Ihadachancetotravelabroad,experiencingdifferentcultures.2.形容词做状语Excitedanddelighted,wesetupourtentinaparkthatnight._(bewildwithjoy),mothertoldmethatIhadpassedtheexam._(紧张焦虑的),Istoodontheplatformwithmylegstremblingandmindblank.,withexcitement,Tomygreatdelight,Nervousandanxious,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures(application)细腻的情感描写丰满人物（应用）,Wildwithjoy,7,3.So位于句首倒装Socomfortablewerewethatwefellasleepsoon._(我如此紧张)Istoodontheplatformwithmylegstremblingandmindblank._(他如此之累)heleanedagainsthisfriendsshoulderandfellasleep.4.非谓语动词(v-edv-ing)Hauntedbyastrongsenseoffear,IheardMomscreaming,Iforgotthetent!Iwasconsumedwithanxiety.Istoodontheplatformwithmylegstremblingandmindblank.Theteacherletoutascreamofjoy.Theteachertoldusthegoodnews.,Sotiredexhaustedwashethat,SonervouswasIthat,Consumedwithanxiety,Lettingoutascreamofjoy,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures(application)细腻的情感描写丰满人物（应用）,8,5.独立主格结构-名词/代词+非谓语，句子Davidnarratedourexperience,eyesblazingwithenthusiasm.1)Theyhuggedeachothertightly.Tearsofexcitementandreliefstreameddowntheirfaces.Theyhuggedeachothertightly,tearsofexcitementandrelief_downtheirfaces.2)Hetoldushisstory.Hisfacelitupwithexcitement.Hetoldushisstory,hisface_upwithexcitement.3)Inthedark,rainingevening,awaveoffearsweptoverme.Iwasrootedtotheground.Inthedark,rainingevening,awaveoffearsweptoverme,I_totheground.,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures(application)细腻的情感描写丰满人物（应用）,streaming,lighting,rooted,9,the_skythe_sunshinethe_airthe_waterthe_grassthe_flowersthe_cloudsthe_evening,brightblue,dark,raining,limitlessgreen,sweetfragrant,warm,fresh,clean,Tip2Wonderfulscenestoindicatetheemotions(accumulation)精彩的情景描写衬托人物情感（积累）,thundering,10,Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.Adeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerskeptmespellbound.M1U1“AnnesBestFriend”这明亮，晴朗的早上，温暖的阳光，新鲜的空气，芳香的花儿，使我完全沉醉在它们的美中。Thebright,sunnymorning,thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thefragrantflowersheldmeentirelyintheirbeauty.,Tip2Wonderfulscenestoindicatetheemotions(application)精彩的情景描写衬托人物情感（应用）,11,2017年11月高考续写para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwebroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.Atlastwedecidedtocampalongtheriverthroughoutthetownwheretheviewswerecharming.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupourtent,itsuddenlyhithimthatMomagain,hadleftitinthehotel.Speechless,Dadhadtogobacktofetchthemtocontinueourcamping.,EmotionsofMom:,excited,joyful,bewildwithjoy,letoutascreamofexcitement,Herfacelitupwithexcitement.,Polishpara1实践演练,12,1.With_(介词+名),Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.2._(形容词做状语),Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.3.So_(倒装)thatsheinsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.4._(现在分词做状语),Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.5.Herface_(独立主格结构),Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.,ExcitedandjoyfulWildwithjoy,excitement,Lettingoutascreamofexcitement,lightingupwithexcitement,excitedwasMom,Excited,joyful,bewildwithjoy,letoutascreamofexcitement,Herfacelitupwithexcitement.,Polishpara1实践演练,13,Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwebroughtwithus.Excitedandjoyful,Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.Atlastwedecidedtocampalongtheriverthroughoutthetownwheretheviewswerecharming.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupourtent,itsuddenlyhithimthatMomagain,hadleftitinthehotel.Speechless,Dadhadtogobacktofetchthemtocontinueourcamping.,Scene:,The_sky,the_sunshine,the_air,the_water,the_grasskeptus_.,brightblue,warm,fresh,clean,limitlessgreen,spellbound,Polishpara1实践演练,14,Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwebroughtwithus.Excitedandjoyful,Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.Atlastwedecidedtocampalongtheriverthroughoutthetownwheretheviewswerecharming.Thebrightbluesky,thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thecleanwater,thelimitlessgreengrasskeptusspellbound.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupourtent,itsuddenlyhithimthatMomagain,hadleftitinthehotel.Speechless,Dadhadtogobacktofetchthemtocontinueourcamping.,15,TIPSinmind,Tip1Delicateemotionstoportrayfigures细腻的情感描写丰满人物twosteps:Accumulateexpressionsaboutemotions情感的积累2.Applythemtodifferentsentencepatterns情感的应用,Tip2Wonderfulscenestoindicatetheemotions精彩的情景描写衬托人物情感Twosteps:Accumulateexpressionsaboutscenes情景的积累2.Applythemtosentences情景的应用,16,Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild,laughinganddancing.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,shestoodbesideourbeds,kissedusonourfacesandwhisperedthatshelovedus.Wefellasleepsoon.Howsweetandniceshewas!,Polishpara2巩固练习,17,Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,shestoodbesideourbeds,kissedusonourfacesandwhisperedthatshelovedus.Wefellasleepsoon.Howlovingandniceshewas!,Scene:,The_rivers,the_plains,the_mountains,the_valleysheldusentirelyintheir_.,deep,big,high,vast,big,vast,high,deep,charm,18,Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,shestoodbesideourbeds,kissedusonourfacesandwhisperedthatshelovedus.Wefellasleepsoon.Howlovingandniceshewas!,Emotions：,_(形容词),wefellasleepsoon._(过去分词),wefellasleepsoon._(现在分词),wefellasleepsoon.,satisfiedhappy,Satisfiedandhappy,Consumedwithsatisfactionandhappiness,Feelingsatisfiedandhappy,19,Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thebigrivers,thevastplains,thehighmountains,thedeepvalleys