九年级英语新目标书面表达复习课课件.ppt

Welcometoourclass!,Englishwriting,学习如农耕我们如农夫,一份耕耘，一分收获Ifyouplantagoodseedinspring,youwillhaveagoodharvestinautumn.,Howtomakeagoodsentence,一、采用句型转换A、把简单句结合为简单句型例如，用并列连词Heisateacher.Sheisalsoateacher.Notonlyhebutalsosheisateacher.,用状语从句结合Igotupsoearly.Icaughttheearlybus.IgotupsoearlythatIcaughttheearlybus.,二、采用变换句式用It作形式主语TolearnEnglishwellisimportant.ItisimportanttolearnEnglishwell.用倒装句Icanachievemydreamonlythen.OnlythencanIachievemydream.,三、采用固定短语1.Helikesplayingfootball.2.Heisinterestedinplayingfootball.,Step1:审。仔细读题,明确写作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求。具体做法：用笔勾画或写下以上要点。Step2:列。列出写作提纲，不要遗漏要点。具体做法：根据内容用要点词汇和恰当句型整理写作要点。Step3:连。运用正确人称及关联词句连句成文，力求层次清晰，衔接自然Step4:查。通读短文，检查订正。,Howtowriteagoodarticle,?,Yesterday,TonyandAnnawereontheirwayhome.,Keywords:,falldownruneverywhere,Shefelldownandtheapplesraneverywhere.,Keywords:,pickuphelpstandup,TonyhelpedhertostandupandAnnapickeduptheapples.,Keywords:,Annahelpedtheoldwomancarrytheapples.Theyhelpedhertogohome.Theoldwomansaid,“Thanksalot.”,Weneedanoutline(提纲):,talkhappily,walk,carryfalldown,runeverywhere3.help.standup,pickup4.helpcarrygohome,Yesterday,TonyandAnnawereontheirwayhome.Theytalkedhappily.Anoldwomanwalkedinfrontofthem.Shecarriedabasketofapples.Suddenly,theoldwomanfelldownandtheapplesraneverywhere.TonyhelpedhertostandupandAnnapickedtheapplesup.ThenAnnahelpedtheoldwomancarrytheapplesandtheyhelpedhertogohomeTheoldwomanwasverythankful.Howhappytheywere！,邮递员的一天,根据汉语提示，记叙一个邮递员Mr.Smith的一天：7:30起床刷牙洗脸8:15跟家人告别公交车没赶上一天的辛苦工作4:00回家,7:30起床刷牙洗脸8:15跟家人告别公交车没赶上一天的辛苦工作4:00回家,Keywords:,getup,saygoodbye,notcatch/miss,workhard,gohome/returnhome,brush/wash,邮递员的一天,Howmanymistakescanyoufindinthiscomposition?,InaMondaymorning,Mr.Smithgotupatseventhirtyandputuptheclothes.Hewishedhisfaceandbrushedhistooth.Itwasaquerterpasteight.Hesaidgood-byetohiswife.Hedidntcatchthebusbecausethereweremanypeoplesatonthebus.Herantowork,hegavetheletterstothepeoplewhowaitedforthem.Hegoeshomeatfour.Heweretired,buthewashappy.,On,on,washed,teeth,quarter,was,sitting或去掉,and,went,Itwasseventhirtyyesterdaymorning.Mr.Smithgotup.Hewashedhisfaceandbrushedhisteeth.Ateightfifteen,hesaidgoodbyetohisfamily.Thenhewenttothebusstop.Butwhenhegotthere,thebushadgone.Sohehadtowalktothepostoffice.Heworkedveryhard.Atfour,hecamebackhome.,简洁明了型：,Mr.SmithgotupathalfpastsevenonaMondaymorning.Afterbreakfast,hesaidgoodbyetohisfamilyandlefthome.Unluckily,bythetimehearrivedatthebusstop,thebushadalreadygone.Sohehadtowalktothepostofficeandgotletterswhichheshouldsend.Inthedaytime,hewasbusysendinglettersandnewspapersfromhousetohouse.Hedidntretur