如何写出好作文

,书面表达,工整的书写整洁的卷面,美文,严谨的结构正确的格式高级的词汇丰富的句式自然的连接,高分,对程度较好学生的写作能力的提升,开头：开门见山主体：枝繁叶茂结尾：画龙点睛,写作的技巧如何谋篇布局,整体三部分,Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题,1能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改；3能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；4能简单描述人物或事件；5能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明,课标的要求,准确使用大小写、字母和标点符号；能根据要求写简单的短文、书信、日记等；能简单地描述人物或事件；能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；能根据所给图片或表格写出简单的段落，并能表达自己的观点。,（1）人称代词不会用,如:Imschool/weteachers/askthey/helphe等。（2）therebe句型的中国式应用及therebe与have混用:therearealittleweakinEnglish.Therearehavesometreesandflowers.（3）谓语动词错误，如：Teachersveryhardworking./Myclassmatesveryfriendly./Theyworkshard.等。（4）连词不会用，如：Myschoolisverysmallandverygood.（5）句式变化不多、过渡词不会用或用得不恰当。（6）书写不规范、大小写不分、标点不注意。,AnunforgettableexperienceAsanoldsayinggoes:whereisawill,thereisaway.wehavetofacemanydifficultiesinourlife,butifyoutryyourbest,youllsucceed.Letmetellyouastory.ItsarealexperienceofmineandIcantforgetit.whenIwasinGrade7,Iwasnotgoodatmaths.Therefore,Imademymindtoimproveit.Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclassanddidmanyexercises.Ialsogothelpfrommyteacher.Healwaystoldmenottogiveup.Daybyday,Iimprovedmymaths.Whatanunforgettableexperience!ThisexperiencealwaysencouragesmewhenImdownandittellsmethat“Nopains,nogains.”Illrememberthisexperienceforeverandtellmorepeopleaboutmyexperience.,名师点评尽管故事情节较为简单，但是本文还是显示了该考生对文章整体结构的驾控能力，前后呼应的形式使文章有张有弛。长短句的结合使用让人感觉该考生较强的语言运用能力，这也是本文获得高分的一个根本原因。,AnunforgettableexperienceDifferentpeoplehavedifferentexperiences.Everyonehashisunforgettableexperience.SodoI.IcanthelpthinkingofthatmeaningfulcompositioncompetitionwhenIseetheblueshy.IwasnervouswhenIsawthetitle.IbegantoworrybecauseIreallydidntknowwhattowriteabout.Astimepassedby,IrememberedwhattheteachersaidbeforeIenteredit.ThenIsuddenlyhadmorecourageandconfidence.AndwhenIwalkedoutoftheclassroomandsawtheshy,Ifoundhowbeautifulitwas.Icanhardlyforgetthisexperience.ItgavemealotandIalsothankitfromthebottomofmyheart.,名师点评这篇文章给人的感觉是：小作者不仅仅是一个英语成绩突出的初中生，还是一个头脑冷静，有自己思想的优秀学生，这也可以从文章的选材看出。本文突出的特点是正确运用了so的倒装句型、宾语从句和状语从句等复杂句型。另外，用词准确，结构严谨也是短文的亮点。,开头：开门见山,1）Junkfoodisbadforourhealth.2）Ithinkitisunnecessaryformiddleschoolstudentstotakethemobilephonestoschool.3）youaskedmehowtoimproveEnglish,herearesometips.,主体：枝繁叶茂,确定文章所需用的时态。仔细审题，不遗留要点。主题句清楚、支撑句丰富，并能紧扣主题句。Ihopeourschoolwillgiveusmoretimeforsports.Becauseitcankeepushealthy.Whatsmore,itishelpfulforourstudy.注意句子与句子之间的连接，过渡要自然。如果表达类似的意思，尽量用不同的句式，增强句子的表现力。Ilikeplayingbasketball.Ialsoenjoyplayingtennis.Asformovies,actionmoviesaremyfavorite.,用多种句式去表达同一种意思。,Readingisfun.Readingisenjoyable.Readingisapleasure.Readingmakesushappy.Readingoffersusalotoffun.Wecangetgreatfunbyreading(frombooks).Itisenjoyableforustodosomereading.Readingprovidesnotonlyknowledgebutalsofunforus.,平时记忆一些常用的名言警句或俗语。,Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.Knowledgeispower.Allworkandnoplay,makesJackadullboy.Practicemakesperfect!,结尾：画龙点睛,1)可用简短的句子来结束文章，注意与文章主题的呼应，避免照搬前面的原话。2)画龙点睛，最好能对主体有所提升。如对未来的展望、号召正确的做法等。,1.环保：水资源，森林资源，节能减排，低碳出行等。2.对新生事物的评价:手机问题、网络使用，网购，微博，微信等3.与学生学习生活有关的话题：人物、地方介绍，语言学习，人际交往，健康，烦恼，助人为乐，计划梦想等4.关注热点事件和热点人物。是否该帮助摔倒的老人或受伤害的人、食品安全、校车安全、云南旱灾、文明城市等。,七、命题的热点,对于程度不好的学生的提升:,词汇积累（认知词汇量能拼写词汇量能写作用的词汇量写作时使用的高频词汇量）。句式积累写作技巧：切题（准确）-内容（朴实）-句式（简单）-词汇（朴素）-细节（正确）。背诵范文：可以适当背诵几篇范文，及常用例句。,作文微技巧1：“1+n拓展写作法训练例如：Idoexerciseeveryday.,Idoexerciseeverydaybecauseitsgoodformymindandthebody.AndIamverystrong.,拓展练习：1.Ihardlyeverplaycomputergames.2.Ninetypercentofthestudentsuestheinterneteveryday.,Ihardlyeverplaycomputergamesbecauseitsbadformyeyes.AndIalsothinkitwastestime.,msurprisedtofindthatninetypersentofthestudentsusetheInterneteveryday.MaybeitsgoodtorelaxbyusingtheInternet,butIthinkthebestwaytorelaxisthroughexercise.Itsgoodforthemindandthebody.,eg:Mikewantstobeawriterwhenhegrowsup.Heisgoodatwriting.heisgoingtowritemorearticlesandsendhisarticlestomagazines.HeexpectstobeanotherMoYan.,Tinawantstobeasinger.Tomwantstobeateacher.Marywantstobedoctor.Davewantstobeareporter.,作文微技巧2：比较级的巧用（更生动形象具体）,1.Lisa唱得比Sam要好。2.我比大多数孩子要安静和严肃。3.他和我一样内向。4.Peter学习不如Tom努力。,LisasingsbetterthanSam.,Iamguieterandmoreseriousthanmostofthekids.,Heisasshyasme.,PeterstudiesnotashardasTom.,作文微技巧3：学会审题和列提纲,审题申什么？1.本文的写作的目的是什么？2.写作的内容是什么？3.本文的时态和字数。,作文微技巧4：用不同句式表达,表达个人喜好：love,like,dontming,dontlike,cantstand,preferto,enjoy,befondof.表达计划与安排：hopeto,planto,wantto,expecttodo,bereadytodo.lookfarwardtodoing.,句式练习：I_TheVoiceofChinabecause_I_soapoperasbecause_I_newsbecause_,改写：1.IlikewatchingthenewsbecauseIhopetofindoutwhatsgoingonaroundtheworld.(oneofthemainreasonisthat.)2.Annadidlotsofthings.Forexample,shefedsomehensandmilkedthecows.(suchas),3.Thetalkshowisalittlemoresuccessfulthanthegameshow.(notso.as)4.Allthechildrenliketheblackmouse.ithastwolargeroundears.(with)5.Ms.ClarksaidwealldidwellintheEnglishtext.(doagoodjob),作文微技巧5：用；连词来连接句子,连词：because/however,but,so,sothat,1.Iwillmeetlotsofinterestingpeople.Iwanttohavemorefriends.,2.Myapartmentmaybetoosmall.Itwillbenogoodforpets.,3.Kidswontgotoschool.theyllstudyathomeoncomputers.,4.Theenviromentwillbeingreatdanger.Everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingtheearth.,5.Citieswillbemorecrowedandpolluted.Moreandmorepeoplewillhavetomovetootherplanets.Weneverknowwhatwillhappeninthefuture.Atsomepoint,thingswillbecomebetter.,作文微技巧6：用wh-questions充实写作内容。,用好课文中的好句子：1.Problemsandworriesarenormalinlife.2.Unlesswetalktosomeone,we;llcertainlyfeelworse.3.Iwillalwaysremem