2014中考英语作文突破指导.ppt

中考书面表达突破,新乡市一中,1听力句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,五、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。,满分作文标准：,第一档：（1513分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）,六、如何列提纲：例1：利弊型作文Microblog的利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternetmoreandmorepopularPara2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,sharewith;Last,expressviewsfree,money-freePara3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftimeaffectstudy;Ontheotherhand,notsafestolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.,七、如何列提纲：例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排Para1:（综述）graduatefrom,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;Secondly,visittouristattractions;Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureIllhaveameaningfulholiday.(Imlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Icantwaittoenjoymysummervocation.),八、常见的作文类型模板：,1书信,Dear.,Imgladtoreceiveyourletter-Bestwishes!Yours,Lucy,a书信开头常用语,Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?ImwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowtoImwritingtoaskifyoucan.Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.Thankyouforinvitingmeto.,b书信结尾常用语,Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.,二、口头通知常见写作模板：呼语及开场白部分：Ladiesandgentlemen,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.正文部分：Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequiredtoattendit.Pleasetakeyournotebooksandmakenotes.Pleaselistencarefullyandwellhaveadiscussioningroups.Pleasecomeontimeanddontbelate.结束语部分：Pleasecomeandjoininit.Everybodyiswelcometoattendit.Ihopeyoullhaveanicetimehere.Thatsall.Thankyou.,八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：,2图表、数字比例型,（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）MoststudentsthinkWhile20%ofthemchooseto.Another15believeTherearealsosomesayingthat（表达个人看法）Asastudent,Iagreeto,3说明利弊型,Nowadaysisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1Besides,优点2However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1Ontheotherhand,缺点2Inmyopinion,个人观点,4不同观点型,Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Somebelieve正方观点.First,原因1Besides,原因2Whileothersdontagree.Theythink反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1Ontheotherhand,原因2Asforme,个人观点,5解决问题型,Recently,theproblemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.shoulddosomethingtosolveit.Firstly,方法1Secondly,方法2Finally,方法3Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto,thewillbecomebetterandbetter.,九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheendthen/next/afterthatwhen/while/assoonas/notuntilatthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToonessurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyinaword/inall,议论文常用连接词表示并列：eitheror;neithernor;bothand;notonlybutalso;表示递进的：besides;whatsmore;whatsworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for;becauseof;thanksto;(forthereasonthat);表示结果的：so;asaresult;sothat;therefore;表示目的的：sothat;inorderthat;(inorder)to;for;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;preferto;wouldratherdothando;,议论文常用连接词表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas;like;thatistosay表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;befondof;beinterestedin;showgreatinterestin;loseoneselfin;putonesheartinto;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todoSb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.Itsimportant/necessary/useful/useless/common(forsb.)tovItsnice/kindofsb.tov.Itstimeforsb.todosth.ItsawasteoftimetoItsyears/dayssincesb.+vedItsgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingItsapitythatItsanhonorto,十、作文万能句式Im/WerenotallowedtoImafraidofmakingmistakesTherebedoingGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinsthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthatItseems(im)possibletovItissaidthatAsthesayinggoes,and.aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetweenand,十、作文万能句式IhavemadeupmymindtoIamsurethatIamnotsurewhether/ifIwouldrather.thanItdoesntmatterifThankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.,十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learnfrombeproudof/takeprideinplayanimportant/activepart/roleinagreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withoneshelp(反义：withoutoneshelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.payattentiontotakegoodcareofmakefriendswithgeton/alongwellwith,十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesbygraduatefromlookingbacktothepastthreeyears,（用现在完成时态）passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeuponesmindtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon,十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（将来）/infuture（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguphavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth.have(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followonesadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasicskillsberequiredtodoasksb.forhelpcantwaittodo,十一、作文万能短语besupposedtodoencouragesb.tododeal/dowithworkout/solvetheproblemsallsorts/kindsofathomeandabroadoneofbefulloflearnsth.byoneselfcomeupwithgoodideasbesurprisedatsth.(todosth.)inordertokeephealthy/fitagoodwaytov,十一、作文万能短语keep(on)tryingworryabout/beworriedaboutinonesspare/freetimebekind/friendlytobestrictwithhelpotherssaythankyoutohavefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtimeplentyof+C/Uworryabout/beworriedaboutasksb.forhelp/turntosb.forhelp/callsb.forhelpbepopularwithsharesth.withsb.knowlittle/muchabout,十一、作文万能短语do/tryonesbesttovbe/feelsorryforhelpsb.(to)dosth./withsth.in/duringclassbefore/afterclassteachsb.todosth.,*词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于100词。不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。,四、Languageerrorsinwriting纠错,.be多余或缺少,ImenjoystudyingEnglish.Itbadforourhealth.,IenjoystudyingEnglish.,Itisbadforourhealth.,2.时态错误,Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.,Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.,IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.,Myfavoritesportisrun.Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.,Myfavoritesportisrunning.,Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.,3.非谓语动词错误,Ilikedosports.IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.,IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.,Ilikedoingsports.,4.副词位置错误,Iverythankher.Iverylikefootball.,Ithankherverymuch.,Ilikefootballverymuch.,5.代词错误,Theyaregoodforusbody.Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.,Theyaregoodforourbody.,IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.,6.缺介词或介词错误,IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.,IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.,Heevencametomyhometohelpme.,Ilikeitbecauseitsexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.IhaveevergivedupEnglish.,(单词错误),(动词P.P.错误),Ilikeitbecauseitsexcitingandgoodformyhealth.,IhaveevergivenupEnglish.,7.其他错误,Itsgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.,Itsgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.,Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.,（缺主语）,（句型错误）,Letspractise.,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.,2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.,climbed,tired,unforgettable,somebody,3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.,Spelling（拼写）,（others),Friday,4.Icantforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.,Icantforgetthatdaybecause,5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.,!,Capitalletter（大小写）,Punctuation（标点符号）,6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.,remember,7.Ithoughtitishungry.,was,8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.,tidies,9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!,thing,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,Tense（时态）,Verbagreement(主谓一致),Wordform(词形）,10.Inmyfathershelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.,Withmyfathershelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,.,Tocutalongstoryshort,12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.,bybus,13.Mymothertoldmedontgiveitup.,toldmenottogiveitup,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,Phrases(短语和固定搭配）,14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.,sawanoldladylying,16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.,playedwith,15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.,listeningto,17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.,wereall,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,Missingwords（漏词）,18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.,with,thehouse,19.Itistiredwork.,tiring,Wordsorder（词序）,Usingwrongword（选词错误）,22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.,carefully,21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.,IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.,Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.,ChineseEnglish（中式英语）,Inmylife,manythingshappened.,20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.,Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuondtfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.,ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.,Checkandcorrectthisarticle.,alotofthingshappened.,helping,I,wereshopping,crying,happenedto,couldnt,find,help,her,find,.,They,couldalso,so,1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯,CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting,五、整洁性,1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。3字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。,4规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写,以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；,六、实战训练,Pre-writing1.审：,2.定：,“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字作文,记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历正文：教学特色尾段：作者的评价,befashionable,lovestudents,andcareaboutthestudents,belivelyandinteresting,getonwellwith,bepopularwith,Writing:3.列打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎,MyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.Sheisveryfashionable.Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!,Writing4.连：连词成句，连句成篇,复写Rewriting：5、美润色丰富要点；,6、改查错改错,7、抄修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。,WritingMyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.Sheisveryfashionable.Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!,homework,请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数100词左右。内容要点如下：1谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，2在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，3对学生要求严格，4深爱学生。5谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。6你的感受及愿望。参考词语：1.graduatefromauniversity,大学毕业2.bestrictwith,对严格3.theWenchuanearthquake,汶川地震4.collapse,坍塌5.deeds,事迹,三段式：首段：正文：结尾：,谭老师的个人简介,谭老师的英雄事迹,作者的感受和愿望,列出7个内容要点：1）外表严肃；2）对学生要求严格；3）深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；6）感受；7）愿望。,Helooksserious.,Hesstrictwithhisstudents.,Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.,Hewasgivinglessonsatthatmoment.,Whentheteachingbuildingcallapsed,heprotectedfourstudentswithhisbod