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-,1,-,2,rear-ending追尾,runofftheroad,crashintotree,crashintohouse,turnover,Trafficaccidentsaredangerous.,-,3,Reasons:,SpeedingTireddrivingDrunkdrivingCarelessdrivingUsingcellphoneswhiledriving.,?,-,4,Topic:Usingcellphoneswhiledriving,1.Itsadangerousdistractiontodrivers.,2.Itshouldbeforbidden.,Para2:Argument(论点)1,Para3:Argument(论点)2,Para4:,Suggestion,Para5:,Conclusion,Tip1:Structureisaguidetofindthemainpoints,Para1:Viewpoint(观点),-,5,Para1Cellphonesareusedeverywhere,butontheroadtheyareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,afact,aviewpoint,Para1:Viewpoint,Tip2:Theviewpointofanargumentativewriting（议论文）shouldbeincludedinasummary.,-,6,Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,Mainpointsofthesummary,-,7,1.Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers.,Para2:Argument(论据)1,usinga,notusinga,onthephone,ontheroad,unpredictable,careful,Itsdangerous.,Itssafe.,Driversusingaphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusing.,Drivers,Attention,Driving,Result,(Support),-,8,Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.,Mainpointsofthesummary,-,9,Para3:Argument(论据)2,2.Cellphonesusedontheroadshouldbeforbidden.,atleast1,000deathsperyear,againstthelawandstrictlyenforced,lawsareneedtoforbidtheuseofcellphonesincars,Anexample：,phonesusedbydrivers,drunkdriving,Similarly,（Support),-,10,Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.,Mainpointsofthesummary,Point3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.,-,11,Q1：Beforeusingacellphone,whatquestionshoulddriversaskthemselves?,Para4:Suggestion,Suggestion1：,Suggestion2：,Isthiscallreallythatimportant?,Yes.,No.,Driversneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.,Useaphonewisely,Notuseaphone,（Support),-,12,Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.,Mainpointsofthesummary,Point3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.,Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.,-,13,Para5Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.AsprofessionalracerJohnAndrettisays,“Drivingsafelyisyourfirstresponsibility.”Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.,Para5:Conclusion,aquote(引语),Tip3:Aquoteisusuallyusedtosupportanideaandshouldbenotincludedinasummary.,-,14,Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.,Mainpointsofthesummary,Point3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.,Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.,Point5：Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.,-,15,1.Cellphonesusedontheroaddangerouslydistractthedriversandshouldbebanned.,Skills:1.词性转换法2.近义替换法3.正话反说法4.语态互换法5.句式变化法,Skillsofrestatement(重述):“Point1”asanexample,Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,2.Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingdangerouslydrawawaydriversattentionandshouldnotbeallowed.,3.Weshouldforbidusingcellphonesontheroadfortheirharmfuldistractiontodrivers.,4.Driversshouldbepreventedfromusingcellphoneswhiledrivingbecausetheycanbedangerouslydistracted.,并列句,复合句,简单句,6.主语变身法,-,16,Haveatry:workingroupsof4tocreateagoodsummary,Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.,Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.,Point3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.,Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.,Point5：Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.,-,17,2.Nodetailsin4080words,1.Coverthemainpointsusingyourownwords,4.Nogrammaticalmistakes,5.Nopersonalopinion,3.Usetransitionalwordsifpossible,Learntousethechecklist:4C+1O,-,18,Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingcandistractthedriversandshouldbebaned.Drivershaveahigherrateofaccidentswhenusephones.Accidentsaredanger,whichincluderunningoffaroadandcrashingintotrees,fences.Justlikedrunkdriving,lawsareneededtorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Driversshouldusephoneswithgreaterresponsibilityforsafe.Inconclusion,cellphonesareimportantinemergenciesandshouldbeusedwisely.Afterall,weonlyhaveonelifeatall.(89words),copyoriginalwords,Toensuresafedriving,drivershadbetternotusethem.,unnecessarydetails,nopersonalidea,Beforelawsarepassed,Revisetheversionwrittenbyoneofmystudents.,-,19,Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingdistractsdriversandshouldbebanned.Drivershaveahigherrateofaccidentswhenusingphones.Justlikedrunkdriving,lawsareneededtoforbiddriversfromtal