高中英语建议信课件.ppt

Persuasivewriting,-Aletterofsuggestion,Whatisagoodwritingpassage(group1)1.beautifulsentences2.correctgrammarstructures3.logicalwriting4.nicehandwriting,Agoodpieceofwriting,Excellence（优良性）,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,Coherence(连贯性）,Accuracy（准确性）,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,准确无误地表达作者意图覆盖要求的所有要点单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误,Aletterofsuggestion(group2)practicalwriting(应用文).fourelements:Salutation(称呼),mainbody(正文),ending(结束语)andsignature(签名).tense:present/futurethreeparagraphsFirstPara.IntentionSecondPara.suggestions/reasonsThirdPara.ending,Usually-usedexpressions(group3)首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。Iamwritingtoexpressmyideasconcerning.Iamwritingtosuggestthat.(虚拟)主体：提出建议并阐述理由。IfIwereyou,Iwould.Itseemstomethatyoucouldalso.OntheonehandOntheotherhand结尾：希望收信人接受建议。Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.,Practice(group4)假如你是第一中学二年级的学生李华，你校就要不要在学校内开办艺术画廊征求全校师生建议，请你给校委员会写一封信，给出自己的建议及理由，内容包括：1.建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；2.画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。有用词汇：平台Platform开阔眼界broadenoneshorizons丰富enrich,Para1.你是第一中学二年级的学生李华,建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；,Para2.画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。有用词汇：平台Platform开阔眼界broadenoneshorizons丰富enrich,Para3希望建议被采纳、落款,DearCommitteemembers,ImLiHua,oneofgradetwostudentsinNO.1middleschool.Imwritingtosuggestthatweshouldopenanartgallerytodisplaystudentsownworks.Thereasonsareasfollows.First,theartgallerycanprovideaplatformforusstudentstoshowourselves,whichhelpstoimprovestudentsself-confidenceaswellascommunicationskills.Second,Itcanalsohelptobroadenstudentshorizons.Third,itisagoodwaytoenrichschoolcultureaswell.Thanksforre