高日作业指导

WritingFundamentals,EnglishinDailyLife,Agenda,ThefirstassignmentThesecondassignment,Thedeadline,高级日常英语作业01(第1-4单元)高级日常英语作业02(朗读题),MyRoutineTrip,Instructions:FollowingtheexampleinUnit4,Activity6,Task2,writeabriefaccount(120-150words)describingyourroutinetriptoaworkplaceortoastudyplace.,p.189,NowIstudyattheuniversity,whichisinthetowncentre.Myhomeisontheoutskirtsofthetown,aboutoneandahalfmilesfromtheuniversity.ThereisaregularbusservicebetweenthetwobutIprefertowalkwhentheweathersfine.Itisapleasantwalk,downhillalltheway!IttakesmeaboutfortyminutesandIspendthetimeenjoyingthepeaceandquietoftheearlymorningandthinkingaboutthedayahead.Ipassalovelyoldchurchonthewayandhavetocrosstheriver.Sometimes,ifIhavetime,Istoptochattooneortwopeopleontheway.Ifitisraining,Ihavetotakethebus.Thebusjourneyitselfisquickbutitsalongwalkfrommyhousetothebusstopandthenfromthebusstoptotheuniversity.Soitisactuallyquickertodothewholejourneyonfoot!Itischeapertoo.Thebuscosts54pence,whichisquiteexpensiveforsuchashortdistance,Somehelpfulwords,Subway/underground地铁Taxi/bus/bike/bicycle/motorbikehitchhiking搭便车Long-distancebus长途客车Regularbus班车Shuttlebus往返巴士,Markingcriteria,本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，三部分分值相加即为作文的总分。,语言,50分用词巧妙，词汇丰富，表达手法灵活多变，写作技巧精湛，明显超出普通水平。语法结构严谨。40分用词正确，能灵活运用多种表达手法，偶有选词错误。语法结构一般。30分（及格）用词能力稍差，表达手法单一，选词有较明显错误。语法结构需较多改进。20分用词较差，表达手法单一。文中时用汉语词汇或拼音。选词有明显错误。语法结构急需改进。,Example1,Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.,Example1,Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.,Example2,Iwalkedjoyfullyalongthepaththatwaslitupbythegoldenraysofthemorningsun.Beautifulflowersofmanycolorswereblooming.Howfragranttheysmelled!Littlebirdsweresinginginthetrees,asifgreetingme“goodmorning!goodmorning!”.myheartwasburstingwithhappiness.我愉快的走在小路上，金色的朝阳洒满大地，盛开的花朵五彩缤纷，香气袭人，小鸟在树上歌唱，好像在向我道早安，我幸福的心花怒放,MainDifferencesbetweenEnglishandChinese,1.narrationanddescriptioninChineseseemtobeabitmoreornateor“flowery”thaninEnglish,2.ChineseandEnglish-speakingpeopleseemtolookdifferentlyontheuseofsetphrasesandexpressions.GoodEnglishwritingencouragesoriginalityanddiscourages“clichs”e.g.千方百计，七嘴八舌，三令五申ascoldasacucumber,3.English-speakingwriterstendtobelessmilitantintoneandlanguagethanmostChinese.Theideaisto“letthefactsspeakforthemselves”.,4TheyhavedifferentmeaningsofwordsRead读书cook做饭drive开车XLetsgoandeatourmealsXHesangsongsattheconcertXIdontsmokecigarettesordrinkwine.,5TheyhavedifferentwordformationsSuffix:er:work-workerwrite-writer员:教员,学员,演员ly：beautifully,greatly,wonderfully地:完美地,高兴地,匆忙地,6Theydifferingrammar:Numberofnounse.g.Onebook,twobooks一本书,两本书们:人们,同志们,朋友们X猴子们,书们X三个人们,7TheydifferinTenseandaspect:Work,worked,willwork(现在)工作,(过去)工作,(将来)工作progressive:正在Theyarehavinglunch。perfect:已经,7Theyhavedifferentwordorders毛主席ChairmanMao劳动模范Modelworker东北Northeast衣食住Food,clothing,andhousing,6)Useofverb我有点累了Iamabittired他的眼睛是蓝的Hehasblueeyes.,8Differentwaysofthinkingandassociationofthoughtanddifferentculturalbackground.Youhavemysympathy.我很同情你(x你有我的同情)他老婆跑了.Hiswifeabandonedhim.(XHiswiferanaway.),Exercise:够意思!不过我的意思你还是收下,不要不好意思.Howkindyouare!ButIinsistthatyoushouldreceiveit.Dontfeelembarrassed.,Wrap-up,本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，,注意汉英差异,内容,40分文章内容切题，内容充实，思维新颖见解独到，思想水平卓越。篇幅适当，行文流畅，有较强的可读性和趣味性。28文章基本切题，但思想表达能力有限，立意不清。篇幅较短。句子结构一般，有时意思模糊，理解较困难。可读性及趣味性较弱24文章大致切题。篇幅不够，句子结构较差,Example1,Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.,结构,9/10分文章语篇结构清晰，能够自如使用连接词连接上下文，语篇逻辑关系清晰6分文章语篇结构基本清晰，能够使用一些连接词连接上下文，语篇逻辑关系基本清晰；,Contents,CapitalisationCommavs.periodConnectingsentencesand,so,but,alsoLayoutofEnglishpassagesIndentationFull-block,CAPITALISATION-1,AReportontheTrips“Howwasyourtrip?”Iasked.Hesaid,“MytriptoYunnanwasinteresting.”“MytriptoMountTai,”shesaid,“wasrathertiring.”Iasked,“Really?Thatsfunny.”,CAPITALISATION-2,Firstwordsofsentences(sentencefragments)KeywordsintitlesNouns,verbs,adjectives,adverbs,longprepositionsPrepositionsPropernamesPeoplePlaces(stars,continents,countries,cities,streets)LanguagesHolidaysReligionsTitles(Mr.,Ms.,President,Sir,etc.),CONNECTINGSENTENCES,and,but,so,oralso,asaresult,thereforeWhen,before,after,CONNECTINGSENTENCES,Irealisenowthattheboyslovedme.Iwaslittle.Ioftenfeltlonelyandleftout.Theywerealwayshavingfuntogether.Iwastoosmalltoplaywiththem.IsupposeIwasquiteindependent.,CONNECTINGSENTENCES,Irealisenowthattheboyslovedme,butwhenIwaslittleIoftenfeltlonelyandleftout.Theywerealwayshavingfuntogether,butIwastoosmalltoplaywiththem.Asaresult,IsupposeIwasquiteindependent,PunctuationIthinkyoucanItstoofarfromBeiwai,andIthinkyoucan,Punctuation&BasicSentenceStructures,Mybrotherlikeseeingfilms.Themanandherdaughterishere.Itisearlyinthemorning.Igotupbeforemyparentsand,Agreement,COMMAvs.PERIOD,Maria是北京外国语大学的新生，她今年19岁，来自英国。MariaisanewstudentatBFSU.Sheis19andisfromBritain.,LAYOUTOFPASSAGES,Indentedstyle,Fullblockstyle,IworkatasoftwarecompanythatislocatednearFuXingmen,Xichengdistrict.MyhomeisinHai-dianDistrict,itsabout12kilometrefrommyworkplace.Therearemanywaystowentfrommyhometomyoffice.Ittakesalmostonehourbybustogettomyworkplacefrommyhome.Althoughitislongjourney,Thetransportisconvenient.Therearethreedirectbusservice.No716,No732andNo723withair-condition,thefeeofNo716isverycheap,only1Yuan,butNo732orNo723are2to3Yuans.Icanalsochoosetotakethesubwaytosavetime,butitmoreexpensiveandIneedtotakebustogettothesubwaystation.ItakesubwayonlywhenIgotuplate.Itspendsmeabout45minuteand6Yuan.Themostexpensivewaytogotoworkistaxi.Itsreallyexpensive,butnotsavememuchtimeactually.Italwayscostover20Yuanbecauseofthetraffic,soIseldomgettoworkbytaxi.IftheweatherisfineandIamfullofenergy,Iprefertogotoworkbybike.Onmywaytotheworkplace,Ipassmanyuniversity,theNationalLibrary,thePurpleBambooParkandDiaoyuTai.Itisalsoagoodformofphysicalexercisesforme,too.,Canyouimproveit?,IworkatasoftwarecompanythatislocatednearFuxingmen,XichengDistrict.,Therearemanywaystogofrommyhometomyoffice.Ittakesalmostone,732andNo723withair-conditioning.ThefeeofNo716isverycheap,only1,subwaytosavetime,butitwillbemoreexpensiveandIneedtotakeabusto,about45minutesand6Yuan.Themostexpensivewaytogotoworkisbytaxi.,Itsreallyexpensive,butnotsavingmemuchtimeactually.Italwayscostsover20Yuanbecauseofthetraffic,soIseldomgettoworkbytaxi.Iftheweatheris,fineandIamfullofenergy,Iprefertogotoworkbybike.Onmywaytotheworkplace,Ipassmanyuniversities,theNationalLibrary,thePurpleBambooParkandDiaoyutai.Itisalsoagoodformofphysicalexerciseforme,too.,MyhomeisinHaidianDistrict,about12kilometresfrommyworkplace.,Yuan,butNo732orNo723are2to3Yuan.Icanalsochoosetotakethe,gettothesubwaystation.ItakethesubwayonlywhenIgetuplate.Ittakesme,hourbybustogettomyworkplacefrommyhome.Althoughitisalongjourney,thetransportisconvenient.TherearethreedirectbusservicesNo716,No,Agenda,ThefirstassignmentThesecondassignment,Readthefollowingtext,imitatingtheassignmentrecording.Pleaserecordyourownreadinganduploadittotheplatform.IwasluckyenoughtofindaveryniceplacetoliveinsoonafterIarrived.Therentsonly45poundsaweek,plusmyshareofthebills.Itsaroominaflatinahigh-riseblock.Therearethreeothertenantsandthoughweeachhaveourownrooms,wesharethesittingr