英语中考高频写作话题复习简单句PPT课件

.,1,中考高频写作话题复习,2012.3,.,2,1.主系表e.g.Iamastudent.2.主谓e.g.Iranfast.3.主谓宾e.g.Iloveplayingchess.4.主谓宾补e.g.Wekeepourclassroomclean5.主谓双宾e.g.Iwillgiveyousomeadvice.,简单句：,.,3,*therebe句型e.g.Therearesomeadvantages.*形式主语句型e.g.Itsimportanttohaveenoughsleep.*动名词作主语：e.g.Readingbooksinthesunisbadforoureyes.,善用简单句：,.,4,1.善用定语*e.g.Beijingisoneoftheliveliestcities2.善用状语e.g.Bytakingnotes,youcanconcentratemoreinclass.e.g.Inthepastfewmonths,mylifehaschangedalot.,简单句+定语+状语,.,5,1.并列e.g.IamamiddleschoolstudentandIstudyinNo.1MiddleSchool.2.转折e.g.IworkhardatEnglishbutmyEnglishisnotgoodenough.3.因果e.g.HeisgoodatEnglishsoIoftenaskhimforhelp.,并列句,.,6,并列*Enjoyit,andyoullliveahappylife.2.转折*Someagreewithitwhileothersdont.3.因果*Ilovereading,forIcanlearnalotwithoutexperiencinghard.,善用并列句,.,7,主从复合句：（一）简单句+状语从句,1.时间when，notuntil，assoonas2.条件if，unless(除非)，aslongas(只要)3.原因because4.目的sothat,inorderthat(inordertodo)5.结果sothat(tootodo)6.比较asas，notsoas，than7.让步though，although，eventhough，evenif,nomatterwhat/when/where/who/which/how,.,8,（二）主句+宾语从句：*e.g.Ithink/believethatheishelpful.*e.g.IhopeIcanbeavolunteersomeday.*e.g.Iunderstandwhyyouareworried.,（三）主句+定语从句：*e.g.IlovemusicthatIcandanceto.*e.g.MyparentsarethepeoplewhoIlovemost.*e.g.Iloveplaceswherethepeoplearefriendly.,.,9,1.表文章结构顺序：firstofall,firstly/first,secondly/second,next,andthen,finally,intheend,atlast,thelastbutnottheleast,2.表并列补充关系：whatismore,besides,moreover,inaddition,furthermore，3.表转折对比关系：however，onthecontrary，but,afterall,although/though,inspiteof+n/doing,foronething,foranother,ononehandontheotherhand,while4.表因果关系：because,as,so,thus,therefore,asaresult5.表换一种方式表达：inotherwords,thatis,6.表举例说明：forexample/forinstance,suchas+n./doing7.表陈述事实：infact,actually,8.表达自己观点：asfarasIknow，inmyopinion,inmypointofview9.表总结：inall,inshort,inaword,inconclusion,insummary,常用连接词：,.,10,五.写作训练的具体流程,根据话题，分类汇总教材知识根据例文，分部细化写作过程根据话题，分子话题补充例文,.,11,一、环保提建议话题,.,12,第1段：Beginning:引入话题（环境正变得恶劣）+过渡句第2？段：Body:分层展开顺序连接词+建议句型(我们)+合理建议+评论最后1段：Ending：总结自己的观点+号召记住加入好句子提升文章水平：Itseemsthatifwetryourbestto.itcannotonlybutalso,sothat,itsourdutyto，定语从句等复杂句,中文模板：,.,13,第1段：beginning:Asweallknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse引入.Itsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Wemustdosomethingtopreventpeoplefrompollutingtheenvironment过渡句.,英文模板：,.,14,第25段：body:Firstofall,建议weshouldsothat目的Besides,inorderto目的,wearesupposedto.insteadof建议,Whatsmore,toreducethepollution,目的wedbetter建议Inaddition,建议itsimportantforustoOnlyinthiswaycanwe目的Lastbutnottheleastimportant,dontforgettotomake.目的,英文模板：,.,15,1.交通方式(自己、告诉他人)Inordertoreducetheairpollution,1)weshouldeitherwalkortakethebustoschool.2)wearesupposedtotellourparentstoridebikesortakethesubwayasmuchaspossible.2.水(节水方法)Tomakethelimitedwaterlastlong,1)wedbetterturnoffthetapsorshowerswhilewearewashinghairorbrushingteeth.2)itsgoodtosavewaterbyreusingtheusedwatertoflushthetoilet冲厕所.,环保建议素材(6大项),.,16,3.电(节电方法)DontforgettoturnofflightsandTVswhenweleavetheroomsothatwecansavetheenergy目的.4.纸Inordertomakefulluseofpaper,1)itsnecessaryforustocollectusedpaperandbooksandrecyclethem.2)weneedtousebothsidesofit.,环保建议素材,.,17,5.购物袋Toreducethewhitepollution,wearesupposedtotakeourownbagsinsteadofplasticbagswhenwegoshopping.6.植树造林Wedbetterplanttreesasmanyaspossibleinsteadofcuttingthemdown.Onlyinthiswaycanwemaketheworldgreenandtheairfresh目的.,环保建议素材,.,18,最后1段：Ending:Asaresult/Allinall/Inaword,itstimeforustoraisepeoplesenvironmentalawarenessandtakeactions.Themorebeautifultheworldis,thehappierliveswewillhave./Lowercarbon,happierlife(低碳话题用这句).,英文模板：,.,19,Firstofall,weshouldeitherwalkortakethebustoschoolasmuchaspossiblesothatwecanreducetheairpollution.Besides,inordertomakefulluseofpaper,wearesupposedtonotonlyrecycletheusedpaperandbooksbutalsousebothsidesofit.Whatsmore,toreducethewhitepollution,wedbettertakeourownbagsinsteadofplasticbagswhenwegoshopping.Inaddition,itsimportantforustoplanttreesasmanyaspossibleinsteadofcuttingthemdown.Onlyinthiswaycanwemaketheworldgreenandtheairfresh.Lastbutnottheleastimportant,dontforgettoturnoffthelightsandtapswhenwedontusethemtomakethelimitedenergylastaslongaspossible.,.,20,相关例题一、节约资源,保护环境.从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生,请以“MyLow-carbonLife”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。二、6月5日(June5)是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。假如你是学生Peter，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛。要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题13方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例13方面进行说明，字数80,一、环保话题,.,21,二、难忘的/感动的/感激的（校园生活/人),.,22,特点：1、事离不开人、人离不开事（既是写人也是叙事）2、选材内容必须积极向上，发自真心。3、混合时态：描述过去我现在感受对于我今后的启迪4、“难忘”与“最令我感动”话题相似，素材可通用，只需要变换关键词。unforgettable难忘的moving感人的grateful感激的,相关考题分析,.,23,相关考题：知恩、感恩是人类的美德。父母、老师、朋友和同学都会是你的感恩对象。请你写一篇短文，表达感激之情，介绍他（她）或者他们对你的帮助，如何使你感动的，以及你的感受。要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词。,相关考题分析,.,24,读题目要求：1、“父母、老师、朋友和同学都会是你的感恩对象”从上面列举的人物中选一个来写一般现在时2、“表达感激之情，介绍他（她）或者他们对你的帮助,以及你的感受”叙事文体一般过去时,审题确定写作内容,.,25,第1段：beginning:引入话题（身边很多人都帮助过你以及你对他们的感激之情）+过渡句（引出其中最令你感动的人物）第2段：body:叙事手法描述与该人物有关的让你感动的某一件或某几件事。时态：一般过去时注意：选择事件时，突出“感动”，紧扣主题，详略得当第3段：ending:总结全文：由“感动”“感谢”给我今后的启迪,Outline提纲,.,26,第一段：Therearemanypeopleinmylifewhohelpedorarehelpingmenow.Ifeelgratefultothem引入话题.Withouttheirhelp,Icantimaginehowmylifewillbelike感激.Amongthem,IshouldgivemyspecialthankstoMissWang,myEnglishteacher,whohelpsalotwithmyEnglish(定语从句).过渡句,Sample范文,.,27,第二段：IrememberthefirstdaywhenIcametotheschoolasamiddleschoolstudent.Iwasbothshyandshortatthattime.Everythingwasnewtome.Whatsmore,myEnglishwasratherpoor.IhadtroublelearningEnglish.Ididntdaretospeakortoanswerthequestionsinclass.IdidntknowhowtolearnEnglish.InordertohelpmewithmyEnglish,MissWangnotonlyencouragedmetobebraveandactiveinclassbutalsotoldmemanyusefulwaystolearnEnglish.Withhergreathelp,IchangedalotandbecamemoreinterestedandconfidentinEnglish.ItriedmybesttostudyEnglishsothatIwouldntletherdown.Inthisway,myEnglishbecamebetterandbetter.,范文,.,28,第三段：Thankyou,MissWang.Thanksalot感激.Iwilllearnfromyouandbecomeabothcaringandhelpfulpersonlikeyou启迪.,Sample范文,.,29,三、志愿者话题,.,30,1、敬老院（老人）visittheoldpeopleshome;1)notonlysingsongsbutalsoperformaplayforthemtomakethemhappy.2)helptheoldpeopledosomecleaningandwashingsothatwecanmaketheoldpeopleshomecleanandtidy.2、公共场所（公园、公交车站）1)cleanupthecityparks2)assistpeopletostandinlinewhilewaitingforthecomingbus,志愿者活动素材,.,31,3、儿童医院（患病儿童）visittheChildrensHospitalgivethemsometoysandtellfunnystoriestothemtocheerthemup4、孤儿院(orphanage孤儿院/orphan孤儿)visittheorphanagehaveabirthdaypartywiththeorphanssothattheycanfeelthecareandlovefromotherpeoplewhoareliketheirfamily.5、志愿者宣传（演讲、报告）giveaspeechtoothersandaskmorepeopletojoinus,志愿者活动素材,.,32,考题特点：1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时+一般现在时相关考题：上周日，你所在的志愿者小组参加了社区的志愿者活。请你描述你们所有的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的认识。,相关考题分析,1,.,33,第1段Beginning:引入话题+过渡句（一般现在时）第2段Body:描述上周日你们志愿小组的活动（一般过去时）过渡句+顺序连接词+活动第3段Ending:总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）提升+好句子,Outline,.,34,Imamemberofavolunteergroup.Asavolunteer,Ialwaystrymybesttohelpothers.LastSunday,ourvolunteergrouptookpartinthevolunteerworkinaneighborhood.Firstofall,wehelpedcleanuptheyard.Afterthat,wewenttoalocalhospitaltovisitthesickkids.Whatsmore,wevisitedanoldpeopleshomeandsangsongsforsomelovelyoldpeopletomakethemhappy.Finally,wegaveaspeechtochildrensothatwecouldaskthemtojoinus.Weallthoughtweputourtimetogooduse.Ononehand,beingavolunteerisgreat.Itsagoodexperienceforus.Ontheotherhand,itcannotonlydevelopourinterestsbutalsoimproveourabilityandsocialskills.Letsbeavolunteertoday!,范文,.,35,考题特点：1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时+一般现在时相关考题：暑假要到了，你所在的志愿者小组要参加社区的志愿者活。请你描述你们要做的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的认识。,相关考题分析,2,.,36,第1段Beginning:引入话题+过渡句（一般现在时）第2段Body:介绍暑假你们志愿小组的打算（一般将来时）过渡句+顺序连接词+愿望打算句型+活动愿望句型：1.sbwilldo2.sbbegoingtodo3.sbplantodo4.sbwanttodo第3段Ending:总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）提升+好句子,Outline,.,37,Imamemberofavolunteergroup.Asavolunteer,Ialwaystrymybesttohelpothers.Thissummerholiday,ourvolunteergroupwilltakepartinthevolunteerworkinaneighborhood.Firstofall,wewillhelpcleanuptheyard.Afterthat,wewantgotoalocalhospitaltovisitthesickkids.Whatsmore,weplantovisitanoldpeopleshomeandsingsongsforsomelovelyoldpeopletomakethemhappy.Finally,wearegoingtogiveaspeechtochildrensothatwecanaskthemtojoinus.Weallbelievewewillputourtimetogooduse.Ononehand,beingavolunteerisgreat.Itsagoodexperienceforus.Ontheotherhand,itcannotonlydevelopourinterestsbutalsoimproveourabilityandsocialskills.Letsbeavolunteertoday!,范文,.,38,考题特点：1、内容积极向上、有意义（结合志愿者）2、混合时态：一般过去时+一般将来时+一般现在时相关考题：假设你是初三1的王林，你想要参加社区的志愿者小组。给他们写一封自荐信，介绍你平时的志愿者活动，并谈谈你对志愿者活动的认识。,相关考题分析,3,.,39,第1段Beginning:自我介绍+过渡句（一般现在时）Body:第2段介绍暑假平时的志愿者活动（一般现在时）过渡句+顺序连接词+活动第3段:总结+你对志愿者的认识（一般现在时）第4段Ending:表达你希望被接收的迫切愿望提升+好句子,Outline,.,40,DearChairman,IamastudentfromClass1,Grade3.Idliketobeamemberofthevolunteergroup自我介绍.IlikehelpingothersandIalwaysdosomethinghelpfulinmysparetime.Forexample,Ihelpcleanuptheyardandgotoalocalhospitaltovisitthesickkids.Whatsmore,Ioftenvisitanoldpeopleshomeandsingsongsforsomelovelyoldpeopletomakethemhappy.Besides,Isometimesgiveaspeechtochildrenwithmyclassmatessothatwecanaskthemtojoinus.Weallthinkweputourtimetogoodusebydoingvolunteerwork.Ononehand,beingavolunteerisgreat.Itsagoodexperienceforus.Ontheotherhand,itcannotonlydevelopourinterestsbutalsoimproveourabilityandsocialskills.IwillbegladifIcanbecomeamemberofyourgroup.Iamlookingforwardtoyouranswer.Yourssincerely,WangLin,.,41,四、回信建议劝告,.,42,1.Whynot(do)2.Whydontyou(do)3.Youdbetter(do)4.Youshould/can/could/need(do)5.How/Whataboutdoing?6.Wouldyouminddoing7.Youaresupposedto(do)8.IfIwereyou,Iwould(do)9.doingishelpful.10.Itshelpfulforyouto(do)11.Itsagoodideaforyouto(do),提建议句型总结：,.,43,作文修改对照评价表,convincing,coherent/logical,.,44,Finally,youdbetterunderstandyourparents.,Firstofall,youcanaskteachersforhelp.,Second,youcantakeexercise.Inmyopinion,takingexercisecanmakeyouenergeticsothaty