高考英语写作指导

高考英语写作指导,welcome,Everysecondcounts!,火眼金睛,Whichoneisbetter?Why?,Shealwayssingswhiledoingherwork.Shealwayssingswhenshedoesherwork.,Aftereverythingwasfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.Witheverythingfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.,Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.Studyhard,andyouwillmakerapidprogress.,（状从省略）,(with复合结构),(祈使句+and),1.,2.,3.,(A),(B),(A),(A),(B),(B),Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,IpassedtheEnglishexambecauseofyourhelp.IwouldnthavepassedtheEnglishexambutforyourhelp.,(名词性从句）,（虚拟语气）,4.,5.,(A),(A),(B),(B),1.词组优先原则,原文Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.修正Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.,2.地道原则,原文Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.修正Throughtraveling,Igainedobtainedalotofknowledge.,写作中遵循的四项原则,4、后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇。原词替换词,3、避免重复原则,原文Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.修正Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.,hardverypayattentiontohappymoreandmore,diligentlyratherextremelyattachimportancetodelightedenjoyabletheincreasingnumberof,Correction,Hisfeverishigh.,Hehasahighfever.,Thepriceofthecomputerisexpensive.,Thepriceofthecomputerishigh.,ThepopulationofChinaismany.,ThepopulationofChinaislarge.,Therewereforeignerscametoourschool.,Therewereforeignerswhocametoourschool.,IcantimaginewhatlifewouldbelikeifhavenotanyTVsets.,IcantimaginewhatlifewouldbelikeifwehavenotanyTVsets.,Heclosedthedoorandhurriesawaytoclass.,Heclosedthedoorandhurriedawaytoclass.,very：,pretty,much,quite,greatly,highly,extremely,important：,vital,critical,essential,influential,meaningful,significant,think:,believe,argue,assume,reckon,figure,pointout,holdtheviewthat,like:,enjoy,befondof,beinfavorof,prefer.,first/second/third:,第一：Tostart/beginwith,ononehand,initially；第二：Furthermore,inaddition,besides,ontheotherhand,followingthis,moreover,next;第三：Lastbutnotleast;then,thus,consequently;,and/but:,notonlybutalso,aswellas,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,onthecontrary,inmyopinion:,personally,asfarasIamconcerned,astome,frommypointofview,frommyperspective,people,persons,individuals,characters,folks,good,positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,bad,dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,Thing:,affair,business,matter,helpful,beneficialrewarding,encourage,motivate,thank,appreciate,beinterestedin,becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto,tryonesbesttodo,sparenoeffortstodo,1.Icoulddonothingbutwaithere.Ihadnochoice/option/alternativebuttowaithere.,Letsbeautifythesesentences!,2.Hiscarelessnesswasthecauseoftheaccident.Hiscarelessnesscontributedtotheaccident.Hiscarelessnessaccountedfortheaccident.Hiscarelessnesswasresponsiblefortheaccident.Hiscarelessnessledtotheaccident.Hiscarelessnessresultedintheaccident.,beveryimportantbevaluablebenefitsb.beingbuiltrealize,beofgreatimportancebeofvaluebeofbenefittosb.=bebeneficialtosb.beingconstructed=beunderconstructionbeawareof=beconsciousof,一、肯定不如双否好,二、陈述不如倒装妙,三、主动不如被动巧,四、从句不如分词傲,要强化“语法、修辞”两个概念,四个“不如”,一、肯定不如双否好,Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.,IcouldnthavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.,1.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.2.Sopreciousistimethatwecantaffordtowasteit.3.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.,二、陈述不如倒装妙,NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.,Ihaveneverseensuchawonderfulfilm.,1.否定词开头：,Notuntil/till5pm.didhecomehereyesterday.,Itwasnotuntil/till5pm.thathecamehereyesterday.,Hedidntcomehereuntil5pm.yesterday.,Onthetopofhillstandsanoldtemple.Intheskyhanglittlestars.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary.,2.地点状语开头,Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.,3.Only+介词短语：,OnlyinthiswaycanIimprovemyEnglish.,Onlybytakingexercisescanwekeephealthy.,4.形容词+as+主语+be动词：,YoungasIam,Icanmanageit.,Badlyinjuredashewas,hemanagedtotakedownthecarsnumber.,Childasheis,heknowsalot.Tryashemay,hecantcatchupwiththem.MuchasIhavetraveled,IhaventseenascapableasJohn.,三、主动不如被动巧,Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.,Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.,几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.改成独立主格或分词结构将是