初三英语作文讲解

强化训练与阶段练习五书面表达评分原则：1本题总分为15分，按各档次给分2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，最后在本档次内酌情给分。给分范围和要求：第一档(优)：(13-15分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。 准确使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。逻辑性极强，语意连贯，过渡自然，句式多样（3个以上复合句）和词汇丰富（短语随处可见），内容充实感人。无任何语言或拼写错误。（8-12行）第二档(良)：(8-12分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。 恰当地使用了较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句问连接成分，较好地达到了交际的目的。第三档(中)：(4-7分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。第四档(差)：(0-3分) 未完成试题规定的任务。漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。 内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。写好英语作文要注意的原则：结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals every day! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong XQ is! I hope to be him one day!要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。英文写作-重要句式与句型1. 写信开头语非常感谢你的来信。 Thank you very much for your letter.多谢你的来信 Thanks a lot for your letter.我很高兴收到你的来信 Glad to hear from you. Im very happy to receive your letter.这些天好吗？ How are you these days?我今天写信，想了解 Im writing to ask about现写信告诉你有关 Im writing to tell you something about很高兴告诉你一些关于 Im glad to tell you about2. 表达自己的观点、意见让我给你一些建议 Let me give you some advice这里是给你的一些建议 Here is some advice for you现在我和乐意与你分享我的见解 Now Id like to share my view with you有很多方法来帮助你 There are many ways to help you我想告诉你许多学生都拥有和你一样的问题 I want to tell you that many students have the same problem like yours.我的第一个建议是你应该 My first advice is that you should我的第二个建议是你做 My second advice is to do .我认为 I think 我认为 不 I dont think 如：I dont think you are right.我相信 I believe (that)我相信，我肯定 Im sure (that)如: Im sure Ill work hard at school and try my best to be a good student.按照我的看法 in my opinion我同意他 I agree with him.3. 表达建议的一些句型你应该 You should (shouldnt)你可以 You can你需要 You need你最好 You had better你为什么不 Why dont you 做是一个好主意 Its a good idea to做是很重要的 Its important for you to.对你的是很好的 Its good for your(做)怎么样？ How/ what about试图做 try to / not to do别忘记 dont forget to 记得做 remember to我想每一个人都应该. I think everyone should如：你在空闲时间里你最好多读一些有趣的书籍和多做运动You had better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time.4. 有用、常用的好句型某处有 There is /was/are /were对于某人做某事很重要 Its important/good for sb to do sth我如此地喜欢以至于我. I like so much that I5. 常用词组努力学习 work / study hard如: he studies hard and does well in every subject.在做得好 do well in/ be good at在做的不好 be weak in尽力去做 do ones best/ try ones best下定决心 make up ones mind与相处得好 get on well with (sb)向学习 learn from sb学到很多 learn a lot感到有信心 feel confident in对很感激 be very thankful to如: Her mother was very thankful to the policeman.鼓励某人做某事 encourage sb to do sth不仅而且 not only . but also担心. Worry about取得很大进步 make great progress如：I have made great progess in my study.在某人的帮助下 with sbs help帮助某人做某事 help sb do sth帮助某在某事上 help sb with sth向某人表示感谢 say thank to sb尽可能 as as possible有好多乐趣 have a lot of fun对有好处/害 do good/ harm to例如 such as积极参加 take an active part in以这种方式 in this way长大 grow up在网上得到 get on line6. 过渡词表示时间顺序的：then 然后, soon 很快, now 现在, afterward 以后, later 然后表示程序、动作过程的：first 第一, second 第二, firstly , first of all 首先, next 接下来, at first 起初, at last 最终表示递进的：whats more 并且, what is worse 更糟糕的是, in addition 另外, besides 并且, even 甚至表示解释和说明：for example 例如, actually 事实上, believe it or not不管你信不信, to tell you the truth 告诉你实话, that is (to say) 那就是说, according to this 根据这些, for this reason 因为这些理由表示对比、比较：just like正如、就像, more or less 或多或少, on the other hand 另一方面, sooner or later 迟早, on the contrary相反的表示总结关系的：in a word, in short简单句的五种基本句型1. + （主谓）He cooks. They are drinking.2. +（主系表）He is happy.They are drinking tea.3. + （主谓宾）She made cakes.They feel tired.4. +（主谓间宾直宾）She passed him the ball.He gave her some advice.5. +（主谓宾宾补）We keep the table clean.He made us laugh.范文：1根据中文和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文，所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。74.生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法现在，某英文报纸就分享（Sharing）话题征文，请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。提示词语：sharewith;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confidentI had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas, problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.范文：2根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结为已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。文段表达75. 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生爱丽丝的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。Hi! Liu Ming, Im so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, Im afraid she wont pay me back. I dont know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours,AliceHi！Alice , Im glad to hear from you Yes, I sometimes have the same problem I think if she really needs the money，youd better lend it to herYou dont need to worry too muchShell probably pay you back when she has moneyIf you dont lend her the money，Im afraid you may lose the friend I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each otherSo when my friends need money，I will try my best to help themMaybe Ill get it back，or maybe I wont I hope what I said can help you Yours， Liu Ming强化训练与阶段练习五十个词汇专练1. bear v. n. 2. beat v. 3. beyondprep. 4. businessn. 5. cheat v. n. 6. coachn. 7. co