四级写作视频直播课――周思成

四级写作考前冲刺,周思成,Jun3,么么哒,BasicTips,1.开门红，很重要,BasicTips,1.开门红，很重要,提前半小时到考场，熟悉周边，解决可能意外,字数：150-180数行数,2.多读Directions,莫会错意,Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.,Directions:Youreallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedswithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.Ivedoneithundredsoftime.”Youdwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.,分清：哪里是主题，哪里是要件；若有不会词：联系语境和尝试，大胆猜测；,要件是展开主题的一部分，不能少，但也不能是全部！,格式,传统式：空两格，段间不空行,高大上：顶格写，段间空一行,标题,若书写处上方有粗黑体印刷标题，则无需再写；,若无：可把Directions中要求你描述图表后的句子当成标题。,YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexplainwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.,最可能考的题型：图画作文！,图画作文：三段,描述图表说主旨的原因分析重述主旨/解决方案,A.描述图画,方法一：若题目中说只让你描述图画的，则直白描述图画加引入中心,Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.,第一句：如图所示+图中的场景、大体事件,Asisdepictedinthecartoon,+主体在干嘛（+时间、地点，若有的话）,depict：vt.描绘,Asisdepictedinthecartoon,afatherandhissonarehavingadialogue.,可现在、可过去，但是要一致。,Asisdepictedinthecartoon,ateacheristeachingherpupilstosolvesomefundamentalmathproblems.,注意人称，不要变性！,第二句：具体对话内容or动作,基础弱保底形：,Aasks/says:“。”Then,Breplies：“。”,Adoubts：“。”Then,Bseems*/does*。,可以照搬图中对话原文或略做改动。,要分清是谁问、是谁答,Thesonasks：“Dad,.waste.”Then,hisfatherreplies：“Ifyouanything!”,略作提升：加点修饰（形容词或副词）,Thesonsaysgloomily：“”Then,hisfatherrepliespatiently:“”,Onestudentdoubts:”.Then,theteacherseemsratherembarrassed.,高手版,完全改写+间接引语,Aexpressesseriousconcernsabout/forThenBsmiles/looksembarrassed,(andrepliesAbytellinghim/herto.),Thelittleboyexpressesseriousconcernsaboutthewaypeopledisposeofthenuclearwaste.Thenhisfathersmilesandreplieshimbytellinghimtodosomesmallthingsfirst,suchascleaningthedustbin.,第三句话中心,文章想要呼吁的事情or我们忽略了的重要事情,Apparently,thecartoonistaimstodeliverthemessasgethat+题目拓展成一句话,Apparently,thecartoonistaimstodeliverthemessasgethatinordertoaccomplishbigtasksinthefuture,wearesupposedtostartwithsmallmatters.,好的提倡和呼吁为主题，都可以用：inorderto.wearesupposedto,我们忽略了重要的事情,Apparently,thecartoonistaimstorevealthefactthat主体hasbeenneglectedbynumerouspeople.,Apparently,thecartoonistaimstorevealthefactthatlearningbasicskillsandknowledgehasbeenneglectedbynumerouspeople.,方法二：若题目中让你描述一个现象（而非直接说描述图画），则,主题的改写引入+一两句话描写图画+中心,YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexplainwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.,ItisundeniablethateveryareainourlifehasbeenmagicallychangedbytheInternet,especiallythewaywecommunicate.,Itisundeniablethat+现实,一般就虚幻地写我们的生活因为什么而改变了、便利了云云。,第二句话描述图表,大同小异：主体在干吗or说的话or反应,Asisdepictedinthecartoon,amanandhiswifearetalkingwiththeirsonviaacomputer,whojustlivesupstairs.,宾语若有特点，可以用定语从句。,定语从句要注意主谓一致！,第三句话跟第一种写法相似,Apparently,thecartoonistaimstorevealthefactthattheface-to-facecommunicationhasbeenneglectedbynumerouspeopleduetothepoweroftheInternet.,第二段主题展开段,方法一：关于图画的结论+两、三个原因,如：中心句：互联网能/不能取代面对面交流。原因一：互联网无法传递真正的感情和想法，面对面交流更真实。原因二：人是社会的动物，我们要通过直接的、互动的交流获得知识、关心和进步。,超级重要提示：如果一段最后一句已经是结论，二段第一句话则是对它的改写（换词、说法）,如一段最后：Apparently,thecartoonistaimstodeliverthemessasgethatinordertoaccomplishbigtasksinthefuture,wearesupposedtostartwithsmallmatters.,二段开头：Doingsmallthingsisofgreatsignificanceforfuturebigandmoredifficultmissions.,也可以是万能开头：,Therearetwo/threemajorreasonswhichcansupportthisstatement.Tobeginwith,Moreover,原因的思考方式：,从个人到社会,从物质到精神,一个事物的双方,基本句型思路,1.事实/推理。Therefore，分结论。,2.分结论because原因,3.If假设，will该假设的结果,4.事实或结论，which+推理或可能的结果,5.Although题中那样也有好/坏，可事实是我的看法更好。,TheInternetwillneverreplacetheface-to-facecommunication.Firstly,wecannotcatchthetruefeelingsofpeoplethroughthenetbecausewhatweseemightbetheicywords.Moreover,notallofourfriendsandfamilyareconnectedtothenetanytime.Therefore,thecommunicationviathenetcouldbelesseffectivethantalkingface-to-face.Further,ifsomeonealwaysstaysinfrontofacomputer,ahugewasteofhisorhertimewillbecaused.Besides,althoughtheInternetcanbehelpfulandefficientonsomeoccasions,face-to-facechattingismoreenjoyableandcanhelpfosterandenhancethefriendshipandrelationshipbetweenus.,Therearetwo/threemajorreasonswhichcansupportthisstatement.Tobeginwith,everypersonhasratherlimitedknowledgeandabilityinthebeginning.Therefore,theyareunabletodealwithdifficultthingsatthattime.Moreover,doingsmallthingscanhelpustoaccumulateexperienceswhicharenecessaryforustoreducethechancesofmakingmistakes.Further,ifwecanmanagetodosmallthingswell,wewillacquirealotofvirtues,suchaspatienceandpersisitence,whichareextraordinarilyusefulinbothourworkandourlife.,方法二：关于图画的结论/中心的改写+随便一个原因或结论+例子,Acompellingexampleconcernssb.,who,引出例子的好句子：,Icanthinkofseveralexamplesinsupportofthispoint.Forinstance,.,事实例子可以包含三句话,人事物的原貌发展结果和现状,前两句话用过去时，最后一句过去、完成时。,第一句：人事物最初、小时候、十年前是怎样的。,第二句：然后，TA做了一件跟主题有关的事情。,第三句：后来/现在，TA变得更好or更坏了。,Acompellingexampleconcernsmyself,whousedtobeanover-ambitiousboy.WhenIwaslittle,Idreamedofvariousbigthings,fromwinningNobelPrizetobecominganOlympicChampion.Then,Icameacrossaseriesoffailuresandsetbacksduetothelackofrelevantknowledgeandexperiences.Oneday,Ireadabooknamed,andIsuddelyrealizedthatIneededtomakepreparationsformydreamsbyfinishingsmalltasksbecausesmallstepswouldbuildatallladdertomydreams.Sincethen,Istartedtoaccumulatebasicknowledgeandacquireexperiencesthrougheverytaskconfrontingme.Gladly,nowIhaveachievedsmallsuccessamongmypeergroupandgetclosertomydreams.,第三段总结/建议段,第一句：重述观点,第二句：,偏褒的文章：总结两优点（+展望未来*）,偏贬的文章：提出两建议（+展望未来*）,星号部分对于有余力、有时间多的同学可选,重述观点的句型：,1.Toconclude,A（核心名词）isadv.+adj.,absolutelyirreplaceable.,enormouslyimportant.,exceedinglynecessary.,重述观点的句型：,2.Fromthecaseabove,wecandrawaconclusionthatA(主题）hasbeguntoplayanegativeroleinour/caused/givenriseto+坏事。,划线处对应的是举例型的第二段。和前一个句型可以组合。,总结两优点/缺点+展望未来,Notonlydoesit.butitalso.,*Ihopethat.willsothat.+好的结果,Toconclude,face-to-facecommunicationisabsolutelyirreplaceable.Notonlydoesittrulybringuscloser,butitalsoreducesmisunderstandingsandtroublescausedbythecommunicationviatheInternet.IhopethatIcanspendmoretimewithmyfamilyandfriendssothatwecanalwaysfeelthegenuinecareandwarmthfromeachother.,双建议句型+展望未来,Inorderto.,weought(not)to.Moreimportantly,itishightimethatX（另一措施主体）did(如tookimmediatemeasures,suchas.）,Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblemefficiently/makesth.better.,Fromthecaseabove,wecandrawaconclusionthattheInternethasbeguntoplayanegativeroleinourcommunica