高三二轮复习英语写作课件

,书面表达,CompositionWriting,Whatmakesagoodcomposition?,Agoodcompositionisusuallymadeupofaintroductionparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconclusionparagraph.,IntroductionparagraphSupportingParagraph1BodySupportingParagraph2.Conclusionparagraph,Introduction(topic),Body(supportingparagraphs),Conclusion,Whatmakesagoodparagraph?,Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.,Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall,topicsentence,Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.,Topicsentence:_,justlikeagarden.,Ourschoolis,justlikeagarden.,Ourschoolis,Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.,IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,正确使用有关连接词,时间先后：,first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile,转折关系：,but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless,因果关系：,because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat,让步关系：,though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat,递进关系：,whatsmore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehandontheotherhand,条件关系：,if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat,表列举：,forexample/instance,takeforexample,thatstosay,inotherwords,asfollows,表总结：,inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated,Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.,Summary:,Agoodcompositionisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconclusionparagraph.,Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.,Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.,Agoodparagraphisonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.,Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife_,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._,theywanttowinothersadmirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool._,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!,thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnotleastD.whatsmoreE.asfarasIamconcernedF.Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。,Howtowriteagoodcomposition,Canyoulisttheoutlineofthewriting?,Theoutlineofthewriting:,Conclusionparagraph:,Introductionparagraph:,Keywords:1.introduction:高三学生（senior3students）春游(gospringouting）讨论（discussion）2.body:接触自然（beclosetonature）呼吸新鲜空气（breathesomefreshair）精神放松（relaxthemselves）大脑休息（resttheirbrains）高考临近（withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear）没心情玩（dontfeellikegoing）耽误学习(wastethetime)3.conclusion:inmyopinion,身体差inapoorstateofhealth充足的睡眠enoughsleep加强锻炼，增加户外活动takemoreexerciseanddomoreoutdooractivities定时吃饭少吃零食havethreemealsregularly,eatlessnon-staplefood.讲卫生Form/developthehabitofhygiene,主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性,Howwillyoustartyoupassage?问句：从句：Introduction:（sample）WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.,巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系,Payspecialattentiontothetransitionsentences:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowardsPeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.,Thebodypart,Point1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.,Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,Eg:Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair,Reason2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进whatsmore；besides;moreover;inaddition；furthermoreEg:theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.,Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。,Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.,Point2:的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）Sentencepattern:However,othersprefertoSomeothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Ontheotherhand.Eg:Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.,Reason1:高考临近，没有心情玩Eg:Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydontfeellikegoinganywhere.,Reason2:春游耽误学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies,Conclusionparagraph提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.InmyopinionBisbetterthanA.Thereisnodoubtthat.2.IsupportA.Thereasongoesasfollows.3.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetothelatter.First.Second.Finally.4.Itislikelythatpeoplewillgoonarguingoverthesequestions.Ithinkthateverythinghasbothitspositiveandnegativesides.Weshouldkeepanopenmind.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminfavourofgoingspringout.Itnotonlyhelpsthemreleasethepressureofstudy,butalsoenrichestheirknowledgeandexperiences,WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhatsmore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythin