大学英语四级辅导(写作)

大学英语四级辅导写作,林胜强lsqdavid,大学英语四级的重要性,自身能力的提高考研找工作公务员,考试流程,8：50-9：00试音时间9：00-9：10播放考场指令，发放作文考卷9：10取下耳机，开始作文考试9：35发放含有快速阅读的试题册(但9：40才允许开始做)9：40-9：55做快速阅读9：55-10：00收答题卡一(即作文和快速阅读)9：55-10：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试10：00开始听力考试，电台开始放音听力结束后完成剩余考项。11：20全部考试结束。,考试题型,写作：30分钟，107分（15%）快速阅读15分钟，71分（10%）听力35分钟249分（35%）仔细阅读（包括选词填空和篇章阅读）25分钟，179分（25%）完型填空15分钟，71分（10%）翻译5分钟，35分（5%）,新四级题型分析报告新四级源于老四级又有别于老四级，具体而言，两者的区别主要在以下几个方面可以体现。第一、评分体制不同。老四级满分为100分，及格分为60分；而新四级满分为710分，最低分数为290分，及格分数线425分。这是一种表面的变化，无非是把原来的分数放大了7.1倍，但是这个评分体制的影响却是积极的。因为以前在100分制时，60至85之间均发合格证，看不出成绩的高低，不能完全体现考生水平，更不能体现考生听力、阅读、写作等方面的分项能力。现在710分制下，成绩单将会分项计分，听力、阅读、综合和写作的成绩都将具体给出，这可以明显反映考生英语水平具体的情况，是口头能力强还是笔头能力强等。,第二、考查手段有异。具体说来是指题型有了变化。比如，听力部分，原来的题型是短对话以及短文或复合式听力二选一，而现在新四级复合式听力成为必考，此外又增加了长对话（这种题型来源于托福考试的传统题型）。又如，阅读以前只考篇章阅读理解，即考四篇文章，每篇文章后面有五个题目；现在阅读分为快速阅读，选词填空，以及两篇和老四级一样的篇章阅读理解（其中，快速阅读占10，仔细阅读占25）。再如，综合部分，原来是或简答或翻译或完型三选一，而现在是两个二选一的题型，即改错和完型二选一，简答和翻译二选一。而且翻译老四级是英译汉，新四级是汉译英。最后，新老四级的一个重大区别是新四级将没有词汇与结构部分。两者不变的是四级的写作部分。对发生变动的各个题型作一个综合分析，可以看出新四级更加侧重主观题的考查，考生需要写的部分更多了。比如，听力部分的复合式听力部分，快速阅读的最后三个题目，改错部分等等。,三、考查程序不一。老四级的考试程序是：听力阅读词汇与结构或完型或翻译或简答三选一题型写作；而新四级的考试程序有了变化：写作快速阅读听力仔细阅读（包括选词填空和篇章阅读）完型和改错二选一翻译和简答二选一。考试程序的变化对考生应试心理的要求不同，对考试过程中时间调配的方法亦不尽相同。比如，老四级可以把词汇题的时间压缩一点，把阅读题的时间增加一点；而现在如果要增加第四部分阅读理解的时间，只能牺牲一点综合题的时间了，时间融通的难度有所加大。又如，老四级考试把写作部分设置在最后，考生可以借用或牺牲前面一些难题的时间（在实际操作中，很多情况下卷一和卷二会在开始就一起发给考生），而新四级却把写作放在开头，而且等30分钟过去后，才发快速阅读的材料，这样对写作速度就有了更加严格的要求。,第四、考查重点有变。新四级把听力部分的分数比重从20%上升到35%，而阅读部分的比重由40%下降到35%。这一变化可以说四级考试把听和读的能力放在不分伯仲的地位。另外，新四级加入了快速阅读，信息含量大大增加。综合讲，新四级提高了“听的能力和读的速度”，这体现现代社会不仅需要大量的信息阅览，而且还需要实际的口头交流，交流的前提是听懂对方的语言。新的时事促进改革，改革体现新的时事。信息大爆炸的社会，需要你更快更准的摄取你所需的资料，国际化的时代，需要你熟练地与外交流。新四级的改革多多少少还是反应了这些社会大背景。虽然，新四级题型等的改变就像“多米诺骨牌”，会产生一系列连锁反应，比如复习重点的不同、解题方法的不同等等，但是新四级并不是完全孤立与老四级，两者之间还是有密切联系。这种联系，就是破解新四级的法宝。比如，快速阅读的解题方法就是老四级中细节题的方法，即先看题干再看原文，根据题干的中心话题在原文中找答案。更何况，新四级的大部分题目的考试形式和老四级是一样的。所以，新老四级的关系就是：新四级源于老四级又有别于老四级，要学好前者需先了解后者。,学习流程,写作阅读理解听力综合真题模拟测试,写作,一CET-4写作要求大学英语四级考试大纲规定：写作(Writing)部分测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，分值比例为15%，考试时间30分钟。考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。写作要求是思想表达准确、意义连贯、无严重语法错误。,四级作文评分原则,（1）CET作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人就总的印象给出奖励分，不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。（2）从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成了理解上的障碍。针对这些原则，学生在写作中要注意：1.重视内容和语言2.尽量避免语法错误3.语言要有闪光点4.卷面整洁！,三CET-4评分标准,(1)本题满分为15分。(2)阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。(3)阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照阅卷评分，如果认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，则定为该分数(即8分)；如果认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加1分(即9分)或减1分(即7分)。但不得加减半分。,(4)评分标准：2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分-基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分-基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。11分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误。注：白卷、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法表达，则给0分。,(5)字数不足应酌情扣分：注：1.如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。2.规定的内容未写全者,按比例扣分。3如果扣为0分，要慎重处理,应试策略与解题思路,一四级写作临考建议1.先死后活*“死”是指熟记模板及范文。对于每种题型的作文，考生应熟记其模板，并背诵2-3篇。“活”是指用活的句型和活的语言。在准备阶段，考生应把“死”的模板和“活”的句型联系起来。2.对症下药*考生在熟读几篇范文后，可以把范文默写下来，再与原文相对照，会发现和原文有出入的地方，其中有些错误是考生的写作弱点，发现这些弱点，考生可以有针对性地进行准备。这样逐个突破可以受到事半公倍的效果。,3.实战演练*在进行演练时，要注意灵活运用所掌握的范文模板及常用句式，在下笔前好好构思，切忌生搬硬套，以免出现文不对题的情况。4.考中建议*“5205”原则拿到题目后，用五分钟时间身体并草拟一份较为详细的提纲（Brainstorm）；然后，用20分钟时间充实提纲，完成作文；最后，用剩下的五分钟通篇检查，修改润色。,二、写作基本步骤,第一步，确定各段主题四级作文的结构比较固定，一般都是三段式。命题要求中大都会给出两到三个中文或英文提纲，但所给提纲只是规定了文章的主要内容，每一个提纲并不等于每一段的主题，考生需要结合文章题目和所给提纲的内容重新确定各段的主题。例如：Directions:Forthispart,yourareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicLimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用。2.由此带来的问题。3.限制一次性塑料袋。Brainstorm!分析：第一段主题：描述一次性塑料袋在人们生活中的广泛应用情况。第二段主题：指出一次性塑料袋带来的问题和危害。第三段主题：阐述限制使用一次性塑料袋的作用和意义。,第二步：列出各段提纲确定各段主题以后，不要匆忙动笔，应该在草稿纸或心中将各段要写的内容大致列出，做到心中有数，这样才能行文流畅，衔接自然。第三步：逐一展开段落一般来说，段落的基本构成包括：主题句，扩展句和结尾句。第四步：通读全文检查,一、依据模板写作,现象解释模板1,Recently,_.2)Whatamazesusmostis_.3)Itistruethat_.4)Therearemanyreasonsexplaining_.5)Themainreasons_.6)Whatismore,_.7)Thirdly,_.8)Asaresult,_.9)Consideringallthese,_.10)Foronething,_.11)Foranother,_.12)Inconclusion,_.,模板1-范文-1,1)Recently,PCgameshavebecomeverypopularoncampus,2)Whatamazesusmostisthatmanystudentsoftenspendtheirentireeveningsplayingsuchgames.3)ItistruethatPCgamescandomuchharmtousifweindulgeinthem.4)TherearemayreasonsexplainingtheharmsofPCgames.5)ThemainreasonisthatlayingPCgamesisanenormouswasteoftimeandwewillhavelittletimeforourstudy.,模板1-范文-2,6)Whatismore,thosewhoplayPCgamesdayandnightwillbeharmedphysicallyforlackofrestandsleep.7)Thirdly,mostgamesareaboutviolentandunhealthycontents.8)Asaresult,webenefitlessfromPCgames.9)Consideringallthese,weshoulddealwithPCgamescarefully.,模板1-范文-3,10)Foronething,weshouldntspendtoomuchtime,energyandmoneyonthegamesbecausestudyisourpriority.11)Foranother,weshouldtrytolearnsomethingwhenplayingthemoccasionally.12)Inconclusion,weshouldtrytoavoidtheharmsofPCgamesandliveamoremeaningfullife.,现象解释模板2,Asisknowntoall,_.2)_seemtogetaccustomedto_.3)Infact,_.4)Thereasonsof_lieinseveralaspects.5)Firstly,_.6)Secondly,_.7)Thirdly,_8)Finally,_.9)Asamatteroffact,_.10)Ontheonehand,_.11)Ontheotherhand,_.12Therefore,_.,现象解释模板2-modelwriting-1,Asisknowntoall,nearlyeveryoneoncampushasaccesstocomputers.2)StudentsseemtogetaccustomedtoplayingPCgames.3)Infact,Pcgamescandomuchharmtousifweindulgeourselvesinthem.4)ThereasonsofthePCgamesharmslieinseveralaspects.,现象解释模板2-modelwriting-2,5)Firstly,playingPCgamesisanenormouswasteoftimeandwewillhavelittletimeforourstudy.6)Secondly,thosewhoplayPCgamesdayandnightwillbeharmedphysicallyforlackofrestandsleep.7)Thirdly,mostgamesareaboutviolentandunhealthycontents.8)Finally,theycostusmuchmoney,现象解释模板2-modelwriting-3,9)Asamatteroffact.WecanfindbestwaystodealwithPCgames.10)Ontheonehand,weshouldntspendtoomuchtime,energyandmoneyonthegamesbecausestudyisourpriority.11)Ontheotherhand,weshouldtrytolearnsomethingwhenplayingthemoccasionally.12)Therefore,itsuptoavoidtheharmsofPCgames.,现象解释模板3,Nowadays_.2)Foronething,_3)Foranother,_.4)Itisobviousthat_.5)Manyremarkablefactorscontributeto_.6)Firstofall,_.7)Inaddition,_.8)Thirdly,_.9)Astome,_.10)Asweknow,_.11)Besides,_12)Inaword,_.,现象解释模板3-Modelwriting-1,Nowadays,PCgameshavebecomeverypopularoncampus.2)Foronething,manystudentsoftenspendtheireveningsplayingsuchgames.3)Foranother,moreandmorestudentsindulgethemselvesinthem.4)ItisobviousthatPCdomuchharmtous.,现象解释模板3-Modelwriting-2,5)ManyremarkablefactorscontributetotheharmofPCgames.6)Firstofall,playingPCgamesisanenormouswasteoftimeandwewillhavelittletimeofourstudy.7)Inaddition,thosewhoplayPCgamesdayandnightwillbeharmedphysicallyforlackofrestandsleep.8)Thirdly,theycostusmuchmoney.,现象解释模板3-Modelwriting-3,9)Astome,IonlyplayPCgamesoccasionallyinsummerorwinterholidays.10)ASweknow,studyisourpriority,weshouldntspendtoomuchtime,energyandmoneyongames.11)Besides,manygamesareinvolvedinviolentandunhealthycontents.12)Inaword,weshouldtrytoavoidtheharmsofPCgame.,PracticeWritingforModel(1),Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:TheRoleofManinModernFamilyYoushouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)现代社会，越来越多的男人参与家务劳动中；2）男人在工作之余承担家务义务的原因；3）我的观点,对比选择型4,Thereisaheateddebateover_.2)Itiscommonlyacceptedthat_.3)Incontrast,others_.4)Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggest_.5)Intheirview,_.6)However,othersthink_.7)Theyarguethat_.8)Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesidedof_.9)Firstofall,_.10)Furthermore,_.Thirdly,_.12)Therefore,_.,对比选择型4-ModelWriting-1,Thereisaheatedovertheenrollmentofathleticstudents.2)Itiscommonlyacceptedthatathleticstudentscanhelpuniversitieswinaplaceinsportscompetition.3)Incontrast,othersholdthattherearemanydisadvantagestolowertheirscoresofenrollment.,对比选择型4-ModelWriting-2,4)Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggestthatuniversitiesshouldimprovethemselvesinsportscompetitionbyloweringscoresofathleticstudents.5)Intheirview,thesestudentscancontinuetheiracademicstudyaswell.6)However,othersthinkthatitsharmfultoenrollmentsystem.,对比选择型4-ModelWriting-3,7)Theyarguethatitisunfairforthosestudentswhogetthesamescoresasathleticstudentsdobutcantgetanadmissionnotice.8)Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideofthelatteropinion.9)Firstofall,thereisanacademicgapbetweenathleticstudentsandothers.,对比选择型4-ModelWriting-4,8)Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideofthelatteropinion.9)Firstofall,thereisanacademicgapbetweenathleticstudentsandothers.10)Furthermore,athleticstudentsmayfeeldifficultinstudy.11)Thirdly,athleticstudentsmaybelookeddownuponinjobmarket.12)Therefore,universitiesshouldtreatathleticstudentsthesamewayastheydoforthecommonstudents.,对比选择型模板5,Recently,wemayhearquitedifferentopinions_.2)Mostpeopletakeitforgrantedthat_.3)However,othershold_.4)adominantideaisthat_.5)Theyarguethat_.8)Astome,Iprefer_.9)Ontheonehand,_.10)Ontheotherhand,_.11)Therefore,_.12)Inconclusion,_.,二、SelectedWritingTopicforCET,PracticeWritingforModel(1),Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:TheRoleofManinModernFamilyYoushouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)现代社会，越来越多的男人参与家务劳动中；2）男人在工作之余承担家务义务的原因；3）我的观点,Sample1:TheRoleofManinModernFamily-1,Recently,Chinesefamilieshavebeenundergoingmanychanges.Whatamazesusmostisthattherearemorethan7outof10husbandswhovolunteertodohousework.Itistruethatmoreandmorehusbandsunderstandwhatanimportantroletheirwiveshaveplayedinthefamilyandsociety.,Sample1:TheRoleofManinModernFamily-2,Therearemanyreasonsexplainingthesituationshowninthechart.Themainreasonisthatthehusbandinadouble-incomefamilyshouldspendmoretimeonthehousework.Whatismore,husbandsparticipationinchildrenseducationishelpfultotheirgrowing-up.Thirdly,manyhusbandsfinditwonderfultodohousework.Asaresult,moreandmorehusbandsaregladtosharefamilyresponsibility.,CollegeStudentsOwingMobilePhones2,1）随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的大学生拥有手机；2）为什么会出现这种现象/3）我的看法,Sample2:CollegeStudentsOwingMobilePhones-1,Asisknowntoall,mobilephoneshavebecomeanewnecessityforcollegestudentsandmoremorecollegestudentsowntheirmobilephonesoncampus.Peopleseemtogetaccustomedtokeepingmobilephonesathand.Infact,accordingtothesurvey,95%ofcollegestudentsusemobilephones.,Sample2:CollegeStudentsOwingMobilePhones-2,Thereasonsofthewide-spreadofmobilephonesoncampuslieinseveralaspects.Firstly,thepriceofmobilephoneshasdroppedrapidlyinrecentyear.Secondly,collegestudentsneedthemtoseekjobsbeforegraduation.Thirdly,mobilephonescanmeettheirdailydemandsfortelecommunications.Finally,studentscanexchangeinformationeachotherbymobilephones.,Sample2:CollegeStudentsOwingMobilePhones-3,Asamatteroffact,morestudentswillbuymobilephonesinthefuture.Ontheonehand,theactualdemandforthemwillincrease.Ontheotherhand,boththepriceofmobilephonesandthephonebillwilldecreasefurther.Therefore,mostofthestudentswillowntheirmobilephonessoonerorlater.,PracticeWritingforContrastModelPatterns3,NewsonInternet1）一些人认为因特网上的新闻没有价值；2）另一些人认为因特网上的新闻是最及时最有效的新闻；30我的看法,SampleWriting3:NewsontheInternet-1,ThereisaheateddebateoverthenewsonInternet.ItiscommonlyacceptedthatInternetnewsisvaluableforthetimelyreport.Incontrast,othersholdthatnewsonInternetisvalueless.,SampleWriting3:NewsontheInternet-2,ThosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggestthatnewsonInternetcanbereadbymillionsofviewersatthesametime.Intheirview,web-pageviewerscanalsogivecommentsonnet.However,othersthinkthatInternetnewsisnotasobjectiveasnewspapers.TheyagreethatmanynewsonInternetisnottrueatall.,SampleWriting3:NewsontheInternet-3,Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformeropinion.Firstofall.Internetnewsrepresentsthetrendofdevelopmentinjournalism.Furthermore,thenewsonInternetisinteractive.Thirdly,muchnewsinnewspapersisnotveryobjectiveeither.Therefore,IbelievethatInternetnewswillbecomethemostimportantsourceofinformationinthenearfuture.,WritingTopic:ThePopularityofMic-Blog1.近年来”微博”越来越流行2。微博流行的原因3。你的看法,Exercise,PracticeWritingforContrastModelPatterns4,Lecturesanddiscussions一些学生赞成讲座式教学；另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学我的看法,Sample4:lectureanddiscussion-1,recently,wemayhearquitedifferentopinionsaboutlecturesanddiscussions,2)Mostpeopletakeitforgrantedthatlecturescanhelpstudentslearnmorequickly.3)However,othersholdthatdiscussionscanstimulatestudentstolearnbythemselves.,Sample4:lectureanddiscussion-2,4)Adominantideaisthatattendingalecturecansavemoretime.5)Inthisopinion,teachersarepassingontheirknowledgewhichisaccumulatedbytheminmanyyearsstudyandresearchtothestudents.6)Nevertheless,theobjectorsthinkthatadiscussionmayleaveadeeperimpression.7)Theyarguethatinvolvinginadiscussion,studentscandeveloptheirabilitytoanalyzeproblems.,Sample4:lectureanddiscussion-3,8)Astome,Ipreferneitherofthetwoextremeideas.9)Ontheonehand,differentmethodshavedifferentdisadvantages.10)Ontheotherhand,eachstudenthashisorherfavorite.110Therefore,neithermethodcanberejectedwhileanotherisadopted.12)Inconclusion,wemightadoptdifferentteachingmethodsaccordingtodifferentsubjects.,Exercise,IsrapidEconomicGrowthDesirable?1）一些人认为经济增长的速度越快越好；2）另一些人认为经济增长的速度应当放缓求稳；3）我的看法。,LetterofApplication,SupposeyouareasophomoreandwanttoapplyforthejobatutortoanEnglishhighschoolstudentadvertisedintheeveningPaper.Writeanapplicationletterinnolessthan120words,sample,NingboInstituteofEducationNingbo,ChinaTel:(0574)65000000E-mail:lsqdavidApril,212012DearMrs.Janet:IhaveseenyouradvertisementintodaysNingboEveningPaperforatutortoastudentofGradeThreeathighschool.IaminterestedinthejobandIthinkImqualifiedforit.Iwouldliketobeconsideredasanapplicant.Iam20yearsoldandstudyinginNingboInstituteofEducation.Iamasophomore.IbelievethatIamabletoteachyourchildwell.,sample,Iamgoodatmathematicsinwhichyourchildneedshelp.IcanalsohelpyourchildwithherChinese.MyEnglishisprettygoodandIcanmanagetocommunicatewithforeignerssuccessfully.IwilldomybestandImsureyouwillbesatisfiedwittheresults.Pleasefindenclosedmytelephonenumber.Iwouldbegladtocomeforaninterviewatanytimewhenconvenienttoyou.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.YoursSincerely,David,三、图表作文(非重点，需防一手),WriteaPassageBasedontheGraph(TableWritingacompositionbasedonagraph,weshouldfirstunderstandthemeaningthegraph(table)conveys,andthengiveanaccurateandcleardescriptionofthegraph(table).Next,weshouldgeneralizeaboutthegraph(table),interpretandanalyzeit.Finally,weshouldmakeasoundconclusionbasedonthegraph(table),FamilyBankDepositsinChinasCitiesandTowns,Writeapassagebasedonthegraph(table).,Example:,三、图表作文,Descriptionofthetable:Theperiod19852000hadagreatincreaseinfamilybankdepositsinChinascitiesandtowns.In1985,theaveragefamilydepositswas1351yuanwhilein2000itreached3460yuan.Thetotalbankdepositsin2000was19timesasmuchasitwasin1985.,Generalizationinterpretationandanalysis:Severalfactorsmayhavecontributedtothischange.Firstly,thefamilyincomehasgreatlyincreasedandpeoplehavemoresparemoneytodepositinthebank.Secondly,peoplewanttodepositmoneytobuymoreexpensiveitemssuchashousesandcars.Thirdly,banksarestillthoughtofasthesafestplacetodepositmoney.Moreandmorepeoplearewillingtodepositmoneyinbanksinsteadofotherinvestmentsuchasstockexchangeandfutureinvestment.,Writeapassagebasedonthegraph(table).,Makingasoundconclusion:Fromtheabovetablewecanpredictthatthefamilyincomewillcontinuetoincreaseandthatpeoplewillhaveevenmoremoneytodepositinthebank.,Writeapassagebasedonthegraph(table).,Writingacompositionbasedonagraphic,weshouldfirstofallunderstandthemeaningthegraph(table)conveys,andthengiveanaccurateandcleardescriptionofthegraph(table).Thenextstepistogeneralizeaboutthegraph(table)-interpretandanalyzeit.Finally,weshouldmakeasoundconclusionbasedonthegraph(table).,Writeapassagebasedonthegraph(table).,DescribinggraphAccordingtothetable(graph)XismuchthanYinFromthetable(graph)itcanbeseen(shown,calculated)Comparedwith,Usefulexpressionsandpatternsusedforpresentingtablesorgraphics:,InterpretinggraphSeveralfactorsmaycontributetoOneofthecausesofisOneconsequenceofis,Usefulexpressionsandpatternsusedforpresentingtablesorgraphics:,ConclusionfromgraphInconclusion,wecan/maysaythatFinally,itcan/maybesaidthatTherefore,itcanbeconcluded,Usefulexpressionsandpatternsusedforpresentingtablesorgraphics:,图表作文常用句型,Ascanbeseenfromthediagram/chart/graph/table,.Thechartshowsthat(indicate/suggest/illustrate/),增长的表达,Therewasarise/anincrease/anupwardtrend/Itincreasedfromto,降低的表达,Therewasafall/adecrease/adecline/adropIthasdroppedtoItdecreasefromto,形容词,rapid,sharp,dramatic,gradual,slow,steady,large,slight,alittle,much,agreatdeal,small,EXERCISES,Writeanessaybasedonthegraphbelow.ThesuggestedTITLEis:CarAccidentsDeclininginChongqingCity.,EXERCISES,1.Riseandfalloftherateofcaraccidentsasindicatedbythegraph;2.Possiblereason(s)forthedeclineofcaraccidentsinthecity;3.Yourpredictionsofwhatwillhappen.,EXERCISES,CaraccidentsdeclininginChongqingCityAccordingtothegraph,wecanseethatthenumberofcaraccidentsinChongqingcityfluctuatedconsiderablyduringtheyear2000.Thefirsttwomonthsof2000showedanincreasingtrend,movingfrom22accidentsinJanuaryto32inMarch.Accidentsdecreasedsteadilyoverthefollowing3monthstoonly26incidentsinJune.ThemonthsofJulyandAugustsawasecondsuddenincrease,numbering33and39accidentsrespectively.AfterAugustthesituationsteadilyimproved,withaccidentnumbersdecliningtoaminimumof16inDecember.,Thesefluctuationscanbeexplainedbyweatherandroadconditions.TheincreaseinaccidentsevidencedinMarchcanbeattributedtotheexcessiverainthatcameinearlyspring,makingtheroadsmuddyandslippery.ThepeakinaccidentsinAugustisrelatedtotheheatandhumidityofthesummermonths,makingdriversdrowsyandimpatient.Improvedweatherconditionsandthecompletionoftwonewroadsobviouslyimprovedtrafficanddrivingconditionsintheautumnandwintermonths,leadingtothestrongdeclineofaccidentsduringthatperiod.,Basedontheinformationpresentedinthisgraph,Iwouldexpectthefollowingyeartohavesimilarfluctuationsinitsnumbersofaccidents,invariationwiththeweather.However,Iwouldalsoexpecttheoverallnumberofaccidentstobelowerduetotheexistenceoftwonewroads,thereforeimprovingthetrafficconditionsallyearround.,Outline:,描写居民银行存款近十年内的变化。分析居民银行存款变化的原因。你的结论。,Sample5:BankDeposit-1,Theperiod1992-2002sawagreatincreaseinfamilybankdepositsinasmallChine