定语从句复习写作

,WelcomeToClass10,TheAttributiveClauseUsedinWriting定语从句在写作中的运用ByFancy,NMET书面表达第五档（21-25）要求,完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的,汉语式英语句式单一平铺直叙无过渡语(关联词),Commonmistakes,Howtoavoidsimplesentences?,Usingclauses(从句),sentencestructures,thenon-finites(非谓语)andotherproverbs(谚语)inwriting.,定语从句的作用,定语从句可以进一步扩充句子中名词成分所携带的信息量，像一个“小仓库”可以放置很多附带的信息点，如能够在基础写作中巧妙利用，既能够使句子丰满好看有档次，能缩减句子的数量，从而为写作提分，减负。,Review:Theusageoftherelativepronouns(关系代词),Talkingaboutpeople,Doyouknowtheman_cametoseeXiaoYangthismorning?,Talkingaboutthings,Icouldntfindthebook_wasboughtyesterday.,whose+n.=the+n.+ofwhich/whom=ofwhich/whom+the+n.,Doyouknowtheboy_parentsareonholiday?,Heisaman_weshouldalllearnfrom.,Thetable_youjustsawismadeofplastics.,Iveneverbeentotheroom_windowsarebroken.,who,that,who,whom,that,/,whose,whose,which,that,which,that,/,Review:Theusageoftherelativeadverbs(关系副词)Thisistheplace_hisfatherworks.,Thereason_hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.,Istillremembertheday_IfirstcametoBeijing.,where,why,when,介词+which/whomTherearemanytrees_theycanhavearest.Thisisthering_shespent1000dollars.In1952,Mandelawastheblacklawyer_Iwentforadvice._weallknow,heisagoodstudent._isknowntousall,heisagoodstudent._theproverbgoes(正如某个谚语所说),allroadsleadtoRome.,underwhich,onwhich,towhom,AS,AS,AS,as关系代词or关系副词？,_,Enjoysomeproverbs:带定语从句的谚语1.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者天助之。2.Hewholaughslastlaughsbest.谁笑到最后，谁笑的最好。3.Nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit.世上无难事，只怕有心人。Hewholearnsbutdoesnotthink,islost;Hewhothinksbutdoesnotlearn,isingreatdanger.学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆,Rewritethefollowingsentencesusingtheattributiveclause.,1.ZhouLiangismybestfriend.Heis16yearsold.Heisofmediumbuild.2.Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhentheyareintrouble.3.Hehasmanyhobbies.Theyareincommonwith（与相同的）mine.4.HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy.Itmadehisteacherhappy.5.Hehasmanygoodqualities.Theyareworthlearning.,ZhouLiangismybestfriend,whois16yearsoldandofmediumbuild.,Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhoareintrouble.,Hehasmanyhobbieswhichareincommonwithmine.,HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy,whichmadehisteacherhappy.,Hehasmanygoodqualitieswhichareworthlearning.,Rewritethefollowingsentencesusingtheattributiveclause.,6.Youdbetterreadthebooks.Youareininterestedinthebooks.7.Remembertoreadthebooks.Youcanbenefitfromthebooks.8.Itsagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary,anditcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary.9.Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday.ItcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish.10.Youshouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwords.TheycanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks.,Youdbetterreadthebookswhichyouareininterestedin.,Remembertoreadthebookswhichyoucanbenefitfrom.,Itsagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary,whichcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary.,Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday,whichcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish.,YoushouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwordswhichcanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks.,1.ZhouLiangismybestfriend,whois16yearsoldandofmediumbuild.2.Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhoareintrouble3.Hehasmanyhobbieswhichareincommonwithmine.4.HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy,whichmadehisteacherhappy.5.Hehasmanygoodqualitieswhichareworthlearning.6.Youdbetterreadthebookswhichyouareininterestedin.7.Remembertoreadthebookswhichyoucanbenefitfrom.8.Itsagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary,whichcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary.9.Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday,whichcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish.10.YoushouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwordswhichcanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks.,Ourclassisabigfamily.Itismadeupof37girlsand20boys.Allofthemareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.ZhangYanchaoisourmonitor.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehimverymuch.,Ourclassisabigfamilywhichismadeupof37girlsand20boys,allofwhomareverydiligentandwarm-hearted.ZhangYanchaoisourmonitor,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heisagoodboy(whom)wealllikeverymuch.,Practice1,3minutes,_Practicemakesperfect!,Practice2,Describeourschool:广饶一中创建于1951年，是一所山东省著名的中学。GuangRaoNo.1MiddleSchoolofShanDong2.校园里花草树木随处可见，美丽如画。campusasbeautifulasapicture3.学校有许多篮球场，学生放学后在篮球场上打篮球。basketballcourts4.学校里有许多的优秀教师，其中樊老师是一名我们都很喜欢的英语老师。5.在过去的三年高考中，我们学校取得了令人惊讶的优异成绩。CollegeEntranceExamination,10minutes,GroupDiscussion&cooperation,合作共赢,2.如何将五句话进行连贯的衔接与整合，形成一篇完整的顺畅的作文。,MySchoolIamstudyinginGuangRaoNo.1MiddleSchoolofShanDong.Itisafamousschoolwhichwasbuiltin1951.Firstofall,treesandflowerscanbeseeneverywhereinthecampus,whichmakesitasbeautifulasapicture.Besides,intheschoolstandmanybasketballcourts,wherestudentsplaybasketballafterschool.Whatsmore,therearemanyexcellentteachershere,ofwhomMissFanisa