（包头专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作03 休闲活动课件

,话题写作(三)休闲活动,第三篇话题写作妙解,【典型例题】2019包头假定你是李华,请给你的笔友alan写一封邮件,告诉他今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩,并制定了旅行计划,你想征求他的意见,同时询问他是否可以接机。邮件还应包括以下内容:,一、审圈要点、定时态、定人称假定你是李华,请给你的笔友alan写一封邮件,告诉他今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩,并制定了旅行计划,你想征求他的意见,同时询问他是否可以接机。邮件还应包括以下内容:,二、列列短语,尽可能为习惯用语gotoyourcitytotravelthissummervacationarriveat10:30a.m.,onjuly2meetmeattheairportmadeatravelplangotoaconcertgocampingvisitingsomeplacesofinterestgoingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisitpleasegivemesomeadvice,三、加定人称(第一人称和第二人称)、定时态(一般将来时)形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。dearalan,howisitgoing?imgoingtoyourcitytotravelthissummervacation.iwillarriveat10:30a.m,onjuly2.canyoumeetmeattheairport?ihavemadeatravelplan.iwillgotoaconcert.,iwillgocamping.imgoingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest.idontknowifimgoingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisit.pleasegivemesomeadvice.四、连添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯保证基础平均分上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。,dearalan,howisitgoing?imgoingtoyourcitytotravelthissummervacation.andiwillarriveat10:30a.m.,onjuly2.canyoumeetmeattheairport?atthesametime,ihavemadeatravelplan.firstly,iwillgotoaconcert.theniplantogocamping.also,imgoingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest.butidontknowifimgoingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisit.pleasegivemesomeadvice.,imsureiwillhaveanunforgettabletripwithyourhelp.yours,lihua五、美表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活避免chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。,及时体验dearalan,howisitgoing?基础句imgoingtoyourcitytotravelthissummervacation.升格句imthinkingoftakingatriptoyourcitythissummervacation.发展句becauseitssuchabeautifulplacethat,idreamforalongtime.基础句andiwillarriveat10:30a.m.,onjuly2.canyoumeetmeattheairport?升格句iwonderifyouwillmeetmeattheairportat10:30a.m.,onjuly2sinceitsmyfirsttimetovisitthere.atthesametime,ihavemadeatravelplan.,基础句firstly,iwillgotoaconcert.theniplantogocamping.also,imgoingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest.升格句includingenjoyingmusicataconcert,goingcampingandvisitingsomeplacesofinterest.基础句butidontknowifimgoingbyairorbytrainduringmyvisit.基础句pleasegivemesomeadvice.升格句wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?eithertravelingbybikeorbybuswouldsuitmefine.imsureiwillhaveanunforgettabletripwithyourhelp.发展句doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingvacation?,六、查典型病例(参见话题一)七、洁书写定天下!dearalan,howisitgoing?imthinkingoftakingatriptoyourcitythissummervacation,becauseitssuchabeautifulplacethatidreamforalongtime.iwonderifyouwillmeetmeattheairportat10:30a.m.,onjuly2sinceitsmyfirsttimetovisitthere.besides,ihavemadeatravelplan,includingenjoyingmusicataconcert,goingcampingandvisitingsomeplacesofinterest.,wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?eithertravelingbybikeorbybuswouldsuitmefine.imsureiwillhaveanunforgettabletripwithyourhelp.doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingvacation?lookingforwardtoyourreply.yours,lihua,2019泰州为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。活动内容1.上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;2.下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。你的感想1.师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;2.倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习,报效祖国;3.(考生自己发挥)。,要求1.词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。参考词汇市民广场civicsquareinordertoenrichjunior3studentsafter-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit._,onepossibleversion:inordertoenrichjunior3studentsafter-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.weareallhappytohaveachancetoknowmoreaboutourcity.everyonehadameaningfulday.inthemorning,wevisitedpeoplesparkinourcity.weenjoyedthebeautifulviewthere.moreover,wehadasonganddanceparty.mostofustookalotofphotostoremembertheexcitingmoments.,intheafternoon,wewatchedthepictureshow.manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountryandcity.itsamazingforustoknowthesechanges.iwillfini