2020年高考英语分考点试题预测：书面表达

书面表达一、考点介绍早在2020年公布的高中英语新课标中就已明确指出“培养初步写作的能力是英语教学的目的之一”。 而高考英语书面表达高考资源网命题目的就是要测试学生运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能来表达思想和进行交流的能力。可以说这种题型最能检验出学生综合运用英语语言能力的高低。高考英语书面表达具体主要考查学生以下几种能力：1.观察分析，获取，加工和输出信息的能力。2.体现语法规则，并且正确熟练运用语法的能力。3.语言交际表达得体，突出正确语用的能力。4.关注社会现实，锤炼思维表达能力。备考策略：1.学习生活中多参加一些集体和公益活动，重视交流，在交流中有目的的运用语言，以达到学习和学以致用的目的。同时注意归纳整理得体用语，以扩充知识面。注重积累时尚语言，增强时尚语言表达意识。2. 平时就要注重体裁，话题等方面的积累准备。并且寻找适当材料进行作文专项训练，并定期进行归纳整理和分类巩固，循序渐进掌握作文写作技巧。实际写作时要认真分析材料所提供的背景，落实已知信息与所求信息。注重灵活应对开放式写法。3. 学好语法知识，注重操练运用。平时可以多做一些句型转换、单句翻译、用词、短语或句型造句、文章缩写、改写等练习。4. 回归高中英语课本，切实找到并且分析高考英语书面表达在课本中的典型体现。学生一定要牢固掌握和灵活运用文化、地理、环境、健康、社会等话题的内容。同时课本中精选的文章不仅语言规范准确，而且内容丰富，能够让学生体会到学习和运用英语的快乐。二、03-08年英语高考类似书面表达试题：1.（2020年高考英语试题天津卷，书面表达）假设2020年2月12日是你父亲的生日，下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示，用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事，并谈谈自己的感受。注意：1. 词数不少于100；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】写作要点：1. 本文的命题形式为汉语提示+三副图画，记叙+议论，体裁为日记，时态以一般过去式主。2叙述事情发生的时间、地点3. 为爸爸买生日礼物4买完生日礼物后，坐地铁回家5见老奶奶提着重物，找不到座位6为老奶奶让座7看到老奶奶笑容，倍受鼓舞，决心以后更多的帮助别人【答案】Februay 12 th,2020The day is my Dads birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought a present for him. Then I took the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy when he saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tired. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seeing her smile,I felt happy. I will always be ready to help others in the future.2. （2020年高考英语试题辽宁卷 书面表达）假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：1. 乐观的人生态度；2. 努力学习；3. 参加体育锻炼。生词：态度恶劣attitude注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；_【解析】特点：主题引入自然流畅，能让学生迅速进入情境，找到感觉。要点明确，段落清晰；与学生生活贴近，有话可说，有话能说。限定大方向的同时，给学生比较充足的联想和自由发挥的空间。本文主题明确，同时需要一定的联想，难度适中。文章应包含以下要点: 1.乐观的人生态度；2.努力学习；3.参加体育锻炼。【答案】One possible versionWe all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a days study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.3. （2020年高考英语试题浙江卷 书面表达）人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team”为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：1. 独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题。2. 合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习3. 我喜欢的方式和理由注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。Working Individually or Working in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done._【解析】1.在表达第一和第二两个要点时，注意双方观点内容写全；两种观点的对比要鲜明；2.自己观点的选择要明确，理由要充分；3. 本文主题明确，同时需要一定的联想，难度适中。在限定大方向的同时，给学生比较充足的联想和自由发挥的空间。4.话题内容与学生生活实际紧密结合，并且能够让学生写完之后有所反思和收获。【答案】Working Individually or Working in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done. They are working individually and working in a team. Each of them has its own advantages and disadvantages.On one hand, working individually can give the individuals a convenience to arrange and solve the problems. It can offer them the space to think by themselves. Only in this way, can they develop their creative ability. On the other hand, working in a team provides the individuals with the chance to discuss and study together. During the progress, they help each other so this can improve their communication and co-operative ability.To some degree, choosing which way to work partly depends on the individuals characters. I think working in a team is suitable for me, because I believe “two heads are better than one” which leads to our work more efficient.4.（2020年高考英语试题上海卷 第二卷 II Guided Writing）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：你是否会参加比赛你做出该决定的具体理由_【解析】1.本文主题引入自然，而且与学生生活实际结合紧密。2.要求明确，要点鲜明，同时需要一定的联想，开放性适度，适宜学生展开合理想象，整体难度适中。3.文章应包含以下要点结构:A. 第一段是引言段，引出两点：文章的话题，在这篇文章中就是集体舞比赛这个事情。和全文的中心内容，在本文中就是自己是否参加比赛。B. 第二段是论证段，也是全文的重心所在，主要是讲述自己的理由，即为什么参加或者不参加这个比赛。要详细阐述清楚你的理由。C. 最后一段是总结段，本题目在总结段的时候可以写的稍微简洁一点。【答案】A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.5. （2020年高考英语试题海南宁夏卷 第四部分 第二节：书面表达）假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：表示赞成。提出你喜欢的栏目。简要说明理由。注意：1词数100左右。2信的开头和结尾已为你写好。3适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4参考词汇：栏目一columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together._Yours faithfullyLi Hua【解析】1.本文能够充分把所学知识充分运用到写作中去，并发挥自身的想象力。2.要求明确，主要是完整和准确表达出三个动词的内容，即：“表示，提出，说明.”同时本文不失开放性，整体难度适中。3.本文写作应包括以下要点：A.年龄；B.性别；C.爱好(旅游、运动、宠物等)；D.说明为什么选这样的笔友。【答案】Dear Mr.Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its successI would like the magazine to have three columns: News, Teachers Advice and Students Voice From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools In Teachers Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom Students Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studiesI believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading itYours faithfullyLi Hua6. （2020年高考英语试题宁夏卷 第四部分 第二节：书面表达）假定你是李华希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1年龄2性别3 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter,I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor._Best regardsLi Hua【解析】1.本文生活气息很浓，但恰恰又很好地反映学生流行的交友方式和心理。2.要求明确，简洁但同时不失开放性，整体难度适中。3.本文写作注意以下几个方面:A. 注意审题时一定看准，“交友条件”包括“年龄、性别，爱好”三项，这是明确的写作要点。B. 题干中有一个比较隐蔽的另一要点：为什么选这样的笔友？所以要清楚的阐述你的理由C. 要想全文流畅连贯，必须有一个合适的结尾【答案】Dear Peter,I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experience in traveling, taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best regardsLi Hua7.（2020年高考英语试题北京卷 第四部分：书面表达 情景作文）国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）情景作文（20分）国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。姓名：王珊 _ 性别：女年龄：16岁 _ 学校：北京阳光中学其他：爱好音乐，摄影；善于与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平参加夏令营的目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化注意：1. 词数不少于60。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】1.本文主题引入自然，而且把学生学校生活与社会生活紧密结合在一起。2.要求明确，整体难度适中。3.本文写作注意以下几点:A.要求写一篇简历，注意结构和语言上的特点。B.注意表中“其它”和“目的”两项应该是重点要表达到位的内容。C.词数要求不少于60词，所以应该让文章读来感觉丰富一点，“可以适当增加细节”这样的要求是“弹性规定” ，体现适度开放性。【答案】My name is Wang Shan. Im a 16-year-old girl studying in Beijing Yangguang Middle school. Listening to the music and taking photos are my favorite things to do in my spare time. Im good at communicating with others and always ready to help other people. Furthermore, I love nature. Wherever Im free, Ill travel to beautiful natural attractions to experience natural wonders with my family. In addition, I love peace, for I hope all nations in the world can live in a peaceful environment and lead a happy life.The purpose of my intending to join the Peace and Friendshoip Summer Camp is to make more friends from foreign countries, and to have an access to the insight of foreign cultures. I hope I can do something for the world peace, and Im sure Ill be learning a lot from the Summer Camp.8. （2020年高考英语试题重庆卷 第二节 书面表达）加拿大高中生David在互联网（Internet)上登出启事（notice），希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化（culture）。假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：你怎样得知David的愿望你愿意成为他的朋友你打算如何帮助他你盼望他的回复注意：1/.电子邮件的格式已为你写好。2.词数：100词左右。Dear David,_Yours sincerelyLi Hua【解析】1.本文仍然是典型的把学生学校生活与社会生活紧密结合的实例。2.要求明确，同时不失开放性，整体难度适中。3.本文写作注意以下几点:A.四项看似比较灵活的内容要点，实际上还是在思维方向上限制得很到位的。B.注意应该用第一人称口吻来写，不能再虚构别的人物。C.特别注意第一项内容“你怎样得知David的愿望”，信息提示完全在背景题干中。【答案】Dear David,Ive learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. Im glad that you show such great interest in China and would like to be your friend.I will try to write to you as often as possible about the Chinese culture. When you have the chance to come to China, Ill teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think? Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerelyLi Hua三、名校试题1(2020年广东省湛江二中高三毕业班2月月考 ，IV读写任务)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The generation gap between students and their teachers is becoming more significant with only 3.3 percent out of a survey group of 1,000 students from 30 key middle schools in the city saying they would be willing to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts.In todays educational environment, teachers are positioned to be the authority figure for learning instead of becoming good friends in the life of students.As only students with good marks in exams are considered the “apples in the eyes” of the teachers, most students think their teachers to be partial（偏心）.“I feel sad to hear such remarks,” said Yu Yi, a well-known special-class teacher.She recalled that in the past, teachers and students would play basketball together or comment on novels while sitting on the grass during a break. But today, study and good marks are the only topics of conversation between students and teachers.“Schools are not only the place where knowledge is imparted（传授）, but also where students are taught how to be an upright person,” Yu said. “The success of a person is not merely determined by intelligence but also by emotional state.”Yang Xiong, director of the Juvenile Research Institute, said the educational system which focuses on examinations should be held to be substantially responsible.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因；2. 以约120个词就“现代师生关系”这个主题发表你的看法，包括如下要点：（1）你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法，为什么？（2）你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的？如何才能建立这种关系？【写作要求】1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 标题自定；3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯_【解析】本篇书面表达非常贴近学生实际的学习生活，让学生感觉到有话可说，而且乐于表达。其写作要点注意以下几个方面：1. 第一部分写作，可以通过阅读文中事例总结概括出原因来。但要注意词数限制和总结到位程度。2第二部分写作真正表达出自己所想所思的内容，注意四个关键要点：A.“自己是否愿意”B“为什么”C“希望什么样的关系”D“如何建立”所以要在感觉非常愿意说的基础上准确把握要点范围，既要说还不能说的过多过广。【答案】Love and Concern Make an Ideal RelationshipStudents are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students.While some students might have doubts, I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. They show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot.In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind , teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly. Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students. 2. （江苏省姜堰中学20202020学年度第二学期第二次综合练习，五.、书面表达）请根据下表提供的信息为21世纪报(中学生版)写一篇150词左右的报道，内容为西部贫困地区的一所农村学校接受”希望工程”资助后的变化。受资助前受资助后学校名称李家庄学校希望学校学生情况多数学生因家贫辍学辍学学生全部复学办学条件只有一所危房作教室；操场只是一块空地；一间办公室一栋2层教学楼，包括音乐室、美术室、微机室等；体育用品齐全你的感想注意：1应该包括所给要点，可适当发挥。2词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。Children Return to SchoolThanks to the Hope Project, great changes have taken place in a western country school.【解析】本篇书面表达在贴近学生实际的学习生活的基础上把话题稍加放大，能够让学生在表达完自己的思想后，对社会对生活有所感悟和思考，从而达到引导学生关注社会关注生活的最终目的。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面：1. 引出话题内容的题干部分一定要阅读仔细。表格里面的信息要逐字品读和揣摩。2表达的内容主要体现出一种鲜明的变化对比来，所以用词选句都要体现“对比”意味。3.本文又一鲜明特点是有一小部分的开放内容，及“你的感想”，可以说这是能让学生更多的施展才华，彰显个性的地方，但要注意方向性和限制性，不能乱表达。【答案】Children Return to SchoolThanks to the Hope Project, great changes have taken place in a western country school.This school used to be called Lijiazhuang School. Most of its pupils left school because their families were too poor to pay for their education. The only unsafe house had to be used as their classroom. And all the teachers shared one workroom. The playground was nothing but an open land.Things are different now. All the children who left school have come to continue their studies. In the school yard stands a two-storeyed teac