山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（15）

山西省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（15）短文改错假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and harder. Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.第二节：书面表达（满分25分）_ 高中生在成长过程中会碰到以下烦恼。就这一话题你班正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料。词数：120 左右烦恼解决办法相貌、体形不美不必在意不被他人理解，朋友少加强沟通学习滞后，压力大自我鼓励； 坚定目标零花钱不多学会节俭注意：1开头已写好 不计入总词数。2 语言通顺，结构严谨。3参考词汇：零花钱 pocket money 压力 stressBoys and girls,_We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can rid of them correctly_ Thats allThank youLast Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over threethe suddenlyhours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet.andThen a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew highinto the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch it, big drop ofof them dropsrain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder andcame muchharder. Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out ofmy room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top ofwhat brokenthe backroom.Boys and girls,We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can rid of them correctly and wiselyFirst, some of us are upset about their body styles and looksIts unnecessary and its not important at allWe neednt care about itIts ones inner beauty that mattesSecond, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, patents and classmatesFacing this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstandingSome of us have fewer friendsI think being open-minded and friendly will do you goodThird, we may fall behind others, which makes us feel stressedActually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determinationLast, some of us dont have much po