四川省彭州市2020高考英语二轮复习 写作品析（2）

四川彭州市2020高考英语【二轮】写作品析（2）书面表达最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”(My Chinese Dream)为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下：1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解；2.你谈到了自己的梦想；3.如何实现自己的梦想。注意：1. 总词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。May 8 Wednesday Sunday_【参考范文】May 8 Wednesday SunnyRecently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xs Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically/excitedly about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save peoples lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can to be admitted to a good medical college, where I can prepare myself well enough for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish/achieve my goal.书面表达训练你校将要举办一次主题为“how to communicate with friends” 的英语演讲比赛， 请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：1. 尊重并信任朋友2. 常与朋友聊天3. 换位思考问题注意：1. 词数100字以上。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇： 换位思考 put oneself in sbs shoes.Hello, everyone , Id like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our friends. _【参考范文】Hello, everyone, Id like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our friends.In the first place not only should we show respect for our friends but also it is necessary to trust them. With respect and trust given to them, they in return will certainly keep you whoever can be relied on, deepening your communication in some ways. Moreover, its good to have a chat with our friends at times, which will strengthen mutual understanding. Of course what we should pay more attention to is to put ourselves in their shoes, experiencing what they are thinking of and find out an appropriate way to communicate better.In one word, sincerity and consideration counts to make communication more smooth between our friends and us.基础写作（满分15分）你是英语校报的一名小记者，最近进行了一次采访，一下是这次采访的情况：【写作内容】时 间：上周末对 象：心理学教授Kelly Lam主 题：中国学生关于分享感受的看法基本信息：（1） 无论是快乐或者忧愁，超过30%的学生都不愿意和其他人分享；（2） （2）我们的教育没有让孩子知道分享的重要性。专家观点：（1） 我们所生活的这个时代，学会分享感受是非常必要的；（2） 应该学会如何分享感受，对未来的成长十分有利。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考词汇】心理学psychology【参考范文】基础写作：Last weekend, I am very lucky to interview Kelly lam, a professor ofpsychology, talking about the Chinese students opinion on sharing feelings.In China, more than 30% of the students are unwilling to share their feelingsno matter when they are delighted or worried. Whats worse, our eductiondoesnt let children know the importance of sharing. Professor Lam believesthat we live in a time in which sharing feelings is so necessary. Therefore,students should learn how to share their feelings, which is beneficial to theirgrowth in the future.读写任务（满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语作文。An elderly carpenter（木匠）was ready to retire. He told his employers of his plans to leavehe house-building business to live a more leisurely life with his wife and children. His employerwas sorry to see his good worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a personalfavor. The carpenter said yes, but it was obvious that his heart was already not in his work. Hebuilt it impatiently and used poor materials. It was unfortunate for a wonderful career to endlike that.When the carpenter finished his work, his employer came to inspect the house. Then hehanded the front-door key to the carpenter and said, This is your house. Its my gift to you.The carpenter was shocked!What a shame! If he had known he was building his own house, he would have done it all sodifferently.So it is with us. We build our lives, a day at a time, often putting less than our best into thebuilding. Then, with a shock, we realize we have to live in the house we have built. Therefore,build it wisely!【写作内容】1. 请你以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 请你以约120词以Build your life wisely!为话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1)读了短文之后，你觉得文中木匠的做法明智吗？(2)我们能以木匠建房的态度去对待我们的生活吗？为什么？(3)你觉得我们应该如何对待生活才是明智的？【写作要求】你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。【参考范文】读写任务：A carpenter felt regretful when he knew the last house he had built impatientlywas a gift for his retirement, which reminds us that we should build our life wisely.It is absolutely unwise of the carpenter to end up his career in this way. Treatinghis last job carelessly made him lose not only a good house but also his fame as anoutstanding house builder.There is no doubt that we shouldnt treat our life as the carpenter did. A saying goes,How you treat life, and how life treats you! If we are unwilling to face or deal withour life correctly, it will reward us nothing.Then how can we build our life wisely? Its fairly simple. The only answer is tobe serious. Only when you treat all the matters happening in your life seriouslycan you learn and gain a lot, which is beneficial as well as wise.【2020高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，英国交换生Anna将来你校学习中文并住在你家（幸福路58号）, 请你应她的要求，根据下图介绍你家周边的情况，以便她初步了解在中国的生活。注意;1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节使行 文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Anna,I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.I cant wait to see you in China.Yours Li Hua【参考范文】书面表达：Dear Anna,I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.My home is at No.58, Xingfu Road, just opposite a bank. A five-minute walk from my home along Xingfu Road westward will bring you to a crossroads, where Xingfu Road meets Youyi Street. On the southeast corner of the crossroads lies a shopping mall, where you can get everything you need. Walk north for about 300 meters, along Youyi Street, and youll see our school on the right. There we will spend most of the daytime. At the east end of Xingfu road stands the new railway station and its easy to reach, as a bus stop is just next to my home and No.26 or No.46 bus will directly take you there.I cant wait to see you in China. YoursLi Hua【2020高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，是高三某班班长。为了丰富同学们的课外生活，班级准备成立一个自行车俱乐部(cycling club)。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一则口头通知。通知如下：1.每周训练一次，由体育老师辅导，安排在每周三下午第三节的课外活动时间；2.注意事项：器材自备；活动免费。3. 到班长那里报名。注意：1. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；2. 词数100 左右。【参考范文】One possible version:Attention, please, everyone. Ever since we entered Seni