河南省鹤壁市综合高中2020年高考英语作文复习专题9

河南省鹤壁市综合高中2020年高考英语作文复习专题9对比类写作一般有两种方式：一是集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的诸种特征）；二是逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者的异同）。对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种：一、今昔对比在作今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。谈到过去的情况要用过去时态（主要是一般过去时），谈到现在的情况要用现在时态（主要是一般现在时）。今昔对比的写作格式是：开头（提出什么事情发生了变化）对具体事例作对比结论。写作方式既可采用集中比较，也可采用逐点比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：1. 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years.Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since 自从以来，事情有了好转/改善。Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.2. 对比常用句型(1) used to, but now 过去常，但是现在(2) in the past, but now 在过去，但是现在(3) once, but now 曾经.，但是现在(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了。Where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home.Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.在作对比时，为避免句型重复，可适当变换一些句式，比如：(1) Another change is 再有一个变化是Another big change is in the housing conditions.(2) Whats more, 还有Whats more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past.3. 结尾常用句型In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.2020年北京春季高考题范文Changes In Our LifeOver the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句). Take my family for example(过渡句). My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home(对比一). And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三). In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句).在写这类文章时，首先要写好主题句。同学们在审题时要把握全局，把全文要说明的主题在第一句交待清楚。然后根据所给材料，展开今昔对比。对比时不要单调地使用同一句型，要稍有变化，并中间要有恰当的过渡句。最后写好总结句，即你对这种现象做出自己的理解或判断。Passage 21云南省祥云一中2020届高三第二次月考）假如你是李华，目睹了近年来你所在城市的变化。你写了一篇有关城市变化及所带来的思考的短文寄给某英语报社。短文包括城市的变化，并表达你的感受和建议：在建设和发展的同时，还应加强文物和古迹保护，以传承文化。几年前满街小商铺，小卖摊点，拥挤，垃圾现在街道宽敞，沿街种植了绿树和鲜花，新建了公园和高楼注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：摊点：stalls 历史文物historical relics练后总结：3) 典型错句：4) 相关词汇：5) 参考范文：Our city has changed greatly over the last few years. Streets used to be narrow, with old buildings and stalls crowded together, and litter everywhere. Nowadays the streets are wider, cleaner and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks. However, in creating a more modern city some tradition has been lost. Some of the historical buildings have been torn down and high rise buildings and parks have been built in their place. The ancient culture has disappeared, and our city has become the same as all other cities: modern, clean but without its own special character. Are all changes good changes? I think we should do something to protect our historical relics at the same time.Passage 22020年江西师大附中、鹰潭一中、宜春中学、临川一中、南昌三中五校联考)以下是某英文报联合你校对你市（Kangming City）1998年到2020年家庭消费变化的图表，请据此写一篇短文，做一文字说明。文章的开头已经给出。词数110左右。图 表 1 图 表 2The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2020. 练后总结：1 典型错句：2 相关词汇：3 参考范文：The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2020. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2020, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2020.Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.二、正反观点对比对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写作时，常使用一般现在时。写作格式一般是：提出问题两种不同观点对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。有时题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由。写作方式一般采用集中比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：正反观点对比常用句型(1) We have a discussion about 我们对进行了一次讨论。Weve had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.(2) We have had a survey on 我们对开展了一次调查。Weve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to schools.(3) Opinions are divided on the question. 在这个问题上意见有分歧。(4) Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 有两种不同意见。(5) Others have different opinions. 其他人有不同看法。(5) Sixty percent of the students are for the idea, while forty percent of the students think otherwise. 有60%的学生支持这个观点，然而有40%的学生则不这样认为。(6) Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to, but forty percent of the students dont think so. 60%的学生认为是必须的，而40%的学生则不这样认为。(7) On the one hand, On the other hand, 一方面，另一方面在对某一观点作进一步论证时，可用下列句型：(1) Whats more, 还有就是Whats more, we can get a good knowledge of the culture and social customs of the country where we study, as well as improve our English.(2) Besides, 除此之外Some students cannot discipline themselves. Besides, its far too expensive to study abroad, which is a load to the family.当然在提出多个论据时，也可用First, Second, Third, 来列举论据。2002年高考题范文Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题).Opinions are divided on the question(过渡句). 60of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge(观点一). People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away(论据一). What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city(论据二).On the other hand, 40 think that fees should be charged(观点二) because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers(论据一), and to buy plants and young trees(论据二). They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.Yours trulyLi Hua可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。高考英语书面表达正反观点议论文写作指导一、构思-文章结构正反观点对比类的文章:开头：提出问题主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由结尾：说明自己观点二、表示不同观点的套语v总起:Different people hold different opinions.Opinions are divided.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.v表达不同观点:of them hold the opinion that .of them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for/against the idea think Some people believe that. Others argue that v不同观点之间的衔接:However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion.People who are against it dont think so.However, each coin has two sides.Different from those., people think .On the other hand, people object that .并列关系：and, as well as, also递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, whats more比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other handPassage 23南省祁阳四中2020届高三第一次月考）时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此人们评价不一。请你对此现象谈谈个人看法：要求：1词数：120词左右。2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。练后总结：1. 典型错句：2相关词汇：3参考范文：At present, short messages are widely involved in various TV programsPeople react to them in different waysDefenders hold the view that short messages offer the audiences more chances to participate in the live programsIn this way, the mass media benefit a lot from themOn the other hand, they appeal to the need of the young peopleCritics accuse that if the short messages are out of control, we cannot ensure the taste of the programsWhats more, the expenses may make audiences feel badTo make matters worse, some adolescents are so addicted to them that too much time and energy are wastedAs far as I am concerned, the short message is typical of information technology, but it is a powerful tool that needs to be used with carePassage 24江西省九江市六校2020届高三上学期第一次联考）越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住宿舍。请根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文，说说各自的好处与坏处，并表明自己的观点。1学习时间； 2. 安全； 3. 自由性； 4. 与同学交往； 5. 学习效果。注意： 1. 可从其他角度阐述，但两方面的理由都至少要有两条；2词数100左右。宿舍：dorm练后总结：1典型错句：2. 相关词汇：3. 参考范文：Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school.There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of course it is safer. A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adopt to each other, thus preparing for the social life in the future.As for renting houses to live alone, its better for study ,as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.Passage 25(河北省衡水中学2020届高三下学期第一次调研考试)人们的生活水平越来越高, 购买汽车的人越来越多。下面是人们对于个人购买汽车的两种不同的意见，请根据这两种看法，写一篇短文，并表达自己对于这件事情的看法。赞成反对1. 个人购买汽车可加速汽车工业的发展；2. 上下班方便；3. 使人们的生活多姿多彩。1. 使道路更加拥挤；2. 使污染更加严重；3. 使得能能源的供应更加紧张。注意： 1词数：100左右（不包括已给的起始句）。As time goes on, people are getting richer and their life is getting better and better. _练后总结：1典型错句：2 相关词汇：3 参考范文：As time goes on, people are getting richer and their life is getting better and better. As a result, more people are ready to buy cars for their own use. But different people have different ideas about whether they should buy cars for personal use.Some people hold the belief that buying cars for personal use can help develop motor industry in our country. With the help of cars, it will be convenient for them to go to and off work. Besides, cars can make their life more colourful and beautiful.As we all know, every coin has two sides. Some people think that more personal cars will make roads more crowded and produce more dirty gases. In addition, more cars will use more resources. Therefore, too many cars will make energy supply more demanding.As far as I am concerned, I think it necessary for people to buy their own cars as long as they are able to.三、数据分析比较此类题目要求考生通过对数据的分析比较得出某一结论或说明某一现象。在写作时不要对数据进行简单的列举，而是要通过对数据进行分析，得出某一结论。即应该通过对数据比较得出某物增长了多少或减少了多少，而不是简单的写成今年是多少去年是多少。时态常用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作方式最好采用逐个比较而不宜采用集中比较。写作格式一般是：说明现象数据比较得出结论。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：常用句型：1. We can see from the chart that. 我们可以从图表中看出2. We can see from the table that 我们可以从表格中看出We can see from the chart above that the environment in the Yellow River Valley is getting worse and worse.3. A has increased by X%. A增长了X%。4. A has doubled in the past five years. A在过去五年里增长了两倍。范文北京近年来交通工具发生了很大变化。请根据下表和所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，以便刊登在某家对外发行的英语杂志上。年份交通工具自行车出租车私人汽车公共汽车20011,000,000125,000250,70017,60020021,650,000273,000390,80018,900特点方便，健身快捷，便宜富有慢，脏，拥挤Along with the city development, the transport system is also changing(主题句). We did a survey on the different transportations.According to the result, people more and more prefer convenient transportations, like taxi, which doubled in the past year(比较一). Besides, private cars have been increasing rapidly with the high living standard(比较二). While public bus, which was considered the main transport in the city, now is thought by most people dirty and crowded(比较三). But on the other hand, bicycle, as another traditional transportation, is still widely accepted for its convenience and benefit to peoples health(比较四).In a word, people are enjoying an easier and more conventional life(总结句).数据比较类文章通常也要求先提出主题句，即通过数据比较要说明的问题。接下来对数据进行比较。在边进行比较时边说明问题，在进行多项比较时，要注意句与句之间的过渡与衔接。最后要写好总结句，即你对这一现象作出自己的理解。Passage 265湖北省黄冈中学2020届高三2月月考英语试题)下表是对某中学高三（1）班50个学生健康问题的调查表。请根据表格内容，综述学生当前存在的健康问题，并就中学生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建议。 问题类型学习焦虑逆反心理缺乏交往睡眠不足缺乏锻炼视力不佳人数352015402535比例70%40%30%80%50%70%要求：1词数100左右；2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3开头已经给出，不计字数。As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, _练后总结：1典型错句：2相关词汇：3参考范文：As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxiety as well as poor eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed wont obey their parents or teachers. In addition, Still fewer claim not to have enough communication with others.Passage 27(福建省厦门外国语学校2020届高三