高一 Writing

人教课标高一必修1Unit3,Unit3TravelJournal,para1:开门见山,写明自己此次写信来的目的(介绍自己的旅游经历)Imwritingtotellyouaboutmytripto.,Para2body(具体细节),、构思:时间:lastweek/lastmonth/yesterday/人物:A、andI(列举时我“I”要放最后)事件:travelledtoChengdu方式:bytrainLastweekmyparentsandItravelledtoChengdubytrain。2.具体内容(按时间或空间顺序写)Onthefirstday:wewentto.;onthesecondday:wewentto.onthethirdday:wewentto,去某地旅行,都用goto(wentto)显得太单调,变换一下句式:去某地:visit(visited)travelto(travelledto)gotovisit(wenttovisited)payavisitto(paidavisitto)tour(toured)旅行方式bytrain/byair/bysea/goto.onfoot,Para2body(具体细节),词句推敲去各旅游景点的收获:(即去目的是做/看什么的?)1.接近大自然:getclosetonature2.欣赏美景:enjoythebeautifulsights/scenery3.对名人表达尊敬:showourrespectforsb4.学习某地的历史：learnthehistoryofsomeplaces5.做某事很快乐havefun/agreattimedoingsth.,形成段落para2,LastweekmyparentsandItravelledtoCheng-dubytrain.Afterwegotoffthetrain,wewenttoMountQingcheng,wherewegotclosetonatureandenjoyedthebeautifulsights.Thenextday,wevisitedDuFusThatchedCottagetoshowourrespectforthepoetwhoreallycaredaboutthepoor.Onthethirdday,wetouredDujianyan,whichhasexistedforthousandsofyears(whichhasalonghistoryofthousandsofyears),Para3总结感想和感受,Allinall,wehadagreatfungoingsightseeinginChengdu.Ihopeyoucanvisitit(payavisittoit)nexttimeyoucometoChina.Itisreallyabeautifulcity.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.(Ihopetohearfromyousoon).(我希望不久收到你的信。)(Takegoodcareofyourselfandwriteoften)(多保重，常来信。),对于非常正式的书信，开头句是很重要的。另外，信的内容中的每个段落，只能有一个中心思想，这样看信的人可以清楚、明白你所要表达的内容。为了表达的清楚，还要尽可能地用短句，少用长句、难句。段落也宜短不宜长，尤其开头和结尾两段更应简短。,Takegoodcareofyourselfandwriteoften.多保重，常来信。Ihopetohearfromyousoon.我希望不久收到你的信。Sayhellotoyourparentsforme.请代我向您父母问好。,Takecare!多保重！Bestregards/wishes谨此致意Kindregards致意Yourssincerely您真诚的；.Yoursfaithfully您忠实的Regards致意,ImaginethatyouareafriendofWangKun.WriteashortemailaskingaboutLaos.,WhatisthefoodlikeinLaos?Whatdoyouthinkofthecountry?Howwasyourtrip?,Haveyoumeet?Whendidyoucomeback?Whatkindofthingsdidyousee?Couldyougivememoredetailsabout?Couldyoutellmeabout?,Choosetwoorthreequestionsanduseeachasanewparagraph.,Haveanice/goodtime.Havefun.Goodluckonyourjourney.Takecare.Bestwishes.,Mail,Address,To:,Subject:,WangKun,AboutLaos,DearWangKun,Howareyouthesedays?IkeepwonderinghowyoufeelaboutBestwishes!Yourfriendforever,DearWangKun,Howareyouthesedays?Ikeepworryingaboutyouallthetime._wasyourtrip?Ithinkyoumust_.,How,haveagreatfun,Idecideto_Laosnextweek.SoIwritetoyoutoasksome_aboutLaosbecauseIneedtodosome_.Couldyougiveme_aboutLaos?IhopeyoutellmesomethingaboutLaos.,travelin,information,preparations,moredetails,Bestwishes!YoursMary,DearWangKun,Howareyouthesedays?Ikeepworryingaboutyouallthetime.Howwasyourtrip?Ithinkyoumusthaveagreatfun.,IdecidetotravelinLaosnextweek.SoIwritetoyoutoasksomeinformationaboutLaosbecauseIneedtodosomepreparations.CouldyougivememoredetailsaboutLaos?IhopeyoutellmesomethingaboutLaos.Bestwishes!YoursMary,Doyouhavelogicalideas(逻辑)andclearstructure?Haveyouusedsomeusefulexpressionsanddifferentsentencestructures?,.Haveyouusedsomeeffectiveconjunctions(适当的连词)?.Areyousureyoudidntmakeanyspellingmistakes?,假如你叫芳芳