Writing (18).ppt

ReviseUnit1,Art,授课人：林腾,Knowledgelist,(一)Words,1._v.预言;预测n._2._vi.有感染力;呼吁;求助adj.有吸引力的_3._vt.采用;采纳;收养n._adj.收养的_4._vt.技能,predict,appeal,adopt,attempt,possess,technique,prediction,appealing,adoption,adopted,possession,7._adj.荒谬的;可笑的8._adj.精细的;易碎的;脆弱的9._adj.香的;令人愉快的10._adj.典型的;有代表性的11._n.信任;信心;信念adj.忠实的,忠诚的_adv._12._adj.卓越的;杰出的;极好的13._adj.精致的;脆弱的;容易生病的,ridiculous,fragile,typical,faith,fragrant,superb,delicate,faithful,faithfully,14._adj.过敏性的;对过敏的15.evidentadj._16.preferencen._17.aggressiveadj._18.districtn._19.specificadj._20.reputationn._21.civilizationn._,喜爱;偏爱,明显的;明白的,allergic,区;区域;行政区,确切的;特定的,名声;声誉,文明;文化;文明社会,敢作敢为的;侵略的;好斗的,22.permanentadj._23.conventionaladj._24.contemporaryadj._,当代的;同时代的,永久的;持久的,常规的;传统的,1.活着的;本人_2.拥有_3.巧合地_4.对过敏_5.有吸引力_6.另一方面_7.大量_,intheflesh,in(the)possessionof,bycoincidence,(二)phrases:,appealto,ontheotherhand,agreatdeal,beallergicto,Keypoints,1.aim(sth.)at.瞄准,对准,向(某方向)努力,力争aimtodo.旨在,立志要2.adoptanapproach/orphan采取一个方法/收养一个孤儿3.attempttodosth.inanattempttodosth.尝试/企图做某事4.haveapreference(for.)(对)有偏爱,5.appealtosb.todosth.恳求/呼吁某人做某事6.Itistypicalofsb.todosth.是某人的典型特征,某人一贯如此7.IfIwereyou,Iwouldadopthisadvice.虚拟条件句,did(were),should+doweretodo,词汇练习,1._(碰巧)abusarrivedaswereachedtheemptybusstop,butweignoredit.2.Althoughshehadnevermetthatexpert,sheknew_(很多)abouthim.3.Ontheonehand,computersimprovetheworkingefficiency;_(另一方面),theyalsobringaboutsomenewproblems.,Bycoincidence,agreatdeal,ontheotherhand,4.David_(对过敏)animalfur,sohewontvisitanyonewhohascatsordogsinthehouse.5.Sporthasbecomeanimportantformofentertainment,_(吸引)bothmenandwomen.6.Wewonthavetogothere_（亲自）atall!,appealingto,intheflesh,isallergicto,进阶训练,1.活动的目的是激发学生对唐诗的兴趣。(aim)TheactivityaimstoarousestudentsinterestinTangPoetry.2.他正努力在周末前完成画作。(attemptv.)Heisattemptingtofinishhispaintingbytheweekend.,3.老师不应对任何一个学生有所偏爱。(preference)Ateachershouldnotshowpreferenceforanyoneofhisstudents.4.杰克又迟到了。他的特点是让别人等(typical)Jackislateagain.Itistypicalofhimtokeepotherswaiting.,5.我渴望做的事是呼吁更多的人来关心我们的地球。(appealto)WhatIameagertodoistoappealtomorepeopletocareforourearth.6.如果我的建议能够被采纳我将不胜感激。（adopt）Iwouldappreciateitifmysuggestionwillbeadopted.,【实战演练】假如你是某中学的学生李华，请你给校委员会写一封信，就开办艺术画廊给出自己的建议及理由，内容包括：1.建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；2.画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，也可以开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。,注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Step1:Howtowriteit?近几年高考一般都会给出书信的格式，建议信的正文通常分三部分：1.表明写作意图(开门见山）2.具体建议（主要部分，适当扩展）3.愿望。(简明扼要）,Step2:Organizewords,expressionsandsentencepatterns,artgallery,ForonethingForanother,providesb.withsthoffersbsth,platform,broadenonehorizons,enrichschoolculture,【常用表达】首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.Youhaveaskedformyadviceon.andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.Iamwritingtomakeasuggestionabout.,主体：提出建议并阐述理由。Iwouldliketosuggestthat.IfIwereyou,Iwould.Itseemstomethatyoucould.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingmeasures.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould.,结尾：希望收信人接受建议。注意措辞要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful/helpful.Thanksforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Iwouldbemorethanhappyifmysuggestionscouldbeconsidered.,【参考范文】DearCommitteemembers,Iamwritingtomakeasuggestionaboutstartingaschoolartgallery.AsfarasIknow,therearemanystudentsinourschoolwhoareinpossessionofexcellentpaintingskills.Foronething,theschoolartgallerycanprovidethesestudentswithaverygoodplatformtodisplaytheirownpaintings.,Foranother,notonlywillitbroadenourhorizonsbutitwillalsoenrichours