江苏省东台市头灶镇中学中考英语二轮复习课时方案 书面表达（无答案） 牛津版（通用）

江苏省东台市头灶镇中学中考英语二轮复习课时方案 书面表达（无答案） 牛津版专 题 内 容第 16 课时（总第 50 课时）主备人审核人执教者复习目标：了解中考书面表达的考查要求，提高学生使用语言表达的综合运用能力。导 学 活 动（以达成复习目标作为贯穿全课活动的一根“红线”，从助你补缺、给你定标、请你点击、引你运用、为你指点、推你提升等6个环节去设计整个教学过程）：复习研讨：Task1:Important points一：如何写好一篇作文： 1.审题：时态（注意混合时态），段落（注意各段比重，特别是“我的观点”自由表达部分，不能太单薄（至少2个观点），而且要语句通顺、清晰。写好开头与结尾。） 2.句子表达地道、清晰，一句一句写清楚。（注意标点规范，大、小写规范） A句与B句用恰当的连词连接，段落上要注意层次性。 如：Cooking is fun：Why is cooking fun? First , its a good way to show my love to my parents. Second, its a kind of creation 3. 层次清晰、流畅最重要。 A, 为避免句子单调、乏味，可使句子多样话。如不定式作目的状语： To prevent such things from happening, we should learn to save energy in our daily life. B，可做必要的添加。如森林滥砍滥伐，“Large numbers of trees are being cut down +(and the forests are disappearing fast) C, 用好转承自然的连接词：多用“sothat” “so that” “not only. but also.” “however.”等。 D，不熟悉的不要硬翻，找相近的替代。中英文表达有很大差异，要灵活选择地道的英语表达。 4.每段主题清晰 二：书面表达万能词句：词：As we all know（开头） there is no doubt that. Whats more on the other hand Firstlysecondlythirdly. Finnally.however. so that, in order to, so . thatGenerally speaking.(总结, 结尾 ) In my opinion.句：1. Many people havent realized the importance of .Everyone should understand the importance of .(结尾)2.It句型。 It is +adj +for/ of sb to do sth.3.It has a good/bad effect on.4.More attention should be paid to doing sth We should pay more attention to doing5.More action should be taken to do. We should take more action to do.6. If everyone try their best, the life/ our health/ wild animals/ our environment .will三：作文话题：1.环保： （地球一小时，动植物保护，节水，世界环境日,低碳生活（Lower carbon, happier life）2.社会公德： （创建文明城市，家乡的变化（changes to my hometown）3.学生成长：（Ss development）（身心健康，压力问题，学校生活，终生学习，假期计划，中考打算，毕业前为学校做什么，与人相处，快乐生活，文明礼仪）4. 旅游：（travelling）参观某地，旅游注意事项，带人参观（家乡景点介绍），暑期打算5. 新生事物评点：电脑、上网、手机、机器人利弊谈等。6.全民健康：学生身心健康，饮食健康，身体锻炼四：范文归类：(1)关于环境保护问题, 典型例句：1.Itsourdutytosavewater. /Its our duty to love and protect our environment。2.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman./wecantlivewithoutwater.3. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.4.It is very important to take care of our environment. 5. Butsomepeopledontcareaboutit./ They waste a lot of water in their daily life.6. Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted./Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.7. Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthilyinthefuture.8. We should not throw litter onto the ground.(文明礼仪)9. If everyone can try their best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.10. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我们不节约用水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。)范文： 保护环境例：6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。假如你是学生Jane,你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛，要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题13方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例13方面进行说明，字数90左右。Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:（演讲稿:环保、低碳）I m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example（first）, we can go to school on foot or by bike . when we go shopping we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags. and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!(2)新生事物评价: 1 Computer is becoming more and more important.2 The Internet brings us not only great use, but also troubles.3 Of course, students should study, but we should keep a proper balance between work and rest.4 We can do lots of things with it, at the same time, we should make good use of it.5. Now mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.例：关于中学生使用手机（电脑，电子辞典、机器人等），的利弊关系。可以用对比模板。赞成意见1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。反对意见1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。你的观点只要正确使用好手机，但学习是首要任务。（可自由发挥）Dear Editor, Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Somestudents think we can bring mobile phones to school. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. It is a fashionable and useful invention, but at the same time, we ought to make the best use of it. It is easier for us to ask for help immediately. Therere also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves after long time of study.But others students dont think its good to take mobile phones to school. (总)There are three reasons. （分）The first reason is schools have provided students with public phones, students dont have to spend more money on their mobile phones. The second reason is that the mobile phones can afftect the class. Students cant listen to the teacher carefully in class, it will make the teacher unhappy. The third reason is students cant control it well.If they receive or send text messages, they wont pay attention to their study. In my opinion, if students can use mobile phone in right ways and follow time, its not wrong . People like to become fashionable. But we know that study is ourfirst task. Yours truly,Li Ping（3）健康问题1. It is very important for us to keep healthy。/ How can we keep healthy?2. To keep healthy, we should not only eat the food healthily but also do more exercise。3. I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。4. There is an old saying: “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”5. Either study or work is based on strong body.身体是革命的本钱6. We should achieve a balance between study and exercises to keep us healthy.7. Health is very important to us teenagers.8. Health is far more important than money.9. Good health can help us enjoy our life while poor health leads to nothing.10. Staying up late at night is bad for our health.例：假如你叫李华，你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论，主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼？”。请据提供的信息，用英语总结出讨论情况。并最后写出你的观点。Im Li Hua, After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take allkinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and its a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And its possible to be hurt while doing sports.Every coin has two sides. Just as an old saying says:“Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.”Either study or work is based on strong body. So I think we should achieve a balance between study and exercise to keep us healthy.（4）压力问题：1.Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. 2.Our parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send us to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. 3.We have too much homework and we dont have enough sleep.4. I think a communication/talking with parents is necessary to solve the problem.例：假如你是李华，就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。 李华爱好对太空旅行感兴趣；经常到图书馆阅读资料困惑得不到老师理解观点1.个人爱好有助于学习；2. (至少一点)老师观点时间应花在功课上；成绩就是一切Dear Stephen,I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I dont know how to deal with it and would like your help.You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends. I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I dont think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.Best wishesLi Hua（5）语言学习问题：（How to learn English/Chinese well，The importance of English/ Chinese）1. My favorite subject is English，at the same time, we have a lot of fun in the English class。2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。4. Its necessary to read more and speak more.5. So English is very important and I like English very much。6. Our English teacher often use a lot of activities to make us happy in the English class。7. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。例：假设你叫陈军，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要作为交流生到盐城来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。90字左右。要点提示：1.汉语非常有用，现在许多外国朋友都在学习。2.汉语较难，因为它跟英语很不一样。3.必须尽量多记词，读和写也很重要。4.可以通过看电视和听广播锻炼听力。5.其他的方法Dear DavidIm glad to hear that youll be an exchange student and come to Yancheng to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me.Dont be afraid of it!Im sure youll learn Chinese well.Hope to see you soon in Yancheng (Im looking forward to seeing you!)（6）旅游问题： 1. If you come to Yancheng ,Ill show you around my hometown.2.Yancheng has attracted a lot of tourists all over the world.3.You can learn a lot about the history and the Chinese culture.4.Also, you can go to Yancheng Wildlife World. In the theme park, you can see a lot of wild life, and you can play with some of them.5.When you are hungry, you can go to the Food Street, there you can taste a lot of delicious food.6. If you are an art lover, you can go to the Culture Street, there you can find many things you like. Such as handwriting, drawing and so on, they are all full of the artists wisdom.例：城市文明建设How to make our city civilized：（at home, at school, in society） At present all of the people in Yancheng are actively founding the national cultured and civilized city. As a student, We should do something to make our city more civilized. Firstly, theres no doubt that we should respect our parents at home. We should help them do some housework so that they can have a rest after work. We can also tell jokes to our grandparents to make them happy. All of them should be spoken to politely and taken good care of. Next, at school, we should protect flowers and trees. Its necessary to pick up the litter on the ground. At the same time, we should always keep our classroom clean and tidy. Finally, in society, we should obey the traffic rules. We can give seats to someone in need on the bus. Also, It is a good manner to be polite and helpful. People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution. I think if more actions are taken, our city will be more and more beautiful in the future!（7）学生成长问题：1.Today we are all proud of our school, tomorrow we will be the pride of our school!2.Im sure if you try your best, you will make great progress.3. With the teachers help, he studies very hard and gets on well with his classmates now.例:2020年一模考试金坛卷范文：假如你将代表2020届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的要点如下：回顾美丽的校园，生动有趣的教学，三年来的收获感谢老师的培养，父母的支持，同学的帮助祝愿考生自拟，至少两点参考范文：Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates,It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2020.First, I want to say something about my school life. Three years ago, when we first walked into this school, we were surprised at its beautiful views(beauty). we have worked hard and studied happily since then. As we all know, the teachers here are all very excellent, they often make us interested in class. With the help of our teachers, we have already made great progress. Well never forget the good time we have spent together!Then, We would like to thank the following people for what they have done. Thanks to our teachers, you give us so much useful knowledge! Thanks to our parents and classmates, you give us so much support and help! Weve known not only how to study, but also how to grow healthily.Finally, I would like to give my best wishes to all of you. I hope all our students can make your dreams come true. We all believe our school will be more and more beautiful, and our teachers will have a better