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酸谈学社 上海尤里卡信息科技有限公司版权所有 英语科研论文写作 第 五 章 Improving academic English Kevin主讲人 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 本节内容介绍 01 Writing concisely brevity is the key 0302Building academic literacy 简洁的写作 Cohesion and coherence 完整与连贯性建立学术英语素养 Writing concisely （简洁的写作风格） 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The genotypic determine methods for carbapemase-producing isolates are PCR, mass spectrometry (MS) and microarray. PCR can be a rapid and gold-standard method, but it can only detect a few genotypes once a time while there are a high diversity of genes coding for carbapenemase. While MS assay is a fast and reliable method to detect carbapenemase activity, it cannot identify the carbapenamse enzyme that would fail to provide molecular epidemiological information. Besides, the MS assay is clearly more costly than real-time. Therefore, in view of the deficiencies in detecting carbapename-resistant strains, a rapid, sensitive, special and high-throughput assay like DNA microarray would be necessary for clinical diagnosis, phenotype confirmation and molecular epidemiological study of carbapenemase genes. 修改前： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The PCR-based methods are inefficient to discriminate various carbapenemase genes due to genetic diversity. Mass spectrometry cannot provide information of molecular epidemiology, and is cost- ineffective. Addressing these deficiencies, we herein propose a novel DNA microarray-based method to detect the clinical carbapenamase-producing isolates with high specificity and sensitivity. The proposed assay may have important clinical implications in the diagnosis and the molecular epidemiology studies of the carbapenemase-producing bacteria. 修改后： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The genotypic determine methods for carbapemase-producing isolates are PCR, mass spectrometry (MS) and microarray. PCR can be a rapid and gold-standard method, but it can only detect a few genotypes once a time while there are a high diversity of genes coding for carbapenemase. While MS assay is a fast and reliable method to detect carbapenemase activity, it cannot identify the carbapenamse enzyme that would fail to provide molecular epidemiological information. Besides, the MS assay is clearly more costly than real-time. Therefore, in view of the deficiencies in detecting carbapename-resistant strains, a rapid, sensitive, special and high-throughput assay like DNA microarray would be necessary for clinical diagnosis, phenotype confirmation and molecular epidemiological study of carbapenemase genes. 修改前： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The PCR-based methods are inefficient to discriminate various carbapenemase genes due to genetic diversity. Mass spectrometry cannot provide information of molecular epidemiology, and is cost-ineffective. Addressing these deficiencies, we herein propose a novel DNA microarray-based method to detect the clinical carbapenamase-producing isolates with high specificity and sensitivity. The proposed assay may have important clinical implications in the diagnosis and the molecular epidemiology studies of the carbapenemase-producing bacteria. 修改后： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The genotypic determine methods for carbapemase-producing isolates are PCR, mass spectrometry (MS) and microarray. PCR can be a rapid and gold-standard method, but it can only detect a few genotypes once a time while there are a high diversity of genes coding for carbapenemase. While MS assay is a fast and reliable method to detect carbapenemase activity, it cannot identify the carbapenamse enzyme that would fail to provide molecular epidemiological information. Besides, the MS assay is clearly more costly than real-time. Therefore, in view of the deficiencies in detecting carbapename-resistant strains, a rapid, sensitive, special and high-throughput assay like DNA microarray would be necessary for clinical diagnosis, phenotype confirmation and molecular epidemiological study of carbapenemase genes. 修改前： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The PCR-based methods are inefficient to discriminate various carbapenemase genes due to genetic diversity. Mass spectrometry cannot provide information of molecular epidemiology, and is cost-ineffective. Addressing these deficiencies, we herein propose a novel DNA microarray-based method to detect the clinical carbapenamase-producing isolates with high specificity and sensitivity. The proposed assay may have important clinical implications in the diagnosis and the molecular epidemiology studies of the carbapenemase-producing bacteria. 修改后： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The genotypic determine methods for carbapemase-producing isolates are PCR, mass spectrometry (MS) and microarray. PCR can be a rapid and gold-standard method, but it can only detect a few genotypes once a time while there are a high diversity of genes coding for carbapenemase. While MS assay is a fast and reliable method to detect carbapenemase activity, it cannot identify the carbapenamse enzyme that would fail to provide molecular epidemiological information. Besides, the MS assay is clearly more costly than real-time. Therefore, in view of the deficiencies in detecting carbapename-resistant strains, a rapid, sensitive, special and high-throughput assay like DNA microarray would be necessary for clinical diagnosis, phenotype confirmation and molecular epidemiological study of carbapenemase genes. 修改前： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 简明扼要的风格 The PCR-based methods are inefficient to discriminate various carbapenemase genes due to genetic diversity. Mass spectrometry cannot provide information of molecular epidemiology, and is cost-ineffective. Addressing these deficiencies, we herein propose a novel DNA microarray-based method to detect the clinical carbapenamase-producing isolates with high specificity and sensitivity. The proposed assay may have important clinical implications in the diagnosis and the molecular epidemiology studies of the carbapenemase-producing bacteria. 修改后： Cohesion and Coherence （完整与连贯性） 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 Cohesion and coherence -常用结构： 主题句（topic sentence） point 1; point 2; point 3; conclusion -连接词的使用：since, because, due to, owing to, therefore, thus, as a result, consequently, hence 内容的完整性与连贯性依靠逻辑关系和连接词的使用： 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 Cohesion and coherence T cells play a central role in the cell-mediated immunity. But many cancer cells can escape the surveillance of the T cells by sculpting a microenvironment that suppresses the activity, survival or migration of the T cells, disguising them from the detection of the immune system. Interestingly, in immunotherapy, cytotoxic T cells can be manipulated to recognize tumor-specific antigens. When infused into a patient, the engineered T cells actively attack and destroy the tumors displaying the antigens. As a result, it is compelling to track the engineered T cells in vivo in a real-time manner to evaluate the efficacy of immunotherapy. Improving academic literacy （增强学术英语素养） 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 Improving academic literacy 01 Vocabulary 词汇量 0302 grammars 语法 styles and punctuations 文风及标点运用 解 螺 旋|陪 伴 医 生 科 研 成 长 英语科研写作 增加词汇量 1 广泛阅读 Extensive readings 2