托福作文_写作错误.ppt

AcademicWriting,7类常见错误,1.省略,Wealthyparentsshouldntspoiltheirchildren.,ShouldntImCantHes,ShouldntshouldnotImIamCantcannotHesheis/hehashewas,2.Informallanguage,Today,newspapersreportlotsofcrimesinhorribledetails.,lotsofahostofavastnumberofnumerousagreatdealofagreatamountof,可数,不可数,3.Spelling,英美词汇差异,Theimpactoftourismonthesetraditionalneighbourhoodsmustbeanalysed.Theimpactoftourismonthesetraditionalneighborhoodsmustbeanalyzed.,英式美式seze/ceanalyseanalyzecivilisecivilizepractisepracticeglobaliseglobalize,v.,英式美式ourorcolourcolorneighbourneighborfavouritefavorite,n.,英式美式长短storeystorydialoguedialogarchaeologyarcheologyjewellryjewelrytravellertraveler,词汇长短,4.词汇没有特色,例句1Seriouscrimesharmpeopleslives.,severeoffense/criminalactdamage/destroyundermine/jeopardizeindividuals/man/mankind,serious,crime,harm,people,例句2TheadvantagesofspaceresearcharemorethanitsDisadvantages.,例句2TheadvantagesofspaceresearcharemorethanitsDisadvantages.,bemorethanoutweigh,例句3OurworldisbecomingmoreandmorereliantonmodernTechnology.,moreandmoreincreasingly+adjonarise,5.句子无衔接,1.Theenvironmentisbecomingworse.Wemustworktogethertodealwiththissituation.,分析句间关系加衔接词,Theenvironmentisbecomingworse;therefore,wemustworktogethertodealwiththissituation.,2.Opinionsfromdifferentpeoplewillhelpusfinishourworkbetterandfaster,theiropinionscanserveasasoundinformationchannel,whichleadstoabettersolutiontoaproblem.,2.Opinionsfromdifferentpeoplewillhelpusfinishourworksbetterandfaster,becausetheiropinionscanserveasasoundinformationchannel,whichleadstoabettersolutiontoaproblem.,6.感情色彩过于强烈loveletter式写作,So,weshouldmakesurethatglobalizationdoesnotharmourowntraditionalculture!,!改。So不要和should连用，感情强烈。therefore,7.宗教作为引言,WemustbefriendlytoothersbecausetheBiblesays,“treatyourneighborsasyouwouldliketobetreated.”,引言：名人名言/公认的观点Bible圣经：信仰，非逻辑推理,满分网免费赠书活动：限时抢报价值298元的TOEFL/SAT作文批改卡免费领取猴哥SAT词