高考英语作文如何展开观点

.,TaskWriting-Howtodevelopaparagraphinanexpositionorargumentation?,.,Learningaims,1)2),.,学生的压力来源Sample1Maybesomeonewillaskwhythestudentsshouldrelax.Asastudent,wemustdothehomeworkeveryday,anddealwithschoolwork.Forexample,Whatsmore,wefeellotsofpressurefromstudies.,.,是否该建此墙Sample2Somestudentsthinkthestresswallshouldbebuilt,becausetheyhavestress.Theymayfeelpressurefromparents,teachersandeventhemselves.Iagreetobuildthestresswall.Studentscanrelaxthemselvesandtakeawaystressinthisway.Sample3Obviously,thewallshouldbebuilt.Itcannotonlybutalso.However,problemcantbesolvedinsuchasimpleway.,.,理想的大学生活。（2008广东高考）Sample4Afterfinishingmyhighschoollife,Iampreparingmyselfforcollegelife.IamsoexcitedandIalsolookingforwardtothecollegelife.SoIimaginemuchaboutit.Thecollegelifewillbewonderfulandfree.,Skills：Putitattheverybeginning.Statedirectlyandclearlywhatyouregoingtowrite.,.,.,a.学生的压力来源(梁清华)Itsobviousthatmostofstudentsfeelalotofpressurefromstudyorotherreasons./Nowadays,studentsareundergreatpressure,whichmainlycomesfromtheirschoolworkaswellaspeersrelationship.,Howtowriteatopicsentence?,.,b.是否该建此墙？(欧阳泳仪)AsIseeit,thestresswallshouldbebuiltforthefollowingreasons.C.理想的大学生活（2008广东高考）Ihopetohaveahappyandcolorfullifeinthecollege.,1）直接回答要点,.,Practice1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法（2010广东高考）2).你赞同熬夜的做法吗？请简述原因。,.,1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学校的看法（2010广东高考）Whenitcomestothewaytoencouragechildrentostudybygivingmoney,Idontagreewithit.,.,2)你赞同熬夜的做法吗？请简述原因。(为什么)Idontsupportstayinguplateforthefollowingreasons.Iamstronglyagainststayinguplatebecauseitdoesgreatharmtoourhealth.Atpresentitsauniversalphenomenonthatmanystudentsstayuplateatnight.Myattitudetowardthisisnegativeandthereasonsforthisarenotfartoseek.,.,2）重述要点a.学生压力的来源(刘婉钗)Nowadays,manystudentsarelivingunderstress.b.其它减压方法(郑碧君)Besides,therearemanyotherwaystoreleaseourstress.c.中学生活与大学生活的差别（2008广东高考）（何婷婷）Inmyopinion,collegelifewillbequitedifferentfromthatinhighschool.,Howtowriteatopicsentence?,.,Practice1).请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊2).谈谈独立的重要性。3).我们该如何践行低碳生活？,.,1)请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊。E-bookshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.E-bookshavemoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.IthinktheadvantagesofE-booksoutweightheirdisadvantages.AlthoughE-bookshavemanyadvantages,theyarenotwithout（不无）theirdisadvantages.,.,2).谈谈独立的重要性。(Inspiredbythestory,)Isuddenlyrealizedtheimportanceofindependence./Nobodywilldenythatindependenceplaysaveryimportantpartinourlife.3).我们该如何践行低碳生活？Asastudent,wecandomanythingsinourcampustolivealow-carbonlife./Inordertolivealow-carbonlife,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.Whatshouldwedotolivealow-carbonlifeasstudents?Ithinktheanswersareasfollows.,(说明必要、重要或意义),(怎么做),.,Writeoutthefollowingsentences(asmanyasyoucan),Topicsentencestoshownecessity/importance/significanceTopicsentencestoshowwhattodoTopicsentencestoshowreasons,.,Topicsentencestoshownecessity/importance/significance：,Sth.isnecessary/important/significanttosb.Itis.necessary/important/significant/forsb.todosth.Sth.playsaveryimportantpart/roleinThesignificanceofcannotbeovervalued.,.,Sometopicsentencestoshowwhattodo,WeshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoSomemeasuresmustbetakentopreventthisfromhappening.Itstimeforthegovernmenttodosomethingtoimprovethecondition.Wecansolvetheproblembythefollowingmethods.,.,Sometopicsentencestoshowreasons,Therearemanyreasonsforthis.WehavegoodreasonstobelievethatThereasonswhyarenotfartoseek.becausetheadvantagesareenormousforeveryoneconcerned.Manyreasonsaccountfor,.,Howtowritesupportingsentences,1)解释原因是否该建此墙？Inmyopinion,thepracticeofbuildingastresswall,whichthestudentscanhit,isnotappropriate.Thismayleadstudentstosolveaproblemwithviolenceordevelopabadtemper.,.,2)逐条列举你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施?(主题)Inordertobuildagreencampus,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.(列举)Foronething,theschoolshouldmakerulesandregulationstopreventstudentsdoingharmtoourgreencampus.Foranother,studentsshouldtakesomeclassestoenhancetheirawareness.,.,3)举例说明督促学生认真学习的其他办法(2011佛山一模)Thereareotherwaystomakestudentsworkhard.Forexample,teacherscanrewarduswithsmallgiftsifwedoagoodjob.Besides,studentscanbedividedintogroupstocompetewitheachothersothatwewillworkharder.,.,Skills：运用罗列要点或举例的方法从不同方面展开;要点一般为2-3个;注意衔接，恰当使用连接词。,Howtowritethesupportingsentences?,.,Inordertobuildagreencampus,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.Foronething,theschoolshouldmakerulesandregulationstopreventstudentsdoingharmtoourgreencampus.Foranother,studentsshouldtakesomeclassestoenhancetheirawareness.,.,.,Agoodparagraphusuallyinclude:thetopicsentence(主题句)supportingsentences(说明或支持主题句的拓展句)thecoherence(连贯),Summary,.,Someconnectivewords,1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）tostartwithtobeginwith,next,then,furthermore,finally4）firstofall,besides,inaddition,whatsmore,lastbutnotleast5）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于相对立的两点的情况）6）foronething,foranotherthing（适用于两点的情况）,.,Practicemakesperfect!,.,Jackieisperhapsthemosteasilyannoyedkoala(考拉)attheFeatherdalewildlifeparkinsouthernAustralia.Allthekoalasthereareunhappyandcomplaining.Youwouldbetooifyouwereusedtonightactivitiesandsomeonekeptwalkingyouupalldaywhileyouweretryingtosleepitoff.Thatsright-sleepitoff.Theaveragekoalaisalwayshalfasleepbecauseitfeedsontheleavesofaspecialkindthatmakesitsleepy.ThereasonJackieandherfellowkoalaarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepissotheycanbehuggedorphotographedbytourists,whomakethetripstoFeatherdaleandanincreasingnumberofothernationalparksforjustthatspecialexperience.WhateverdepartmentintheAussiegovernmentinchargeofsuchthingsisnowmovingtomakepracticeillegal,whichisunderstandable.Howwouldyoureact,myfriend,ifyouweretryingtosleepoffindozentimesandsomeround,furrycreaturesmellingof