高考英语作文指导.ppt

高考作文高分卷的特点,根据高考最新考纲、书面表达的评分标准以及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。图片1.png结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。,词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。likeBefondof,beaddictedto/helpdosbafavor句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。,对比观点作文(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为。2.另一些人认为。3.我的看法。Thetopicof-(主题)isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof-(支持A的理由一)Whatismore,-理由二).Moreover,-(理由三).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),-(理由二).Thirdly(finally),-(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink-(我的观点).Thereasonisthat-(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.,解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1.问题现状2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceIproblem-A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,-(说明A的现状).Second,-(举例进一步说明现状)ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,-(解决方法一).Foranother-(解决方法二).Finally,-(解决方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat-(我的解决方法).Consequently,Imconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause-(带来的好处).a,说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First-(A的优点之一).Besides-(A的优点之二).Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat-(A的第一个缺点).Tomakemattersworse,-(A的第二个缺点).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo-(我的看法).FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,-(对前景的预测).),议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat_作文题目_.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一_.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,_原因一_.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,_原因二_.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat_观点一_.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat_观点二_.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，_原因一_.Ontheotherhand,_原因二_.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat_观点二_.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat_观点一或二_.Itisnotonlybecause_,butalsobecause_.Themore_,themore_.,(2)利弊型的议论文Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)_作文题目_.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin_题目议题_.Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,_优点一_.Andsecondly_优点二_.JustAsapopularsayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides,_讨论议题_isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,_缺点一_.Inaddition,_缺点二_.Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof_讨论议题_intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe_讨论议题_.,高考英语开放作文指导,Describeapicture,InterpretitsimpliedmeaningPointoutitsimplicationsinourlife,Giveyourowncomment/suggestion/solution,Structure,漫画的画面细节漫画的夸张寓意(与现实的矛盾之处）,细节,夸张,寓意,Dontcopyotherswayofsolvingtheproblem.Doeverythingintherightway.,读图与立意,细节,Describethepicture:,Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,AscanbeseeninthepictureInthepicture,thereare/is(are)doing,withthedetailsandforthetheme,3.,aglassbottle,withonlyalittlewaterinit,istryingtoattachalabeltoitsbody,toannouncetotheworlditisfull.Itsexpressionsuggeststhatitsveryproudandlookingdownontheothers.,1.Inthepicturewecanseeabottleoflesswaterwhoselabeliswrittenfull.,2.Fromthepicturewecanseethatthereisabottle.Ithastwohandsandtriestoputanlabelwritten“full”onitsbody.Asmileisontheneckofthebottle.Insidethebottleistherealittlewater.,HowToDevelopYourArguments,Arguments,InterpretitsimpliedmeaningPointoutitsimplicationsinourlife,Giveyourowncomment/suggestion/solution,HowToDevelopYourArguments,Interpretationandimplication,Byprovidingpurposeandreasonsoreffects/attitude/judgment,Byprovidingexamples/proverbs/explanation,Byanalyzingthepracticalsignificance/reality,Asaresult,itiswisetoenrichourselveswithknowledgeandtrytomakeourheadsfull.,(Description),(Interpretation,Tips,Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworldslimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedup.,Inthefirstplace,thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Secondly,itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Lastbutnotleast,theworldslimitednaturalresources,suchaswaterandelectricity,willbeusedupsoon.,FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,Whatsmore,Finally,Whatsworse,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;,Tips,AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkonlywhenallofusarefullyawareofitsseriousnesscanthesituationbeimproved.Ontheonehand,itisnecessaryforschoolstoeducateeverystudentnottowasteanythinginanyformandontheotherhandeveryoneofusshouldstartwithourselvestofightagainstwaste.Itisnotuntilallofusareinvolvedintheactivitythatwecanbringthesituationundercontrol.,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。,Tips,养成良好的写作习惯一、书写规范，卷面整洁；二、审清题目，提炼要点；三、组词造句，组句成篇；四、仔细检查，认真修改。,书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（16-20分）完成了试题规定的任务。比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。,Howtogetthehighestmarksinwriting?,agoodpassage(skills),语言第一位语言高级(词和句),内容第二位要点齐全,结构第三位文章分段,一高级词汇-人靠衣装，文靠词装,高级词汇四原则,避免重复原则,地道原则,形容词副词修饰原则,词组优先原则,语言第一位-语言高级,高级句式-抓住高考英语老师阅卷的心理秘诀,四不如,1_不如_好,WithyourhelpIhavemadeprogressinEnglish.,Withoutyourhelp,IcouldnthavemadeprogressinEnglish,双否,肯定,2_不如_妙,Studentsshouldhavethehabitofsmokingbynomeans.,Bynomeansshouldstudentshavethehabitofsmoking.,陈述,倒装,主动,被动,3_不如_巧,Wecanborrowfivebooksatmostfortendays.Fivebookscanbeborrowedfortendays.,4*从句不如分词傲(难点）,口诀；一去；二看；三改一去，去连词；二看，看从句中主语和动词的关系三改，改分词Whenheheardthebadnews,hecanthelpcrying,Hearingthenews,theyoungmancanthelpc