高中英语基础写作-人物篇.ppt党连霞.ppt

基础写作人物介绍,人物简介的一般步骤：Givetherightorder,()教育：education()外貌性格appearance,character()生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)()评估evaluation()概况age,sex,birth-place,background,概况,外貌,教育,生平,评估,人物介绍,三段论,1.主题段-开头段Birthday,birthplaceandfamilybackground,2.拓展段-中间段Appearance,qualities,interest/hobbies,education,bigeventsinoneslife,3.总结段-结尾段evaluation对人物做出综合性的评价。,人物介绍常用表达：1.age,birthdayandbirthplace(个人概况)was/werebornin(place)on(date)attheageofthesonofapoorfamilywasbornintoapeasant/intelligentfamily/afamilyofscholarslive/leadahappy/difficultlife,1)出生于某地某时2)在某人多少岁时3)来自穷苦家庭的儿子4)出生于一个农民/知识分子家庭/书香门第5)过着幸福/艰苦的生活,概况（尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺)1)Bornin_on_,_isa_.2)_,thesonofa_family,wasbornin_on_.1)ZhongNanshanwasbornin3)XXX,who/that_,isabeautifulgirl/handsomeboy.,A.概况（用非谓语/同位语结构/定从，使文章通顺)1)Bornon_,_became_.出生于1989年12月28号，她后来成为一位学生喜欢的好老师2)_,thedaugtherofa_family,wasbornon_.玲子，一个贫穷家庭的女儿，出生于1989年12月28号,December28th,1989,shelater,agoodteacherofwhomstudents,arefond,Lingzi,poor,December28th,1989,译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一.,可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺,1)ZhongNanshanwasborninGuangzhouin1941andheisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.,2)ZhongNanshan,borninGuangzhouin1941,isoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.,3)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941,1.A.概况:,语法，句法高分tips,可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺,译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家，年月日生于一富裕家庭年月日因病逝于北京,Borninawell-offfamilyonNovember2,1910,FeiXiaotong,afamousChineseSociologistandactivesocialworker,passedawayforillnessinBeijingonApril24,2005.,B.外貌,性格:译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发.,Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwhohastwobigeyesandlonghair.Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.,巧用with做定语,B外貌,性格(巧用with做定语),1)梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜LiangZhiboisanear-sightedboy_.2)杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。YangYangisgood-looking_.,withapairofglassesonhisnose,withlonghair,3.educationbackground(教育背景)1)考取大学2)从某大学某系毕业3)获取硕士/博士学位4)出国深造/去日本留学5)读大学时他主修英语。,beadmittedtouniversitygraduatefromdepartmentofuniversityreceive/getamasters/doctorsdegreegoabroad/toJapanforfurtherstudiesWhenatcollege,hemajoredinEnglish.=,hewasanEnglishmajor.,1）肖老师，我们的化学老师，毕业于华南师范大学。MissXiao,ourChemistryteacher,graduatedfromSouthChinaNormalUniversity.2）他爱好广泛，尤其是跳舞。Hehasmanyhobbies,especiallylovingdance.3）他的教学效果：学生用功，进步快。Withhishelp,weworkhardandmakegreatprogress.,同位语,非谓语,with结构,4.bigeventsinhisorherlife(生平经历),serveas(akeyboardoperator)devoteoneself/oneseffort/oneslifeto=bedevotedto(theeducationalcause)makeuponesmind/bedeterminedtodohaveagift/talentfor,1)做(/电脑操作员的)工作2)致力于(教育事业)3)决心做4)有的天赋,C生平(尽量用定语从句,半倒装，润色文章),1）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。Notonly_,butalso_.2）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。ZuLongtaosetanewworldrecordofswimming,_.,isHouYaoweninterestedinscience,hehasagift/talentformusic,whichmakesagreatcontributiontoChina.,3.educationbackground(教育背景)1)考取大学2)从某大学某系毕业3)获取硕士/博士学位4)出国深造/去日本留学5)读大学时他主修英语。,beadmittedtouniversitygraduatefromdepartmentofuniversityreceive/getamasters/doctorsdegreegoabroad/toJapanforfurtherstudiesWhenatcollege,hemajoredinEnglish.=,hewasanEnglishmajor.,C.教育经历：,可以用非谓语动词,使文章精炼,AftershehadgraduatedfromtheEnglishdepartmentofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctorsdegree.HavinggraduatedfromtheEnglishdepartmentofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctorsdegree.,1.在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习,获得了博士学位.,D生平：,可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章,Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.,Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.,1.他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋.,2.他创了一个新的游泳记录,为中国队赢得了一块金牌.,5.evaluation(评价)1)国内外著名的2)在取得很大/快速进步3)获得一等奖/第一名4)为树立好榜样5)高度赞扬6)被授予(的称号)7)为作出巨大贡献,famous/wellknownathomeandabroadmakegreat/rapidprogressingain/win/beawardedthefirstprize/placesetagoodexampletosb/setsbagoodexamplespeak/thinkhighlyofbehonoredasmakegreatcontributionsto,E.评价（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语/词组）,1）裴继升给我们作出了榜样,大家都赞扬他PeiJishen_,soallthepeople_him.2）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,并且将会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住.LuXunisoneofthegreatestnovelistsinChinaandwill_anoutstandingmanforever.,setsusagoodexample,speakshighlyof,berememberedas,E评估：,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,LishizhenmadegreatcontributionstoMedicalliterature.,Leifengsetusagoodexample,soallthepeoplespeakhighlyofhimandallrespecthim.,1.雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都很敬重他.,2.李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献.,概况（尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺)1)Bornin_on_,_isa_.2)_,thesonofa_family,wasbornin_on_.1)ZhongNanshanwasbornin3)XXX,_,isabeautifulgirl/handsomeboy.,monitorofClass12,教育背景：beadmittedtouniversity考取大学graduatefromdepartmentofuniversity从某大学某系毕业receive/getadoctorsdegree获取博士学位主要事迹：serveas做某种工作devoteoneself/oneseffortto/bedevotedto一生致力于concentrate/applyoneselfto专注于makeuponesmindtodo/bedeterminedtodo决心做haveagiftfor/begiftedin有的天赋,成就：oneofthebest/mostimportant最好的/重要的之一2.setaexampleto为树立榜样3.behonouredas被授予；wintheprize获得荣誉4.makegreatcontributionsto为作出巨大贡献,.evaluation(评价)1)国内外著名的2)在取得很大/快速进步3)获得一等奖/第一名4)为树立好榜样5)高度赞扬6)被授予(的称号)7)为作出巨大贡献,famous/wellknownathomeandabroadmakegreat/rapidprogressingain/win/beawardedthefirstprize/placesetagoodexampletosb/setsbagoodexamplespeak/thinkhighlyofbehonoredasmakegreatcontributionsto,1）表递进关系的连接词:aboveall(首要的是;最重要的是)notonlybut(also),whatsmore更重要地是,whatsworse,besides,inaddition(另外)apartfrom(除了之外)worsestill,moreover(此外,而且),infact/asamatteroffact事实上inthatcase那样的话等。（2）表示总结的连接词：inaword,onthewhole(总的来看说),inshort,briefly,inbrief,inall,allinall等,3)表转折关系的词although虽然；尽atthesametime同时；但是despite不管；尽管；不论evenif即使eventhough即使however然而；可是inspiteof不管instead代替；而不是onthecontrary正相反otherwise另外；不同地regardlessof不管；不顾,1.李敏,是二年级1班的健康活泼的班长.她各科都很优秀,喜欢运动,唱歌,跳舞.当她来到学校,有很多英语难题,但经过艰苦努力,她取得了很大进展.2006年,她参加了全国物理奥林匹克竞赛中,荣获一等奖.李敏在工作和生活中对自己非常严格,并乐于助人.,表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语likeverymuch（非常喜欢）love（喜爱）beinterestedin（对感兴趣）befondof（喜欢）enjoy（喜欢）hate（憎恨）betiredof（对厌倦）becrazyabout（对极度喜欢）enjloseinterestin（对失去兴趣）,bestrictinsth.bestrictwithsb,winaprizeincompetition.,dowellin/begoodat.,tryonesbesttodosth.,在.有苦难:havetrouble/difficultyin（doing)sth参加:takepartin,全国物理奥林匹克竞赛,theNationalPhysicsOlympicCompetition,1)winthefirstprize获得一等奖2)winagoldmedal赢得一枚金牌win(won)agold/silver/bronzemedal3)wintheNobelPrize获得诺贝尔奖,LiMinisverystrictwithherselfinherworkanddailylife,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.,LiMin,monitorofClass1Grade2,ishealthyandlively.Shedoeswellinallhersubjects,andsheisfondofsports,singinganddancing.Whenshecametoschool,shehadmuchdifficultywithEnglish,butthroughhardworkshemadegreatprogress.,In2006shetookpartintheNationalPhysicsOlympicCompetitionandwonthefirstprize,概况（尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺)1)Bornin_on_,_isa_.2)_,thesonofa_family,wasbornin_on_.1)ZhongNanshanwasbornin3)XXX,_,isabeautifulgirl/handsomeboy.,monitorofClass12,2）表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语likeverymuch（非常喜欢）love（喜爱）beinterestedin（对感兴趣）befondof（喜欢）enjoy（喜欢）hate（憎恨）betiredof（对厌倦）becrazyabout（对极度喜欢）enjloseinterestin（对失去兴趣）,教育背景：beadmittedtouniversity考取大学graduatefromdepartmentofuniversity从某大学某系毕业receive/getadoctorsdegree获取博士学位主要事迹：serveas做某种工作devoteoneself/oneseffortto/bedevotedto一生致力于concentrate/applyoneselfto专注于makeuponesmindtodo/bedeterminedtodo决心做haveagiftfor/begiftedin有的天赋,1）表递进关系的连接词:aboveall(首要的是;最重要的是)notonlybut(also),whatsmore更重要地是,whatsworse,besides,inaddition(另外)apartfrom(除了之外)worsestill,moreover(此外,而且),infact/asamatteroffact事实上inthatcase那样的话等。（2）表示总结的连接词：inaword,onthewhole(总的来看说),inshort,briefly,inbrief,inall,allinall等,3)表转折关系的词although虽然；尽atthesametime同时；但是despite不管；尽管；不论evenif即使eventhough即使however然而；可是inspiteof不管instead代替；而不是onthecontrary正相反otherwise另外；不同地regardlessof不管；不顾,2.请根据以下资料说明，使用5个规范句子描述全部所给信息内容。,写作内容及要求1、标题：SomethingaboutLiHua2、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容。3、将5个句子组成连贯的短文。SomethingaboutLiHua,SomethingaboutLiHuaLihua,astudentfromYucaiMiddleSchool,whois180cmtallwithblackhairwasbornonOct1st1989.Hisfamily,whichisat138,YucaiRoad,Guangzhou,China,hasgetthreepeople.Bothhisparentsareteachers.Lihuahastwohobbies,whicharecollectingstampsandcoins.HisknowsEnglishwellandcanspeakperfectEnglish.,请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员王楠。11978年10月出生于辽宁。2身高1.62米，体重59公斤。37岁开始打球，1989年进入辽宁队，1993年入选国家队。4训练刻苦，与队友相处融洽。5喜欢上网、交友。6在国际比赛中获得了几十枚金牌，为国家争得了荣誉。注意：1.词数100左右；2不要逐条翻译提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,1世界乒乓球冠军2入选国家队3与相处融洽4获得金牌5为赢得了荣誉6上网,联想词汇,aworldchampioninping-pong,cometothenationalteam/beadmitted,intothenationalteam,getalongwellwith,wingoldmedals,wingreathonorfor,surfthenet,概况（尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺)1)Bornin_on_,_isa_.2)_,thesonofa_family,wasbornin_on_.1)ZhongNanshanwasbornin3)XXX,_,isabeautifulgirl/handsomeboy.,monitorofClass12,2）表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语likeverymuch（非常喜欢）love（喜爱）beinterestedin（对感兴趣）befondof（喜欢）enjoy（喜欢）hate（憎恨）betiredof（对厌倦）becrazyabout（对极度喜欢）enjloseinterestin（对失去兴趣）,1)winthefirstprize获得一等奖2)winagoldmedal赢得一枚金牌win(won)agold/silver/bronzemedal3)wintheNobelPrize获得诺贝尔奖4)becomeaworldchampion成为世界冠军,5.evaluation(评价)1)国内外著名的2)在取得很大/快速进步3)获得一等奖/第一名4)为树立好榜样5)高度赞扬6)被授予(的称号)7)为作出巨大贡献,famous/wellknownathomeandabroadmakegreat/rapidprogressingain/win/beawardedthefirstprize/placesetagoodexampletosb/setsbagoodexamplespeak/thinkhighlyofbehonoredasmakegreatcontributionsto,1）表递进关系的连接词:aboveall(首要的是;最重要的是)notonlybut(also),whatsmore更重要地是,whatsworse,besides,inaddition(另外)apartfrom(除了之外)worsestill,moreover(此外,而且),infact/asamatteroffact事实上inthatcase那样的话等。（2）表示总结的连接词：inaword,onthewhole(总的来看说),inshort,briefly,inbrief,inall,allinall等,3)表转折关系的词although虽然；尽atthesametime同时；但是despite不管；尽管；不论evenif即使eventhough即使however然而；可是inspiteof不管instead代替；而不是onthecontrary正相反otherwise另外；不同地regardlessof不管；不顾,WangNanaWorldChampioninPing-pongWangNan，aworldchampioninpingpong，is1.62metrestallwiththeweightof59kilograms.ShewasborninLiaoningProvinceinOctober,1978.Shebegantoplayping-pongattheageofseven.SheworkedinLiaoningteamforfouryearsbeforeshecame,范文展示,tothenationalteamin1993.Shetrainedhardandgotalongwellwithherteammates.WangNanhaswonmanygoldmedalsininternationaltabletennisgamesandwongreathonorforourmotherland.Sheisreallyagreatplayer.ShelikessurfingthenetandenjoyschattingwithfriendsthroughtheInternet.Youcanfindmoreinformationaboutheratherhomepage.,根据下表内容写一篇120词左右的英语短文介绍美国总统奥巴马。,提示：文体分段时态人称信息点整合,subject主语predicate谓语object宾语attribute定语adverbial状语complement补语predicative表语appositive同位语Cclause从句,Shortforms缩略语,P.,S.,O.,Att,Adv,com,pre,app,BarackObama,thesonofablackfatherfromKenyaandawhiteAmericanmother,wasborninHonolulu,HawaiionAugust4th,1961.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