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,天问教育公共英语王老师 QQ:69731870 2013.3.31,2014考研英语高分作文成功策略,2014考研英语免费公开课 每周日晚9到10点YY频道80162,contents,大作文之历年出题思路解析话题来自以下方面前一年中的时政热点值得反思和探讨的社会问题大学生相关的素质问题普遍的人性话题,历年考题思路解析,2007年：点球瞬间的心理暗示 2006的足球世界杯（World Cup） -当年的热点 人在关键时刻的心理的激烈交锋-普遍的人性2008年： 合作的重要性 “独子”大学生们的弱点：不会分享，难以合作-大学生素质；2009年：网络的“远”与“近” 网络的存在对人际关系的意义-值得反思的社会问题,历年考题思路解析,2010年：文化火锅，营养美味 （佛儒道解构主义等等） 2010年世博会：中国的文化现状和“盛世”心理-当年的热点 2011年：环境污染问题；（环境污染与社会，个人都有关系） PM2.5 此词开始流行，首都空气污染严重；福岛核泄漏，核恐惧大于核污染-当年的热点2012年：乐观与悲观 跟2011年中国经济增长缓慢有关，在艰难的日子里，人生态度的意义-人生问题,考题特点,总结如下：1，与社会时政相关，但要避开黑暗面；2，与人性学生相关，大都要考弱点；,2013大作文出题思路解析,前一年中的时政热点： 民生值得反思和探讨的社会问题：全民健康大学生相关的素质问题：缺乏体育精神普遍的人性话题：冷漠；急功近利,10篇押题大作文介绍,民生：4篇 孩子教育问题；食品安全问题；医疗问题，值得反思和探讨的社会问题：2篇 全民健康问题；老龄化社会的养老问题大学生相关的素质问题： 缺乏体育精神 ：和全民健康问题相近普遍的人性话题：3篇 冷漠；急功近利；不遵守规则；社会发展问题：1篇 科学发展，不再瞎猫撞着死耗子,结构清晰+语言精彩,如何写好一篇高分考研作文,contents, 高分作文要素 如何套用范文 相近的话题相同的类型要会套用范文,contents,漫画大作文之高分要点 段落要清晰（整体） 描述；评论（论证）；总结论证结构要严谨（第二段）总论点 分论点一，论证句。 分论点二，论证句。 总结段要点题，要引申。（第三段）,contents,大作文之高分要点 语言美：无明显语法错误，句子要长短相宜。（简单句复合句和主从句混搭；主动态与被动态交错使用。如用虚拟语气，要用对。）内容要实在，切忌假大空，别喊口号。 书写工整，不要乱涂乱抹。,全民健康类题型,十大押题文章之六（重点！）,文章六：小孩子竟然被诊断出糖尿病，大人惊得目瞪口呆（全民健康问题需重视，应从娃娃抓起）背景解说：现在国民身体素质下降是不争的事实。最近此话题颇为敏感，比如，某些大学因学生跑不动，取消了长跑项目；只有10%的中学生在体育检测中达标等等。孩子们不注重饮食健康，不锻炼，耗在电脑和电视机前的时间太长都是这些问题的元凶。该问题没有太强的政治性，且是愈演愈烈的人们必须面对的社会问题，容易成为考题。,描述段如何描述,How vivid is the cartoon! The doctor diagnosed the illness of a child aged 12 as diabetes, and his (or her) parents stood aghast with eyes fixed and mouths open wide. （以描述为主）Obviously, they did not have the slightest idea how the child could get such disease. （描述段） It is indeed surprising that a child could have such adult disease that is supposed to be far away from him (or her). （论点：小孩子患成人病，为何？） And more similar cases are found in hospitals. The following factors may help explain this problem in a clearer way. （过渡句型，很自然）,论证段如何论证,For one thing, eating too much fat may be the primary cause. （第一分论点） Generally, children love having meat and hate vegetables. And some parents are ignorant enough to offer and cook whatever they want and get them malnourished. （支持第一分论点的论据。注意，论点与论据必须相关，且论据一定为了证明论点而存在！）For another, Lack of exercise can increase weight gain, which could raise the risk of diabetes. （第二分论点）At present, children prefer to sit watching TV and computers rather than spend hours outdoors. （支持第二分论点的论据！）,结论段如何得出结论,From the above statement, （总结词要有）we may conclude that unhealthy diet and too little exercise are the main reasons for children to get diabetes. （点明主题，或者重述主题）Now the total number of people with diabetes in China is far ahead of that in other nations of the world. It is time for us to have to face the inflaming situation. （主题的引申：糖尿病严重性的阐述和人们不得不应对的尴尬和头痛！）,会应用范文,如果出全民健康类题型，但涉及到大学生跑步猝死，该怎么办？,大学生的健康问题，套用该篇！,How vivid is the cartoon! A college student fell dead after a 1000-meter long run, (换这里） and his (or her) teachers and fellow students (换这里） stood aghast with eyes fixed and mouths open wide. （以描述为主）Obviously, they did not have the slightest idea how the tragic accident happened. (换这里）,大学生的健康问题，套用该篇！,It is indeed surprising that a student could die in such a sport that is supposed to help build his body. (换这里） And more similar cases are found in some other colleges and universities. (换这里） The following factors may help explain this problem in a clearer way.,大学生的健康问题，套用该篇！,For one thing, exam-orientated education may be the primary cause. (换这里） Generally, people attach more importance to students study than to all-round growth. (换这里）And some parents are even ignorant enough to confine their children in reading only and get them physically “malnourished”. (换这里） For another, many students are not interested in sports and fitness. They prefer to sit watching TV or computers all the time rather than spend hours outdoors to have a exercise. (换这里）,大学生的健康问题，套用该篇！,From the above statement, we may conclude that lack of sport awareness is the major factor responsible for the tragedy. (换这里） Now the number of college students who died of the long-distance race are reported to increase in a unexpected way. (换这里） It is time for us to have to face the inflaming situation.,抽象命题要具体化,比如09年文化命题比如12年态度问题,十大押题文章之八,文章八：十字路口，红灯亮了，行人本该等着绿灯亮了再走，但大家还是左顾右盼照常过马路。（中国人：遵守规则真的那么难吗？） 背景解说：这个问题表面上是抨击大家不遵守交通规则，实则隐射突出的腐败问题和某些干部滥用职权的问题。（这要感谢我们的习主席强势反腐）定了规则，无人遵守，等于没有规则。人人想要凌驾于规则之上，那我们社会就会陷于无序混乱的状态，可怕呀！,中国式过马路-描述段,From this picture, we can see that at the intersection the pedestrians run the red light when they are supposed to wait for the green light. Some of them even walk slowly as if they were wandering in a park or a garden. （描述为主） Clearly, no one in the picture is ready to obey the traffic rules. （注意语法！）,中国式过马路-论证段,This behavior is worthy of our careful study. Everyone knows the traffic rules well, but if we do not intend to abide by the rules, rules are nothing. （论点）Then what situations will we have to face if we let will triumph over rules?,中国式过马路-论证分层,Our legal rights cannot be maintained through just means. （后果一：正面论证）And even worse, （很明显的连接词）our lives would not be secured in a riotous and bullying environment. （后果二：正面论证）Ironic enough, we may be freed for a while from these social contracted rules and regulations by breaking them, but we will be trapped into a dark world of disorder if every social member chooses to do so. （反面论证）,中国式过马路-结论段,As is known to all, one of the noble qualities for a good citizen is to observe social and public rules. （点明主题）Those who are privileged to be above them will pay heavy price. （引申主题）,解决问题的文章怎么写？,十大押题文章之五,文章五：压力加身的孩子在加班；孤独年老的父母很失落（老龄化问题及养老问题）背景解说：现在社会老龄化问题突出。养老问题成为社会必须面对的问题。养老问题以前考过。但这篇文章从老人们心理出发，他们渴盼亲情和儿女团聚，而而儿女们为了生计辛苦工作，因此有意无意忽略了老人们的这种心理。本文针对此现象，提出了解决之道。,描述段,As is vividly depicted in the above pictures, several young men are working extra hours to earn their living, while their parents are sitting in front of the TVs with frustrated and lonely gestures. （主要是描述）It is clearly revealed that the aged desire for family affections and regular reunion with their daughters and sons.,论证段,This sad scene is worth thinking about. There have been a growing number of the old men year by year who have only one child due to birth control policy. （社会现象剖析） The young need to survive in the fierce competition and harsh economic environment. And their parents left behind or ignored intentionally or unintentionally suffer a lot from empty nest and lack of care. (原因分析）,论证段,The solution of the problem, as I suggest, requires joint efforts of the