高考英语作文道歉信(课堂PPT)

1,第一段：第二段：第三段：,表示歉意，开门见山，说明写信目的,说明道歉原因，对失误或错误进行解释（注意语句衔接，句式多样）,提出弥补措施,请求原谅,道歉信一般使用第一人称和第二人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，同时注意道歉信语气要诚恳，要写清楚给对方造成不便的原因，理由要实际合理，表达得体，充分考虑对方感受。,道歉信,2,1.Iamwritingtoapologizetoyoufornothandinginmyhomeworkontime.2.IfeelreallysorryforthetroublethatImayhavecaused.,3.Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyoufornothandinginmyhomeworkontime.4.IamterriblysorrythatIcanthandinmyhomeworkontime.5.IamafraidIhavebroughtyoutoomuchtrouble.6.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.,Paragraph1Expressyourapology,3,Haveatry,第一段：写信目的，表示歉意我真的很抱歉周五下午不能和你一起去书店了。我希望这个变化不会给你带来太多麻烦。,IamreallysorrytosaythatIcantgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.,IamwritingtoapologizetoyouforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IfeelreallysorryforthetroublethatImayhavecaused.,4,Paragraph2Explainyourreason,1.Thereasonisthat.Therefore,thedoctorasked.Asaresult,Ihavenot.,2.ThereasonwhyIcanthandinmyhomeworkontimeisthatIcaughtabadcoldlastweek.,3.ItismainlybecauseIcaughtabadcoldlastweek,whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation.,5,Haveatry,第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一个重要的班会，那是我没有预料到的(beyondonesexpectation)。我是我们班的班长，所以我不能错过这个班会。,或：我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去年出国深造的(furthereducation)。他让我和他父母一起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了。所以我真的不能拒绝他。,6,第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一个重要的班会(aclassmeeting)。那是我没有预料到的(beyondonesexpectation)。我是我们班的班长，所以我不能错过这个班会。,ThereasonwhyIcantkeepmywordisthatIwillhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingonFridayafternoon.Thatisquitebeyondmyexpectation.Iammonitorofourclass,soIcantmissit.,7,第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去年出国深造的(furthereducation)。他让我和他父母一起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了，所以我真的不能拒绝他。,LiMing,mycousin,informedmethathewouldreturnthisFridayafternoon.Hewentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear.Heaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisparents.Asyouknow,wehaventseeneachotherforaboutayear,soIreallycantrefusehim.,8,Paragraph3Offerasolution,1.IwonderifIcouldhanditinnextweekandIwilldoeverythingIcantofinishthecompositionassoonaspossible.2.Isincerelyhopeyoucanforgivemeandacceptmyapology.,3.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldallowmetohanditinnextweek.4.WoulditbefinewithyouifIhanditinnextweek?5.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.6.Again,IdeeplyapologizeforthetroubleImayhavecaused.,9,Haveatry,第三段：提出弥补措施，另约时间我想知道我们可否另约时间（makeitanothertime）。周六上午怎么样？我们可以早点出发这样我们将会有更多的时间来读书和选书。如果方便的话，就让我们8:30在校门口见面吧。对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。期盼着你的答复！,10,Iwonderifwecouldmakeitanothertime.WhataboutSundaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwellhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifitsconvenienttoyou,letsmeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!,11,Skill1forHighMarks:,Clearstructureandallthepoints清晰的结构和所有要点,TheletterofapologyPara.1expressyourapologyPara.2explainyourreasonPara.3offerasolution,12,Skill2forHighMarks:,advancedwords,expressionsandsentences高级词汇,短语,句子和不同的语法结构,副词的使用：,really,sincerely,apologizetosbforsthacceptonesapology,forgivesbhandinmyhomeworkontimebetooweaktogotoschooldoeverythingIcantodosth,高级短语：,13,Skill2forHighMarks:,1.IfeelreallysorryforthetroublethatImayhavecaused.,定语从句,2.ThereasonisthatIcaughtabadcoldlastweekandIwastooweaktogotoschool.,3.IwonderifIcouldhanditinnextweek.Isincerelyhopeyoucanforgivemeandacceptmyapology.,宾语从句,advancedwords,expressionsandsentences高级词汇,短语,句子和不同语法结构,表语从句,14,ThereasonwhyIcantkeepmywordisthatIwillhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingonFridayafternoon.Thatisquitebeyondmyexpectation.,句式升级,ThereasonwhyIcantkeepmywordisthatIwillhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingonFridayafternoon,whichisquitebeyondmyexpectation.,15,句式升级,LiMing,mycousin,informedmethathewouldreturnthisFridayafternoon.Hewentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear.,LiMing,mycousin,whowentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthisFridayafternoon.,16,句式升级,Wecansetoutearly.Wewillhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.,Wecansetoutearlysothatwellhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Wecansetoutearly,sowewillhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.,17,Skill3forHighMarks:,linkingwords衔接语,therefore,asaresult,inaddition/besidesforonething,foranother,18,ThereasonwhyIcantkeepmywordisthatIwillhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingonFridayafternoon,whichisquitebeyondmyexpectation.Iammonitorofourclass,soIcantmissit.,使用衔接语把句子连起来,ThereasonwhyIcantkeepmywordisthatIwillhavetoattendanimportantclassmeeting