2014年 中考英语书面表达分类点拨

中考英语书面表达分类点拨,Part3,句型归纳,一、写人记事类,1Atthebottomofmyheart,IhavetobehonestandsaymyEnglishteacherisnotonlykindbutalsohardworking.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatmyEnglishteacherisnotonlykindbutalsohardworking.2IlikemyEnglishteachersomuchthatIcanthelpsayingthatsheisthebestpersonIhaveeverseen.3Inlife,itdoesntmatterwhoyouare,butwhethersomeoneappreciatesyouforwhatyouare,acceptsyouandlovesyouunconditionally.4Withoutyou,IwouldntbethesameoneasIamnow.,Part3,5Friendsarethepersonswhocansharehappinessandsorrowwithus.6Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimesandtheconfusedtimes.7HenotonlyledustoanappreciationoftheEnglishlanguageandliterature,butalsoarousedourgreatinterestinexploringsomethingdeeperinthisfield.,Part3,8ThereisnodoubtthatparentshavegivenmealotsinceIwasborn.9Ithinkitsnecessarytodosomethingtoshowmygratitude.10ThesemagicwordstouchedmyheartandIstartedtolovemy11ImdeeplymovedbywhatMikedid.12Iwanttolearnfromhimtohelpthepersoninneed.,Part3,假如你是李英，在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师MrSmith要求你们每人给他写一封英语书信作为纪念，信的内容包括：1.你对MrSmith的整体印象；2简述一次经历或一件事；3你的感受或愿望；要求：书信内容不少于80词。,实战演练,Part3,1段落和要点从题目要求和信的主要内容分析，可将此书信分为四段：第1段描述对英语老师的整体印象和表达对老师的感谢之情；第2段简述一次经历或一件事；第3段表达感受或者愿望；第4段结尾，可以升华自己对老师的感情，进一步表达祝愿或者感谢之情。其中，第1、4段可略写。2时态印象和愿望使用一般现在时，一次经历或者一件事使用一般过去时。,【思路点拨】,Part3,1Forme,notonlyareyouanexcellentteacher,butalsoawarmheartedfriend.2Youcameattherighttimeandtoldmenottogiveup,butfaceitwithafearlessheart.3Aftersayingthis,itwasyouthathelpedmepracticethespeechoverandoveragain.4Ihavetobehonestandsay,withoutyourhelp,IwouldntbethesameoneasIamnow.5AndIamsothankfulthatIcanthelpsayingthisagain“Thankyouverymuch”6Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyouenjoyingteachingintheschool!,【经典句型】,Part3,【自我展示】,DearMrSmith，Howareyou?ItsapitythatIamleavingthisschoolsoon.AtthemomentIreallywanttosay“Thankyouverymuch”_,Part3,Onepossibleversion：DearMrSmith，Howareyou?ItsapitythatIamleavingthisschoolsoon.AtthemomentIreallywanttosay“Thankyouverymuch”Forme,notonlyareyouanexcellentteacher,butalsoawarmheartedfriend.DoyourememberthetimeIwasfacinganEnglishspeechcompetitionaloneandwantedtogiveupbecauseofweakness?Youcameattherighttimeandtoldmenottogiveup,butfaceitwithafearlessheart.Aftersayingthis,itwasyouthathelpedmepracticethespeechoverandoveragain.Thankstoyourhelp,Itookthefirstplaceinthecompetition.Sincethen,wehavebecomeclosefriends.,Part3,Ihavetobehonestandsay,withoutyourhelp,IwouldntbethesameoneasIamnow.AndIamsothankfulthatIcanthelpsayingthisagain“Thankyouverymuch”Althoughyouwillnolongerteachme,youwillbethebestteacherandfriendinmyheartforever.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyouenjoyingteachingintheschool!Bestwishes，LiYing,Part3,1Iamhappy/gladtoreceive/getyourletterandIamsorrytohearthatyou2Thankyoufortellingmeaboutyourproblems/trouble.3Iknow题目中所述困难。4题目中所述困难，right?5提建议句型：(1)Whynot？意为“为什么不？”后接动词原形，是省略了主语的省略形式，完整句型为“Whydontyou/they/we？”如：Whydontyougowithme？Whynotgowithme?,二、困难建议类,句型归纳,Part3,(2)Whatabout？意为“怎么样？”后可接名词、代词或动名词。如：Whataboutgoingoutforawalk?Imgoingtothepark.Whataboutyou?(3)hadbetter意为“最好”，“还是好”，后接动词原形。如：Youhadbetterstayathome.你最好待在家里。,Part3,(4)用情态动词提建议Youshouldfinishyourhomeworkassoonaspossible.你应该尽快完成作业。Yououghttogotothewashroombeforethefilmbegins.电影放映之前，你应该去一下洗手间。Youhavetotellyourparentsbeforeyougooutandplay.你出去玩之前必须告诉你的父母。Youmustbuyatickettogointothecinema.你必须买票进电影院。(5)IfIwereyou,Id意为“如果我是你，我将会”，为虚拟语气句型。,Part3,6Theeasiestwayisto7Doingisthekeyto8Dontforgetto9Theseareallmysuggestions.10Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.11Iamsureeverythingwillbefine.12Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyouagain!13Itsquitecommonforus.Takemeforexample,IusedtohavethesameproblemsandIwentoverthem.,Part3,DearSally，Imverygladtoentermyschool.Ienjoythelifehereexceptfortheschoollunch.Ipreferhamburgers,icecreamsandpotatochips,butwearenotallowedtoorderthemaccordingtotheschoolrules.IusuallyhavelittlelunchandIoftenfeeltiredandcantfollowtheteachersintheafternoonclasses.WhatshouldIdo?Doyouhaveanygoodideas?Pleasewritetomeassoonaspossible.Yours，Betty,实战演练,Part3,建议类作文一般可以分为四个部分：第一、表达已收到来信并了解了对方的问题，并表示理解或者同情。第二、简述对方的困难(难承上启下)，一般可以在Iknow之后直接抄写对方来信中所述困难，或者在直接抄写对方来信中所述困难之后加“right？”。,假如你叫Sally,是Betty的笔友，你收到了她的来信。请你给她写一封回信，针对她的问题谈谈你的看法，并给出可行的建议。,【思路点拨】,Part3,第三、提出建议。针对具体问题使用提建议句型提出可操作的、正面的三到四条建议。万能建议：在学校发生的问题和老师谈；在家发生的问题和父母谈；朋友吵架和朋友谈。建议与建议之间要有层次，可使用first,second,third,allinall或者tobeginwith,whatsmore,besides,inaword等。第四、表达希望你的建议有帮助，或者希望收到对方的来信或者好消息。,Part3,1Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinschoollunch.Hereissomeadvice.Ihopeitwillworkoutwell.2Thoughitisquitecommonforstudentstocomplaintheschoollunch,youshouldnotletyourfeelinggetinyourwayofbeinghealthy.3IfIwereyou,Idliketohaveafacetofacetalkwithmyteacher.,【经典句型】,Part3,4Atthebottomofmyheart,Ihavetobehonestandsaythatfastfoodisnotonlybadforyourhealth,butalsonutritiouslyunbalanced.5Thereasonwhyyourschooldoesntallowyoutoeathamburgersisthatteachersworryaboutyourhealth.6Iamsurethingswillturnouttobefine.7Lookingforwardtoyournextletter.,DearBetty,Ihavereadyourletter._Yourstruly，Sally,Part3,【自我展示】,Onepossibleversion：DearBetty，Ihavereadyourletter.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinschoollunch.Hereissomeadvice.Ihopeitwillworkoutwell.Firstofall,youdbettertryyourbesttoeatmorelunch.Thatwillbringyoumoreenergy.Andyouwontfeeltiredintheafternoonclasses.Then,thoughitisquitecommonforstudentstocomplaintheschoollunch,youshouldnotletyourfeelinggetinyourwayofbeinghealthy.Finally,ifIwereyou,Idliketohaveafacetofacetalkwithmyteacher.,Part3,Atthebottomofmyheart,Ihavetobehonestandsaythatfastfoodisnotonlybadforyourhealth,butalsonutritiouslyunbalanced.Worstofall,thosehamburgerswillbethesameoldhamburgersasyouhavehadamilliontimesbefore.Buttheschoollunchishealthier.Inaddition,thereasonwhyyourschooldoesntallowyoutoeathamburgersisthatteachersworryaboutyourhealth.TheseareallthethingsthatIwanttosay.Iamsurethingswillturnouttobefine.Lookingforwardtoyournextletter.Yourstruly，Sally,Part3,1islocatedin2liesinthenorth/south/east/westof3Youcantakeabus/train/aplanetoenjoy4isfamous/wellknownforits5Ifyouareinterestedin/Ifyouprefer，youcan6Onlyifyoucometoyourself,canyouexperienceitscharm.7Foryournextvacation,whynotconsidervisiting？,Part3,三、地点描写类,句型归纳,8Ifyoucometo，youshouldnevermiss9Inaword，isaplaceworthvisiting.10Wehaveabeautifulplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.11Greatchangeshavetakenplacesinceaboutthirtyyearsago.12Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isfamousforitslonghistoryandsplendidculture.13Beijingduckisoneofthemostdeliciousfoods,whichyoushouldnevermiss.14Beijingisalovelyplacewherethepeoplearefriendlyandwarmhearted.,Part3,假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受。Hi!LiuJing，MygrandpaisgoingtoBeijingnextmonthbecausehehasheardalotaboutthecityandhewouldliketoseeithimself.HesaysthebusserviceinBeijingisverygoodnow,andpeoplecangotoanywherebybus.Isheright?Canyoutellmesomethingmoreaboutit?Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours，Tony,Part3,实战演练,1要点：开头和结尾已给出，剩下部分重点介绍北京的公交服务和自己的感受。2时态：一般现在时；人称：第三人称、第一人称。,Part3,【思路点拨】,【经典句型】,1ThebusserviceinBeijingissowonderfulthatIbelievehewillhaveagreattimetravelingaroundBeijingbybus.2Besides,specialseatsareofferedonbuses.Peopledonothavetospendalongtimewaitingforabusandtheticketsarecheap.,Part3,3IamsureyourgrandpawillhaveahappytimetotakeabusinBeijing!4Atthebottomofmyheart,Ihavetobehonestandsaytakingabusiswonderfulbecauseitisnotonlycomfortablebutalsogoodfortheenvironment.5ItisagoodchoiceforyourgrandpatotravelbybusinBeijing.,【自我展示】Hi!Tony，ImgladtoknowyourgrandpaiscomingtoBeijing._Ifyouhavemorequestions,pleasefeelfreetoaskme.Yours，LiuJing,Part3,Onepossibleversion：Hi!Tony，IamgladtoknowyourgrandpaiscomingtoBeijing.Yourgrandpaisright.ThebusserviceinBeijingissowonderfulthatIbelievehewillhaveagreattimetravelingaroundBeijingbybus.Firstofall,therearebuslinesalloverBeijingandbusescaneventakeyoutoasmallvillage.Besides,specialseatsareofferedonbuses.Peopledonothavetospendalongtimewaitingforabusandtheticketsarecheap.Whatsmore,thedriversandworkersonthebusarefriendlytoeveryone.IamsureyourgrandpawillhaveahappytimetotakeabusinBeijing!,Part3,Atthebottomofmyheart,Ihavetobehonestandsaytakingabusiswonderfulbecauseitisnotonlycomfortablebutalsogoodfortheenvironment.SoitisagoodchoiceforyourgrandpatotravelbybusinBeijing.Ifyouhavemorequestions,pleasefeelfreetoaskme.Yours，LiuJing,Part3,1Richorpoor,youngorold,weallhaveourownhobbies.SodoI.Imcrazyaboutplayingtheguitar.2Inmyschool,Ihavegotencouragementfrommyteachersaswellasknowledge.3Itsourdutytoobeytheschoolrulesandinreturntheruleskeepusfromdangersanddistractions.4IwillneverforgetthedaysthatIhavespenthere.5Ihavelearnedalotthatway.,Part3,四、校园生活类,句型归纳,根据中英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、词数不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已经给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。信中不得出现真实校名及姓名。,Part3,6Inotonlyhaveallkindsofclasses,butalsotakepartincolorfulactivitiesafterclass,suchas7Myschoollifeissowonderfulthat,实战演练,假如你叫李力，是英国中学生大卫的笔友。你收到了他的来信，请你给他写一封回信，回答他的问题，并就这些问题谈谈你的认识和对学校生活的感受。Hi！LiLi，MyteacherasksmetowriteacompositionaboutschoollifeinChina.Iwanttoknowsomethingaboutit.Ihearyourteachersareverystrictwithyou.Isthattrue?Howlongdoyouhavetostayatschooleveryday?Anddoyouhavealotofhomeworktodoafterclass?Howdoyoulikeyourschoollife?Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours，David,Part3,1段落：根据内容除去书信开头结尾，建议主要写两个部分：校园生活(以信中提到问题为主)和自我感受。2人称：第一人称。3提示：内容要积极向上，特别是对待作业多少这类敏感问题。,Part3,【思路点拨】,1Firstofall,theteachersarestrictwithusbecausetheywanttogiveusachancetotouchourdream.2WhateverIdotodayisfortomorrow.3Asformyschoollife,itismyschoolthatgivesmeacolorfullife.4Notonlydoesitprovideuswithdifferentclubsinordertosetusfreefromstudyingbutalsogivesusselfconfidencefromthecompetitionsitholds.5Allinall,Ienjoyeverybitofmyschoollife,deeplyinmyheart.,Part3,【经典句型】,Part3,【自我展示】,_,Onepossibleversion：Hi!David,IamgladtogetyourletterandIdliketotellyoueverything.Firstofall,theteachersarestrictwithusbecausetheywanttogiveusachancetotouchourdream.Second,ittakesusmorethan9hourstostayatschoolandwedohavelotsofhomework.Speakingofthis,IhavetobehonestandsaythatIdoenjoyitbecauseIknowwhateverIdotodayisfortomorrow.,Part3,Asformyschoollife,itismyschoolthatgivesmeacolorfullife.Notonlydoesitprovideuswithdifferentclubsinordertosetusfreefromstudyingbutalsogivesusselfconfidencefromthecompetitionsitholds.Whatsmore,Ialwaysenjoythebeautifulflowersinourschoolbecauseitcanlightupmysoulandtellmewhatreallifeis.Allinall,Ienjoyeverybitofmyschoollife,deeplyinmyheart.Yours，LiLi,Part3,五、图表类,1Asisshowninthechart，2Thechartshowsthatabout60%ofthestudents3Fromtheinformationabove,itcanbeshown/seenthat4Throughtheaboveanalysis/information5Allthingsconsidered,wecanseethat6Everycoinhastwosides.,Part3,句型归纳,6Everycoinhastwosides.7TherearemanyreasonswhyIpreferdoingandthemainreasonisthat，anotherreasonisthat820%like/prefer/dislike，and40%like/prefer/dislike9Some，some，others，afew，several，most10WedidasurveyaboutHerearetheresults.,Part3,Part3,某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。,请根据图表1提供的信息描述中学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中每个数据反映的情况写出你的一个看法。要求：不少于60词。生词：图表chart,实战演练,1Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstohavegoodactivitiesafterclass.2Accordingtothesurvey，3Some，some，others4Seeingtheresult,Ihavetobehonestandsay5Asweallknow,nothingismoreimportantthanhavingahealthybody.,Part3,【经典句型】,建议分四个部分：第一部分交代图表来源；第二部分具体介绍图表；第三部分根据题目要求针对图表2中每个数据反映的情况写出你的一个看法；第四部分总结全文。,Part3,【思路点拨】,6AsfarasIamconcerned,fittingasmuchtimeaspossibledoingexercisecanresultinmyhealthybody.7Inmyopinion,whateveryouthink,nomatterwhatyouliketodo,youneedtogetyourdailylifebalanced.Onlyifyoudothis,canyouliveahealthyandhappylife.,Part3,_,Part3,【自我展示】,Onepossibleversion：Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstohavegoodactivitiesafterclass.Aschooldidasurveyaboutstudentsafterclassactivitieslastweek.Accordingtothesurvey,somestudentsspendtimedoinghouseworkandplayingsports,somestudentsplaycomputergamesandlistentomusicintheirsparetime,othersenjoywatchingTVmuch.However,ittakesmostoftheirtimeeverydaytodotheirhomework.,Part3,Seeingtheresult,Ihavetobehonestandsaystudentsshouldspendmuchmoretimedoingexercise.Asweallknow,nothingismoreimportantthanhavingahealthybody.Andsportscangiveusmorechancestobreathethefreshair.AsfarasIamconcerned,fittingasmuchtimeaspossibledoingexercisecanresultinmyhealthybody.Inmyopinion,whateveryouthink,nomatterwhatyouliketodo,youneedtogetyourdailylifebalanced.Onlyifyoudothis,canyouliveahealthyandhappylife.,Part3,1ItsagoodchoicetogotoBeijingonvacation.2Althoughitsfarfromhere,itsreallyworthpayingavisit.3Beingavolunteerisgreat!4NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.5Itsmeaningfultobeavolunteer.6Notonlycanwegivelovetotheothers,butalsowecanmakethelivingplacebetter.,Part3,六、假期计划类(计划、游记),句型归纳,7Onlyifeveryoneiswillingtocanthisworldbeabetterplacetolivein.8Inmyopinion,volunteerworkissogreatbecauseofitswonderfulinfluenceonpeople.9Themorecommitmentswemake,themoresatisfiedwewillbe.10Thesocietywillbefullofloveandmoreandmorewonderfulifeveryonecandoit.11Inaword,ifwegiveothersahandwhentheyneedhelp,theworldwillbebetterandbetter.,Part3,在即将到来的暑假，学校志愿者协会要招募新成员，请在敬老院和儿童医院中任选其一做志愿者。要求：1去哪个地方做志愿者；2说明原因；3能做什么事情；4对志愿者工作的感受和体会。选用以下的提示词语，并结合自己的实际适当增加细节。Places:ChildrensHospital/No.5OldPeoplesHomeReasons:lovekids,likehelping,learning,reading,playingActivities:clean,wash,sing,dance,tellstories,Part3,实战演练,建议分四个部分：第一部分简要叙述自己的选择，任选其一；第二部分说明具体做法；第三部分阐述原因和体会；第四部分发出倡议，升华情感。,Part3,【思路点拨】,1Iplanto2ThereasonwhyIdlovetovolunteertohelptheoldpeopleatNo.5OldPeoplesHomeisthatIthinkahomeisbuiltwithlove,andIdohopetomakethemfeellikebeinghomethere.3Inmyopinion,volunteeringisnotonlyinteresting,butalsomakesmefeelgoodabouthelpingothers,andIreallyenjoythefeeling.4Asasayinggoes“Ihavetwohands.Oneisforhelpingmyself,theotherisforhelpingothers.”,Part3,【经典句型】,_,Part3,【自我展示】,Onepossibleversion：Dearchairman，IamLiHua,astudentfromClassFive,GradeThree.IknowthatyouwantnewmembersforyourvolunteergroupandIwanttobeoneofthem.IplantovolunteeratNo.5OldPeoplesHome.ThereasonwhyIdlovetovolunteertohelptheoldpeopleatNo.5OldPeoplesHomeisthatIthinkahomeisbuiltwithlove,andIdohopetomakethemfeellikebeinghomethere.,Part3,TherearemanythingsthatIcandoforthem,likecleaningtheroom,washingthedishesandprovidingthemwithsomeinterestingshows,becauseIcannotonlysingwell,butalsodancewell.Asasayinggoes“Ihavetwohands.Oneisforhelpingmyself,theotherisforhelpingothers.”Inmyopinion,volunteeringisnotonlyinteresting,butalsomakesmefeelgoodabouthelpingothers,andIreallyenjoythefeeling.ItssogoodthatIwanttostartvolunteeringfromnowon.,Part3,1Asthesayinggoes:“Earlytobedandearlytorisemakeamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.”2Idobelieveifeveryonemakesalittleeffort,wecanmakeabigdifference.3Itsalsoagoodideatoencouragemyfriendsandfamilymemberstojoinme!4Ithinkitsagreatshametowastewaterwhilemillionsareingreatneedofwater.5Ibelieveourlifewillbecomebetterandbetterifwecandothesethings.,Part3,七、热点话题类,句型归纳,6Itstimeforustoraisepeoplesenvironmentalawarenessandtakeactions.7Pollutionisoneofthemostseriousenvironmentalproblemsintheworld.8Themoreexerciseyoudo,thelessjunkfoodyoueat,thehealthieryouwillbecome.9Goodhabitsplayanimportantpartinkeepinghealthy.10Preventionisbetterthancure.11Aslongaswelookafterourhealth,wecanpreventtheH7N9flu.12OnlyifwepaymoreattentiontoourhealthcanwebeattheH7N9fluandmakeourlifebetter.,Part3,近年来，环境问题日益严重，旱涝灾害频繁出现，日益恶劣的环境问题摆在我们面前。在日常生活中，你通常怎样保护环境？此外，你建议身边的人应该做些什么？大家这样做有什么意义？请你以“WeOnlyHaveOneEarth”为题写一篇文章。参考词汇：important,environment,necessary,save,plant,Part3,实战演练,建议分三个部分：第一部分简要描写环境日益恶化的现状；第二部分详细描写自己在保护环境方面的具体做法，做法和做法之间要有层次；第三部分表达自己的观点并倡议大家尽全力解决环境问题。,Part3,【思路点拨】,1Itisclearthattheenvironmenthasbeendestroyedsomuchthatthesocietyneedsahuge“wakeup”call.2Itisourdutyto3Asforsavingenergyandwater,Ithinkitisagoodwayto4Ithinkeverydropofwaterisvaluable.,Part3,【经典句型】,5Inmyopinion,thetruthalwayshurtsbuttherealityiswhatitisSavingtheenvironmentcantbewaitedanymore.Iurgeallofthepeopletonotonlyfacebutalsosolvetheenvironmentalproblemswiththeirbest.6Protectingtheenvironmentisprotectingourselves.7Asweallknow,weonlyhaveoneearth.,Part3,_,Part3,【自我展示】,Onepossibleversion：WeOnlyHaveOneEarthNowadays,thereweremoreandmoredisastershappeningaroundtheworld,tsunami,earthquakeanddrought,forinstance.Itisclearthattheenvironmenthasbeendestroyedsomuchthatthesocietyneedsahuge“wakeup”call.Itisourdutytotryourbesttostoptheenvironmentfromgettingworse.Firstofall,someofthesmallthingshelpmaketheworldcleaner.Itsusefultogotoschoolbybusinsteadofdrivingcars.Besides,goingshoppingwithoutplasticbagsisabletodecreasethe“whitepollution”,Part3,Asforsavingenergyandwater,Ithinkitisagoodwaytoturnoffthelightwhenyouleavetheroomandturnoffthewaterwhenyoudontuseit