讨论型作文PPT课件

书面表达(满分30分)1.暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷）,注意：1.词数100-1202.短文必须包括表中所列要点。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.,.,2,convenientandcomfortablecostless/savemoney,losethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld,2.increaseonesknowledgeandbroadenoneshorizons/views,spendmoremoneyandmeetsomedifficulties,beginning,havedifferentviewsonsth/reacttosthindifferentways.differintheirattitudestowardssth.,(待在家中),(外出旅游),Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.,some,others,Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Peoplereacttothisproblemindifferentways.Someareinfavorofstayingathome.Theythinkitsbothconvenientandcomfortable.Whatsmore,theycansavemoneyforotherpurposes.ButTheywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld.However,othersprefertogooutfortravelingsinceitcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirviews.Buttheywillspendmoremoneyandmeetsomedifficultieswhiletraveling.,Inmyopinion,itwouldbemuchbettertostayathome.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.Whenstayingathome,IcandowhatIlike,suchasreadingbooks,watchingTV,andhelpingmyparentswiththehousework.Inaword,tostayathomeisbetterthantotravel.,.,5,词汇,句型,语法多样化,1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,.,6,1.(因为)_hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.,Thanksto,Asaresultof,Owingto,Dueto,因为,Becauseof,/with,.,7,2.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,_（所以）wellhavelessfieldtogrowrice.,therefore,so,asaresult/consequence,thus,结果,.,8,3.Therentisreasonable,_,thelocationisperfect.房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。,whatsmore,moreover/furthermore,inaddition,besides,另外(递进）,.,9,4.Theyoungmandidntenjoyhisoldjob._(相反)hefindsthenewjobveryinteresting.,Onthecontrary,However,转折,But/yet/while,.,10,5._(总之),weshouldmakegooduseofcomputer.,Ingeneral,Inaword/allinall,总结,Inshort/brief,Generallyspeaking,.,11,6._(我认为),studentshadbetternotbuyacellphone.weshouldspendtimeandmoneyonothermoreimportantthings.,AsfarasImconcerned,Inmyopinion/itsmyopinionthat,个人观点,Ithink/believe,.,12,递进型：besides，whatsmore,whatwasworse,moreover,even等；解释型：thatis（tosay），inotherwords，or，inthesameway，等；转折型：however，but，yet，although，otherwise,instead等；列举型：firstlysecondlyfinally，first，atfirst，atlast，next,举例型：forexample/instance,suchas,thatis,like,等；,.,13,因果型：because（of），since，as，therefore，so，asaresult，thanksto，thus，owingto，seeingthat等；让步型：though，although，inspiteof,despite,regardlessof等；时序型：firstnextandthenfinally，atthesametime，meanwhile，firstthenafterthatfinally等；并列型：and，or，also，aswellas等；,.,14,时间型：now，justnow，justthen，afterwards，soon，fiveminuteslater，beforelong，shortlyafterthat，tothisday，soonaftersupper等；强调型：aboveall，indeed，surely，certainly，ofcourse，afterall，atleast，atmost，firstofall，等；归纳总结型：inconclusion，inaword，intheend，atlast，finally，tosumup,inshort,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inall,inaword等；,.,15,一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。,1.Anewbuildingisbeingbuiltinourschool.,Anewbuildingisunderconstructioninourschool.,.,16,3.Itisrainingheavily.,4.ThePRCwasfoundedintheyear1949.,.,17,二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词。1.Ilikereadingwhilehelikesplayingfootball.2.Whensummercomes,thedayisgettinglongerandlonger,andthenightisgettingshorterandshorter.,Ilikereadingwhileheenjoysplayingfootball.,Whensummercomes,thedayisgettinglongerandlonger,andthenightshorterandshorter.,.,18,Hardworkingandcareful,thegirlpassedthetest.,ItsIwhohithimintheface.,HowgladImthatyouhavemadesomuchprogress.,三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或感叹句,可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。,1.Thegirlwashardworkingandcareful,andshepassedthetest.,2.Ihithimintheface.,3.Iamgladthatyouhavemadesomuchprogress.,.,19,四、使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句，能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。,Hebeinghumorous,weallliketoplaywithhim.,Inordertopasstheentranceexamination,wearestudyinghard.,Helayonthegrass,countingthestarsinthesky.,3.Hewasveryhumorous.Weallliketoplaywithhim.,2.Wearestudyinghardinordertopasstheentranceexamination.,1.Helayonthegrassandcountedthestarsinthesky.,.,20,五、改变句子开头方式，适当地把一些成份提前位于句子的开头，使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。,Betweenthetwobuildingsstoodatemple,inwhichanoldmonklived.,OnthesurfaceoftheriverisfloatingtheremainsofTom.,Deepinthought,heforgothislunch.,1.Atemplestoodbetweenthetwobuildings,inwhichanoldmonklived.,2.TheremainsofTomisfloatingonthesurfaceoftheriver.,3.Ashewasdeepinthought,heforgothislunch.,书面表达(满分30分)当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜欢住在传统的房子里，有人喜欢住在公寓里，请你以“Liveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartment”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物，可以在院子里锻炼身体。2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近3.我的看法及理由。注意：词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）,LiveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartmentNowadays,moreandmorepeople/agrowingnumberofpeoplepaymoreattentiontotheirlives.,LiveinatraditionalhouseorliveinanapartmentNowadays,moreandmorepeople/agrowingnumberofpeoplepaymoreattentiontotheirlives.Butpeopledifferintheiropinionsonthematter.Somepeopleprefertoliveinatraditionalhouse.Theremightbeseveralreasons,Ithink.Inthefirstplace,youcangrowflowersandtressintheyardifyouliveinatraditionalhouse.Besides,youcankeeppetsifyoulike.Finally,peoplecantakeexerciseintheyard.,However,somepeopleprefertoliveinanapartment.Ononehand,itiscleanandsafe.Ontheotherhand,itisclosetoyourwork.AsfarasImconcerned,Ipreferlivinginatraditionalhouse.MyreasonisthatIlikeenjoyingsunlight,especiallyinwinter.Moreover,mygrandparentswouldnthappyiftheyliveinanapartment.Astheyarguethatitisnotconvenientforthemtohaveoutdooractivities.SoIthinklivinginatraditionalhouseisgoodandhealthylifestyle.,Part1:(beginning)havedifferentopinionsonsth.reacttosthindifferentwaysdifferintheirattitudestowardssth,Part2:(body)some.others/prefertodoA.ratherthandoB.,Part3:(conclusion)inaword/inshort/inmyopinion/Iaminfavoroftheideathat/for/against,structure,.,25,2006高考浙江卷,书面表达(满分30分)当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂读原著：细节更多、语言优美我的看法及理由注意：1.词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）2.参考词汇：originalwork或bookintheoriginal（原著）Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer？Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.,.,26,Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer？,Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.,Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.,Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhatsmore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthorsideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.,.,27,经过调查