英语六级作文模版.ppt

CETWriting,校园生活类作文Campuslife,社会热点话题SocialFocuses,评分标准,四六级作文和托福作文的评分标准是整体式的评分(globalscoring）给出奖励分（rewardscores)，雅思考试的评分标准是分项式评分（analyticalscoring）。因而，四、六级阅卷员会找出一篇作文中的shiningsentences/points而不是寻找错误点。,WordProcessing,评分标准,ThePerfectTriple-DeckerParagraph,破题,自己观点,正反对比,OpposingViews,对立观点型作文通常在提纲中给出两个对立的事物或同一事物的两个对立面，要求考生进行分析和评论,7,注意事项,1.扣住中心词2.进行好坏、优劣、正反对比3.最后一部分表达自己观点,OVERALLSTRUCTURE,IntroducethetopicOpposingviewsPutforwardpersonalopinions.,AnswerSheet,SampleWriting,qdsadWhoShouldTakeCareoftheOldThereisnodefyingthefactthatitisahotlydebatedtopictodaythatwhethertheagedshouldbetakencareofbyindividualsorbygovernment.Tothis,peoplesattitudesdiffersharply.someinsistthatthegovernmentshouldtaketheresponsibilitybybuildingmorehomesfortheelderly.Theythinkthattheoldhavebeenworkingforthecountrydevelopmentanddeservepeoplescareandrespect.Manyothers,however,holdthatitisthefamilysdutytolookafteritsseniormembers.Theypointoutthatafteralifetimetoilofraisingchildren,theadvancedpeopleshouldbewelllookedafterbytheirchildren.personally,Ithinkbothsideshavesomethingright.Ontheonehand,thegray-hairedshouldbesupportedbytheirfamily.Anyonewhotriestoescapethedutyshouldbeblamed.Ontheotherhand,thegovernmentshouldalsogiveitssupportbypromotingtraditionalvaluesandfundingmoreprogramsforthewell-beingsofitsseniorpeople.,高分模板,IthasbeenahottopicforalongtimewhetherT.SomepeopletakeitforgrantedthatV1.However,othersthinkthatV2ThosewhoholdtheformeropinionbelievethatR1.Inaddition,R2However,therearestillotherswhoadvocatethelatteropinionbecausetheyholdR1.AndR2.Whatsmore,R3.So,(SummarizingV2).Asforme,myfavorgoestoV1/V2.ForonethingPO1.ForanotherPO2.AndIhope,高分模板,Withthedevelopmentof(introducethetopic).SomepeoplethinkthatV1.Intheiropinion,R1.However,othersholdthatV2.TheymaintainthatR1.Totheirminds,R2.AsfarasIamconcerned,whatreallymattersisPO.WhenitcomestoIthinkPO.Inaword,作业,ShouldParentsSendtheirChildrentoArtclasses?ShouldCollegeStudentsHireCleaners?ShouldCollegeStudentsGetMarried?CertificateCrazeMyViewonUniversityRankingOntheImportanceofaNameOnCreditCards,作业,8ShouldMathematicOlympicContestbeCanceled?9ShouldOrganDonationbeCompulsory?10ShouldtheUniversityCampusbeOpentotheTourist?11SalaryorInterest12CellPhone,FriendorFoe13SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV,作业,14IsCriticismaBadThing?OnHouseholdRegistrationShouldCollegeStudentsKeepPetsShouldWesternFestivalsbeObservedinChina?ShouldParentsSendTheirChildrenStudyAbroad?MyViewonPremaritalAgreement,Sample,IthasbeenahottopicforalongtimewhethertheCCTVspringfestivalGalashouldbecancelledornot.ManypeopletakeitforgrantedthatspringfestivalGala,thetraditionalentertainmentshouldbemaintained.However,othersreckonthatspringfestivalGalashouldbecancelled.,Sample,ThosepeoplewhoholdtheformeropinionbelievethatspringfestivalGalaoffersawonderfulopportunitytocelebratethistraditionalfestival,forChineseallovertheworldcansharethesamehappinessandexcitementbroughtbytheTVprogram.Inaddition,manyperformancesareveryimpressiveandsomecanevenpositivelyaffectourlifevalue.,Sample,However,therearestillotherswhoadvocatethelatteropinionbecausetheyholdthisformofcelebrationforcespeopletospendtheevemorepassively.AndthepreparationfortheGalaconsumesexcessivetimeandmoney.Whatsmore,agreatproportionoftheprogramsarenotattractiveenough.Soitisadvisabletocancelit.,Sample,Asforme,myfavorgoestotheformeropinion.Foronething,CCTVspringfestivalGalagivesusanoptiontocelebratethisimportantmoment.Foranother,itofferagoodchanceforafamilytohavearesthappily.Butitisreallyessentialtoimprovethequalityoftheprograms.AndIhopesomebetterformsofcelebrationwillbecreatedinthenearfuture.,第一段-引导文章开头的常用句型,1,recentlytheissueof_hasbeenbroughtintopublicfocus.近来，。问题引起了社会广泛关注2,recentelytheissueofwhetherornot_hasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.近来是否。的问题已经非常明确，而且引起了社会关注。,3,nowweareenteringabrandnewerafullofopportunitiesandinnovations,andgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeoplesattitudestowardssometraditionalpractices.如今我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。,thecontroversialissueisoftenbroughtintopublicfocus,peoplefromdifferentbackgroundsholddifferentattitudestowardstheissue.这种极具争议的话题往往很受社会的关注，不同背景的人对他的看法也不尽相同。,5,whenitcomesto_,mostpeoplebelievethat_;butotherpeopleregard_as_.提到问题，很多人认为；不过一些人则认为.,第二段：承常用句型,somepeopleareoftheopinionthat_有些人认为theyholdthat_他们认为people,whoadvocatethat_havetheirsoundreasons坚持认为的人也有其依据。,peoplewhosupport_givesomeorallofthefollowingreasons.那些支持观点的人列出来如下原因：,第三段转的常用句型,butontheotherhand,therearealsoquiteafewpeoplewhostronglyadvocatethat_howevertherearealargenumberofpeoplewhoholdadifferentviewconcerningthiscase.Ontheotherhand,therearealsomanyopponentswhostrongly_,最后一段合常用句型,accordingtomypersonalityandfondness,Iwouldprefer_ratherthan_根据我的个性以及兴趣，我选择Personally,/asfarasImconcerned,Isidewiththeformer/latteropinion就我个人而言，我支持。,Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformerpointofview.就我个人而言，我支持Tomymind,/inmyopinion,theadvantagesfaroverweighthedrawbacks/disadvantages.我认为优点胜过缺点Takingintoconsiderationbothsidesoftheissue,Itendtofavorthelatterviewthat._两种观点进行综合考虑，我同意后者,单一问题解决型作文ProblemsandSolutions,这类作文包括what,why,solution三个要素。从文章结构上来说，即是问题（problems),原因（CausesandReasons)以及方案（solutions),29,文章结构,提出问题：概括性地引出评论的事物或观点。分析产生问题的原因，提出如何解决现象或问题的建议。针对上文的讨论，总结全文得出结论,真题示例,HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview1面试在求职中的作用2取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止、谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是。HowtoImproveStudentsMentalHealth1心理健康很重要2因此，学校可以3我们应当,写作过程,审题打腹稿、写出提纲简述面试的普遍性和重要性（提出问题）分析取得面试成功的诸多因素（分析原因)提供面试成功的方法(提出解决问题的方案）总结全文,SampleWriting1,Nowadays,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatajobinterviewisindispensableintheprocessofjobhunting.Obviously,ajobinterviewoffersyouanopportunitytodisplayyourcapability.Additionally,doingwellinajobinterviewmeansyoustandmorechanceofbeingemployed.Therefore,thejobinterviewisveryimportantforajobhunter.Buthowcanyousucceedinit?(提出问题）,SampleWriting1,Therearemanyfactorsinvolvedinasuccessfulinterview.Firstofall,youshouldtakecaretowearcleanandsuitableclothes,therightclotheswornontherightoccasionwouldgiveagoodfeelingofyouintheinterviewandhelpwintheinterviewersfavoritejudgmentofyou.,SampleWriting1,Inaddition,youshouldpayparticularattentiontoyourmannerofspeakingandtothequalityofyourspeech.Yourselfconfidencecanbedemonstratedbyaclearvoiceandvigorousspeakingstyle.whatsmore,youshouldshowyouraptitudesandskillsforthejobandyourknowledgeaboutthejob-relatedareas.lastbutnotleast,yououghttobehonestaboutyouracademicbackground,forhonestyisthebestpolicy(分析问题，提出建议),SimpleWriting1,Tosumup,thejobinterviewisindeedimportant,butthereisnoneedtobenervous.Onceyouhavetheabilityforthejobandarewillingtoachievewhatismentionedabove,thenewjobwillbewithinyourreach.(总结),SimpleWriting2,Withtheintensecompetitioninjobhuntingmarket,employmenthasbecomeabigconcerntocollegegraduates.knowinghowtosucceedinajobinterviewplaysasignificantpartingettingagoodjob.Therearemanywaysforcollegegraduatestodealwithjobinterviewsuccessfully.Tobeginwith,wheninterviewed,youshouldwearcleanandsuitableclothes.Makingagoodimpressionishalfdone.Secondly,theintervieweeshouldpayattentiontotherateofspeech,pitchandtoneofvoice,gestures,expressionthroughtheeyesandtheabilitytoholdtheinterestofothers.Theinterviewerformanimpressionabouthim/herbasedonthese.Besides,beingconfidencecanmake,SimpleWriting2,youasuccessfulinterviewee.Thesecretistobeconsistentlyyou,atyourbest.Whatsmore,youshoulddemonstrateyouraptitudeandskillsforthejobandyourprofessionalknowledge.Lastbutnotleast,yououghttobehonestaboutyouracademicbackground,forhonestyisthebestpolicy.AsforasImconcerned,thejobinterviewiscritical.Ontheonehand,oneshouldpreparewellandseizetheopportunity.Ontheotherhand,oneshouldberelaxedandconfident.Allinall,themanwhoknowsbetterhowtosucceedinajobinterviewstandsabetteropportunitytobefavored.,写作模板,ItisgenerallyacceptedthatNowadays,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatToday,Howtohasbecomeamatterofconcern.Nowpeopleareincreasinglyaware/consciousofRecentlytheproblemofhasbeeninthelimelight,写作模板,TherearemanywaystoInthefirstplace,.;Inthesecondplace,.;whatsmore,;Whydomanypeople?Onereasonisthat_.Anotheroneis_.Thephenomenonismainly/partlyattributedto_.Measuresmustbetakentosolvetheproblemof_.Bothgovernmentandordinarycitizensshouldjoinhandstomakethisworldabetterplacetolivein,notonlyforourselvesbutalsoforfuturegeneration.,写作模板,Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat_.itistimeweputconsiderableemphasisonthedevelopmentof_.,Tips:DosandDonts,ThingstoCheckFor:Correctspelling,grammar,completesentencesandpunctuation.Didyourepeatwordsand/orphrases?Wereyouclear?Hasyouressaybeenproofread?,Assignment,Directions:youshouldwriteacompositiononthetopicofHowIFinanceMyCollegeEducationyoushouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow:上大学的费用(tuitionandfees)可以通过多种渠道解决；那种渠道适合我（说明理由）,细化提纲,目前大学生缴纳的学费越来越高，如何支付学费成了大学生们关注的焦点。现实生活中存在多种支付学费的途径，如父母支付，自己打工，银行贷款等。陈述个人的观点，尤其要详细说明原因。,范文,Withtherapiddevelopmentofhighereducationinchina,universitiesarenolongerfinancedexclusivelybythegovernmentandstudentsmustpayatleastpartfortheirschooling.Thenhowtofinancetheircollegeeducationisbecomingabigconcerntostudentsandthesociety.,范文,Therearevariouswaysforastudentstopayhistuitionandfees.ifastudentisquiteexcellentinhisstudies,hecanapplyforscholarships.Ifastudentwasborninawealthyfamily,hecandependonhisparentstocompletehiscollegelife,whichistotalllyacceptedinChineseculture.However,manyotherchoicesareavailable,astudent,whetherrichorpoor,canturntobankforaloan,whichheorshecanrepayaftergraduation.,范文,AsforasIamconcerned,doingaparttimejobisawisechoice,ontheonehand,Icanmakemoneytocutdownonthefinancialburdenofmyfamily,ontheotherhanditcanhelpmetounderstandthevalueofhardworkandaccumulateworkingexperiences,bothofwhichareessentialformywholelifejourney.Insum,we,collegestudents,shouldchooseasuitablewaytofinanceoureducationsothatwecanfinishoureducationsmoothly.,作业,Jobhunting1大学生找工作难2原因很多3解决的办法Howtokeeppsychologicallyhealth1心里问题往往是导致疾病的原因之一2分析人们产生心理问题的原因（失业，压力过大。缺少支持，缺乏人际交往能力3你认为如何保持心理健康,第一段,Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplebegintorealize/beawareof/noticetheimportance/significance/seriousnessoftheproblemof_.现在越来越多的人Thereisnodenyingthatspecialattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof_.Ifweignoretotheproblem,itisverylikelythat_.开始注意到.问题的严重性。,第二段,Therearemany/several/avarietyofcauses/reasonsforthis_in_Thephenomenonismainly/partlyattributedto_.造成.的原因有很多。,第三段,Theresupposedtobetwoeffectivemeasures,ontheonehand,we,ontheotherhand,we通常认为有两种有效的措施，其一是其二是Measuresmustbetakentosolvetheproblemof_必须采取措施来解决.的问题,现象解释类,如果提纲要求对一种现象产生的原因或带来的影响进行解释，则归为现象解释类作文。,现象解释类,DigitalAge1数字化产品得到广泛使用2对人类工作、学习和生活产生的影响WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBook?1电子图书越来越多2取代传统图书，原因是3我的看法,现象解释类,DueAttentionShouldbeGiventoSpellingDueAttentionShouldbeGiventoTheStudyofChinese1忽视学习中文的现象2出现这种现象的原因和后果3为了改变这种现象，我认为,现象解释类,TheImpactOftheInternetonInterpersonalCommunication(2012.6)漫画、图表whatelectivestochoose1各大学开设各种各样的选修课2学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3以你为例,现象解释类,TraditionalOperasareGainingRevivalonCampus今年来由越来越多的大学生对传统戏剧感兴趣分析产生这一现象的原因你对此的看法FreeAdmissiontoMuseumsStudentsUseofComputers2002OnStudentsSelectingLectures,现象解释类,要求学生从试题的提示性文字，图表或图画入手描述它们反映的现象，并对该现象进行解释说明，分析其原因，影响前景等并加以评述。结构：首先描述现象并说明其现状；然后分析这种现象的原因呢，相关因素带来的影响；然后对现象做出品论或提出建议.,现象解释类Sample1,E-learning1)近年来网络学习越来越流行2）产生这种现象的原因3）分析其带来的好处,现象解释类Sample1,Inrecentyears,manypeoplehavechosene-learningasawaytofurthertheirstudy.Withtherapiddevelopmentoftechnologyandpeoplesincreasingdemandforeducation,e-learningoron-linelearninghasledanewtrendofeducation.Inaddition,insomeareas,e-learninghasplayedarolethattraditionaleducationcannotcompare.Thereasonsforthisphenomenonarevaried.(现象描述),现象解释类Sample1,Amongallthisreasons,thequickdevelopmentoftheinternetplaysacriticalrole.Itmakesallourdreamsofattendingclassesinthedistancepossible.Moreover,e-learningbreaksdownthebarriersoftimeschedule.Besides,comparedwithtraditionalwaysofteachingandlearning,itisfarmorecosteffectiveforstudents.(说明原因),现象解释类Sample1,Inmyopinion,on-linelearning,asanewformofeducation,willbenefitboththeindividualandthesociety.Ontheotherhand,itofferspeopleaconvenientandflexiblewaytoimprovethemselves.Ontheotherhand,theoverallqualitiesofpeoplecanbepromoted,andhenceimpoliteandcriticalbehaviorscanbegreatlydecreased.Toconclude,e-learningdoeshavealotofadvantages.,现象解释类模板一,第一段Nowadays/Atpresent,.（概述现象）.Thephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopicamongthepeoplearoundus.Thephenomenonhasbeenbroughtintofocus./.(某现象),whichhasaroundgreatconcern.(阐述现象表现).,现象解释类模板一,第二段Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforit,andthefallowingarethemostconspicuousaspects.Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.Thereasons(factors)thatcontributeto.(现象)arevaried.Firstofall/Tostartwith,.(原因一).Inaddition/Furthermore/Whatismore/Moreover,.(原因二).Finally,.(原因三).Onthewhole,.(总结原因).,现象解释类模板一,第三段AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedto.(我的看法).(总结观点).,现象解释类Sample2,OnthepopularityofMicroblogWiththeimprovementofmicroblogserviceandtheinfluenceofsome“starmicrobloggers”,mostofwhomarecelebrities,microblogisbecominganimportantandconvenientwayforpeopletoexpresstheiropinionsandtocommunicatewithothers.Now,moreandmorepeoplestarttousemicroblogservicesprovidedbydifferentwebsites.,现象解释类Sample2现象解释类Sample2,However,microblogmightgiverisetosomeproblemsaswell.Somemicrobloggersaresoaddictedtomicroblogsthattheyexpressalltheirthoughtsandfeelingsinthemicroblogratherthancommunicatewiththeirfamilymembersorfriends.Daybyday,microblogdrawpeopleawayfromtheirreallife.whatsworse,lackofface-to-facecommunicationwithothersmightisolatemicrobloggersfromthesociety,whichwoulddoharmtotheirmentalhealth.,现象解释类Sample2,Inmyview,microblogisagoodplatformforpeopletosharetheirpersonalexperiencesandcommunicatewithothers.Still,peopleshouldhavearationalattitudetowardmicroblogandavoidspendingtoomuchtimeonit.Afterall,sittinginfrontofthecoldscreenforalongperiodoftimedoesnogoodtopeopleshealth.,现象解释类Sample3,TheRushforPostgraduateStudents请根据上述图简要描述近几年x省的研究生报考情况的变化说明产生这种变化的原因我对考研热的看法,现象解释类Sample3,现象解释类Sample3,Accordingtothetable,itisclearthattherewasasharpincreaseinthenumberofpostgraduatecandidatesinXprovincefrom2002to2007.Asearlyasin2002,therewereonly1800candidatesparticipatingintheexam.Then5yearslater,thecandidatesincreasedgreatlytoatotalnumberof29200.(描述表格),现象解释类Sample3,Therearemanyreasonsaccountingfortheincreaseofpostgraduatecandidates.Firstly,thetoughcompetitioninthejobmarketisthekeypoint.Theenrollmentexpansionofuniversitiesplacesagreatpressureonthejobmarket,whichmakesmanycollegegraduatesturntofurthereducation.Secondlymanystudentswithequivalenteducationbackgroundtocollegegraduatesareallowedtoapplyforpostgraduatestudyduetothechangeofthegovernmentpolicy.FinallythesocietyhasgreatdemandforthepostgraduateswiththeeconomicdevelopmentofChina.(说明原因),现象解释类Sample3,AsfarasIamconcerned,collegestudentsshouldthinktwicebeforetakingpostgraduateeducation.Foronething,postgraduatestudydoesnotnecessarilyensurestudentsabrightfuture.Foranother,itsatoughprocesstopreparefortheentranceexaminationandnoteveryonecanstickitout.Inbriefcollegestudentsshouldnotrushforpostgraduatestudyblindly.(阐述观点),现象解释类图表、漫画模板,第一段Fromthechart/graph/table/picture,welearnthatnowadays/atpresent,.(总述社会现象/事实现象),whichhasreceivedconsiderablepublicity/whichhasarousedgreatconcern。.Whatimpressusmostisthat(现象的突出表现).,现象解释类图表、漫画模板,Thechart图,图表;曲线图/gr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