专题突破 ,书面表达课件.ppt

2013年浙江中考第一轮复习,第六讲书面表达,【解析】(1)仔细审题，注意题目的具体要求，明确写作要求，确立短文的体裁，要用的时态和格式。本题是讲述网购的话题，介绍网购在日常生活中的利与弊，并阐述自己的观点。时态用一般现在时。(2)注意写作要点。本书面表达是提示作文，所给提示的内容一定要写全面，根据表格中的两个方面提示展开。不必根据表格内容直接翻译，可以适当发挥。(3)连句成篇，注意语言的连贯和过渡。如写作过程中适当运用连词，如and,so,but等，就会使文章过渡自然。还要注意单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等细节。,专题训练11书面表达(一),参考范文：SaveFoodandEatHealthilyOurgovernmenthascalledonthecitizenstosavefoodandeathealthilysothatwecanenjoyourhappylife.Wemiddleschoolstudentsshoulddosomethingforit.Tosavefood,weshouldntwasteanyofourfood._Weshouldeatupallthefood.Weshouldntorderthefoodmorethanwecaneatwhilediningout,becausemanypeopleintheworlddonthaveenoughtoeat.Toeathealthily,weshouldnteatjunkfoodbuthealthyfood.Itsgoodforourhealthtoeatabalanceddiet.Wedbetternoteatinsmallrestaurants.Thefoodandtheoiltheyusearenotcleanorhealthyenough.Wedbettereatatschoolorathomeifwehavetime.,专题训练12书面表达(二),参考范文：OurLifeintheFutureWhatwillthelifebelikeinthefuture?Ithinktheworldwillbesmallerandsmallerbecauseofthedevelopmentofhightechnology.Peoplecantalkwitheachotherwithsmallmobilephones,fromwhichpeoplecanseeeachotherveryclearly.Eventheyliveveryfarfromeachother.Ialsothinktheenvironmentwillbecleanerandcleaner.Peoplearoundtheworldarenowrealizingtheseriousenvironmentproblems.Andtheyaretryingtheirbesttomaketheenvironmentbeautiful.Ihopethelifeinthefuturewillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful!,参考范文：TheTeacherILikeBestOfallmyteachers,IloveMrs.Libest.ShetaughtusEnglishinjuniormiddleschool.Shehadmanywaysofmakingherclassesinterestingandexciting.Shealwaystaughtussomethingnewineasyways.ShehelpedususeEnglishbydoinginterestingactivities,suchas,makingsurveys,playinggames,etc.Mrs.Liwasastrictbutkindteacher.Sheoftenaskedustobeontimeforclassanddohomeworkbyourselves.Whenwehadtrouble,sheoftenhelpedusout.ThankstoMrs.Li,IstartedtoloveEnglish.IloveMrs.Liandherclass.,参考范文：ApersonIwillneverforgetThepersonIllneverforgetismyEnglishteacher.Hesatallmanwiththickglasses.Helikessportsandoftenplaysfootballandbasketballwithus.Heshumorousandalwaysmakeshisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Heskindbutisstrictwithus.Heneverallowsustopretendthatweknowwhatwedontknow.Heoftentellsusthatitsnousememorizingnewwordswithoutunderstanding.MyEnglishhasgreatlyimprovedwithhishelp.,参考范文：MyHobbyDifferentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.Myhobbyiscollectingcoins.Igotmyfirstcoinonmy8thbirthdayfrommygrandpa.ItwasanoldChinesecoin.Ilikeitverymuch.Ihavebeencollectingcoinsfor7years,andIhaveover2,500coinsfromdifferentcountriesindifferentshapestillnow.Istorethemintheboxesunderthebed.Mymotheroftensaidwehadrunoutofroomtostorethem.Collectingcoinshelpsmelearnalotaboutdifferentculturesandhistory.Lastyear,Idonatedso