unit-4-wildlife-英文建议信

GuidedWriting如何写劝说性建议信,如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,要点全,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,连接词,假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA（ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation）的会长写一封建议信。,第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,第一人称,一封信,建议采取措施保护羚羊,说理逻辑性,一般现在时,Dear,Yourssincerely,Sincerelyyours,Sincerely,Yourstruly,Yoursfaithfully,Dear,Yours,Love,DearSir/President,IamLiHua,astudentfromClass1,Senior1.IamwritingtodrawyourattentiontothematterthatIwouldhighly/muchappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.Lookingforwardtoyourreply./Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHua,假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA（ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation）的会长写一封建议信。,DearSir/President,IamLiHua,astudentfromClass1,Senior1.IamwritingtodrawyourattentiontothematterthatIwouldhighly/muchappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.Lookingforwardtoyourreply./Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHua,Para.1raisetheissue:提出问题,Para.2analyzetheissue:分析问题,Para.3solvetheissue:解决问题,1990年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩下不到10万只，数量急剧减少,Para.1raisetheissue:提出问题,Therewereabout1millionantelopesin1990.Thenumberofantelopesin1990wasabout1million.,Nowtherearelessthan100,000.Atpresentonlyabout100.000areleft/remained.,Thenumberofthemhasdecreasedrapidly.,Atpresent,left.,dramatically急剧地,简单句写作,词汇润饰,1990年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩下不到10万只，数量急剧减少,Para.1raisetheissue:提出问题,Therewereabout1millionantelopesin1990.Thenumberofantelopesin1990wasabout1million.,Nowtherearelessthan100,000.Atpresentonlyabout100.000areleft/remained.,Thenumberofthemhasdecreasedrapidly.,Atpresent,left.,dramatically，急剧地,复杂句合成,from1,000,000in1990to100,000atpresent.,Tibetanantelopes,Para.2analyzetheissue:分析问题,1为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，牟取暴利，捕杀藏羚羊仍然时有发生。2栖息地的破坏；食物缺乏。3.法律不够严厉，公众缺乏保护意识。1.Tomakegreatprofits,thehunterskillTibetanantelopeswithoutmercy.2.Theirhabitatsaredestroyed.3.Theyarelack/shortoffood=theylackfood.4.Thelawisnotsevereenough.5.Thepublicstilllacktheawarenessofwildlifeprotection.,Para.2analyzetheissue:分析问题,Tomakegreatprofits,thehunterskillTibetanantelopeswithoutmercy.Theirhabitatsaredestroyed.Theylackfood.Thelawisnotsevereenough.Thepublicstilllacktheawarenessofwildlifeprotection.,要点多，简介概况，不深入，不透彻。,要点之间缺乏顺序、程度衔接词，不流畅。,句式单调，简单，没有复杂句润饰。,复杂句，高级词汇是点睛。,Para.2analyzetheissue:分析问题,1.Tomakegreatprofits,thehunterskillTibetanantelopeswithoutmercy.2.Theirhabitatsaredestroyed.3.Theyarelack/shortoffood=theylackfood.,Tomakegreatprofits,thehunterskill/murderTibetanantelopesfortheirfurwithoutmercy.,=,definitelyresultingin/leadingtotheirlackoffood.,Theirhabitatsarebeingdestroyedillegally,whichdefinitelyresultsin/leadstotheirfoodshortage.,Para.2analyzetheissue:分析问题,4.Thelawisnotsevereenough.5.Thepublicstilllacktheawarenessofwildlifeprotection.,Therelatedlawsarenotsevereenoughsothatoverhuntingcantbebannedcompletely.Meanwhile,thelackofawarenessonwildlifeprotectionalsocontributesalottothisendangeredspecies.,Para.2analyzetheissue:分析问题,Tibetanantelopesarebeingmurderedfortheirfurwithoutmercybythehunterstosatisfytheirselflessdesireofmakinggreatprofits.,Theirhabitatsarebeingdestroyedillegally,whichdefinitelyresultsin/leadstotheirfoodshortage.Therelatedlawsarenotsevereenoughsothatoverhuntingcantbebannedcompletely.Meanwhile,thelackofawarenessonwildlifeprotectionalsocontributesalottotheendangeredspecies.,Aboveall,Tomakemattersworse,their,Besides,the,thoroughly.,Tomakegreatprofits,thehunterskillTibetanantelopeswithoutmercy.Theirhabitatsaredestroyed.Theylackfood.Thelawisnotsevereenough.Thepublicstilllacktheawarenessofwildlifeprotection.,要点多，简介概况，不深入，不透彻。,要点之间缺乏顺序、程度衔接词，不流畅。,句式单调，简单，没有复杂句润饰。,复杂句，高级词汇是点睛。,1加大对藏羚羊的保护的宣传力度，提高人们对野生动植物的保护意识。2增加藏羚羊的保护的资金，建立保护区等。3政府制定相关法律，相关政策,严惩非法捕杀。Wedbettermaketheimportanceofwildlifeprotectionknowntoallandraisethepublicsawarenessofit.weshouldsetupmorenaturereserves.Thegovernmentshouldmakelawstopunishtheillegalhunters.,Para.3solvetheissue:解决问题,1加大对藏羚羊的保护的宣传力度，提高人们对野生动植物的保护意识。Wedbettermaketheimportanceofwildlifeprotectionknowntoallandraisethepublicsawarenessofit.Weshouldadvocate提倡，主张/publicize宣传/stress/emphasizetheimportanceofwildlifeprotectionandraisethepublicsawarenessofit.Itshightimetopaymuchattentionto/attachgreatimportance/significancetothewildlifeprotectionandarousethepublicsconcernoverit.,2增加藏羚羊的保护的资金，建立保护区等。Weshouldsetupmorenaturereserves.ItsofgreatsignificancetosetupmorenaturereservestomakesuretheTibetanantelopeshaveenoughlivingspace.Itswidelyadvised/suggested/advocatedthatmoremoney(should)bespentinordertosetupnaturereserves.,Para.3solvetheissue:解决问题,3政府制定相关法律，相关政策,严惩非法捕杀。Thegovernmentshouldmakelawstopunishtheillegalhunters.,Para.3solvetheissue:解决问题,Thegovernmentisexpected/supposedtomakeseverelawstopunishthosewhothreatenthesurvivalofTibetanantelopes./toprotectthefromdyingout/disappearance/disappearing/extinction.,Itsofgreatimportance/significancetoraisethepublicsawarenessofwildlifeprotection.=,toarousethepublicsconcernoverwildlifeprotection.=developthepublicssenseofwildlifeprotection.,Para.3solvetheissue:解决问题,Itshightimetopaymuchattentiontothewildlifeprotectionandarousethepublicsconcernoverit.MakesuretheTibetanantelopeshaveenoughlivingspace.Itsofgreatsignificancetosetupmorenaturereserves.Thegovernmentisexpected/supposedtomakeseverelawstopunishthosewhothreatenthesurvivalofTibetanantelopes.,Therefore,its,Inaddition,DearSir/President,IamLiHua,astudentfromClass1,Senior1.IamwritingtodrawyourattentiontothematterthatthenumberofTibetanantelopeshasdecreaseddramatically,fromtoatpresent.Aboveall,Tibetanantelopesarebeingmurderedfortheirfurwithoutmercybythehunterstosatisfytheirselflessdesireofmakinggreatprofits.Tomakemattersworse,theirhabitatsarebeingdestroyedillegally,whichdefinitelyresultsin/leadstotheirfoodshortage.Besides,therelatedlawsarenotsevereenoughsothattheillegalhuntingcantbebannedthoroughly.Meanwhile,thelackofawarenessonwildlifeprotectionalsocontributesalottothisendangeredspecies.Itshightimetopaymuchattentiontothewildlifeprotectionandarousethepublicsconcernoverit.MakesuretheTibetanantelopeshaveenoughlivingspace.Therefore,itsofgreatsignificancetosetupmorenaturereserves.Inaddition,thegovernmentisexpected/supposedtomakeseverelawstopunishthosewhothreatenthesurvivalofTibetanantelopes.Iwouldhighlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHua,158,Therearethreemajorfactors/reasonsaccountingforit.,Immediatemeasures/actionsmustbetakentoimprove/betterthepresentsituation.,DearSir/President,IamLiHua,astudentfromClass1,Senior1.IamwritingtodrawyourattentiontothematterthatthenumberofTibetanantelopeshasdecreaseddramatically,fromtoatpresent.Aboveall,Tibetanantelopesarebeingmurderedfortheirfurwithoutmercybythehunterstosatisfytheirselflessdesireofmakinggreatprofits.Tomakemattersworse,theirhabitatsarebeingdestroyedillega