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jjjkk,.,1,中文论文中的英文写作：一些较常见的问题,中国医学科学院北京协和医学院,肿瘤研究所,周传农,jjjkk,.,2,题目,jjjkk,.,3,题目太繁,双侧迷走神经和颈总动脉联合切断法建立急性脑缺血大鼠动物模型的实验研究BilateralvagotomyandcarotidarteriescombinedcuttingmethodEstablishmentofratmodelofacutefocalcerebralischemiaanimalmodelexperimentalstudy双侧迷走神经和颈总动脉联合切断法建立急性脑缺血大鼠动物模型Establishmentofaratmodelofacutefocalcerebralischemiabycombinedbilateralvagotomyandcarotidarterycutting,jjjkk,.,4,题目太大,儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作EstablishmentofChildoodSimpleObesityAnimalModel儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作Establishmentofamousemodelofchildhoodsimpleobesity,（本文只作了小鼠实验，未涉及其他动物）,jjjkk,.,5,题目太笼统,不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压AcomparisonofdifferentpressuretestingsystemsforholloworganoflaboratoryanimalsComparisonofdifferentmethodsfortestingthecolonrupturepressureinrats,jjjkk,.,6,题目不能反映原意、用错单词,基因工程大鼠研究进展ProcessinRatGeneticsProgressinresearchonratgeneticengineering,jjjkk,.,7,题目滥用缩写,乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞NF-B信号通路的研究LacticacidinhibitsNF-BsignalingpathwaysinRIMMVECs读者看不懂RIMMVECs是什么；“的研究”可以省去。,jjjkk,.,8,题目滥用缩写,哺乳动物ES细胞与EG细胞研究进展哺乳动物胚胎干细胞与胚胎生殖细胞研究进展ESembryonicstemcellsEGembryonicgermcells,jjjkk,.,9,题目拼写错误,comparisionofhematologicalparametersingerm-freeandconventionalguineapigcomparisonofhematologicalparametersingerm-freeandconventionalguineapig,jjjkk,.,10,题目用错单词,适度深吸气呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射时基于不同参照物配准对银夹构成几何体分次内位移的影响Influenceofregistrationbasedonthedifferentreferencemarketsonthedisplacementofthegeometryconsistedofallclipsinthecavityforexternal-beampartialbreastirradiationatmoderatedeepinspirationbreathholding,markers,jjjkk,.,11,署名与单位,jjjkk,.,12,署名大小写,Libao-ming,wangzhida，liuxiaowen，yaotao,ouyangxiaotong,sujiagangLiBao-ming,WangZhi-da，LiuXiao-wen，YaoTao,OuyangXiao-tong,SuJia-gang姓名大写、标点符号,jjjkk,.,13,单位错词、错名、大小写,TheforthApplicatedHospitalofSuzhouUniversitytheForthAffiliatedHospitalofSoochowUniversity,历史形成的传统地名，已成为这所大学的正式名称，不可用现今的汉语拼音代替,jjjkk,.,14,单位不全,AcademyofMilitarySciencesAcademyofMilitaryMedicalSciences,jjjkk,.,15,单位大小写,Departmentof,TheFifthCentralHospitalofTianjin,Tianjin300162,china.Departmentof,TheFifthCentralHospitalofTianjin,Tianjin300162,China.,jjjkk,.,16,写错单位名称,Wantwanthospital,Changsha410016,ChinaWangWangHospital,jjjkk,.,17,错误的注释,jjjkk,.,18,注释错误,糖尿病(diabeticmellitus)糖尿病(diabetesmellitus),jjjkk,.,19,注释错误,腺病毒（adenoviral）腺病毒（adenovirus）,jjjkk,.,20,注释错误,单纯疱疹病毒（herpessimplevirus）单纯疱疹病毒（herpessimplexvirus）,jjjkk,.,21,错误注释,无特定病原体(specialpathogenfree，SPF)无特定病原体(specificpathogenfree，SPF),jjjkk,.,22,注释错误,独立通风笼具(Individuallywentilatecagesdul，IVC)(Individuallyventilatedcages，IVC),jjjkk,.,23,注释错误,集落形成抑制法(humantumorcellcloningassay,HTCA)(colonyformationinhibitionassay),jjjkk,.,24,注释错误,自然杀伤细胞(naturalkillcell，NK)自然杀伤细胞(naturalkillercell，NK),jjjkk,.,25,注释错误,神经生长因子（nevergrowthfactor，NGF）神经生长因子（nervegrowthfactor，NGF）,全文多处，全都错用这个单词,jjjkk,.,26,参考文献的书写错误,jjjkk,.,27,参考文献作者丢失第一作者、姓与名颠倒,JeongmiAn,Hee-JinY,KimoonPark，etal.(原杂志)JeoumLee,JeongmiAn，Hee-JinYang，Byung-WooKim,KimoonPark.LeeJ,AnJ,YangHJ，etal.,jjjkk,.,28,参考文献作者姓名拼写错误、标点符号,GordonMN,KingDL,DiamondDMetal.GordonMN,KingDL,DiamondDM,etal.,jjjkk,.,29,参考文献作者姓与名颠倒、标点符号,MariaWW,EdwardP,DennisL,etal.Werner-WasikM,PequinotE,LeeperD,原文：MariaWerner-Wasik,EdwardPequinot,DennisLeeper,etal.,jjjkk,.,30,参考文献作者不可用怪异的写法,GiuseppeVerdileSamuelEGandyRalphN.Martins.GiuseppeVerdileG,GandySE,MartinsRN.,jjjkk,.,31,参考文献作者etc./etal.,TylerKL,BartonES,IbachML,ETC.TylerKL,BartonES,IbachML,etal.,拉丁文：etc.是指物，例如apple,banana,etc.etal.是指人，例如GordonMN,KingDL,DiamondDM,etal.不可混淆。,jjjkk,.,32,参考文献不可出现两批作者,VaniniG,WathenBL,LydicR,etal.Baghdoyan,etal.EndogenousGABALevelsinthepotineVaniniG,WathenBL,LydicR,etal.EndogenousGABALevelsinthepotine,jjjkk,.,33,参考文献作者不可用数字11代替文字母ll、姓与名颠倒、大小写、etc.,Wi11iamLuyties,PeterJ.Bredenbeek,AnsF.H.notenetc.LuytjesW,BredenbeekPJ,NotenAF,etal.,jjjkk,.,34,参考文献错写中国作者、标点,YuhuanW,XinmingT,CharlesH,etal.WangYH,TuXM,HumphreyC,etal.原文：YuhuanWang,XinmingTu,CharlesHumphrey,jjjkk,.,35,参考文献引错作者、文题拼写错误、杂志拼写错误,SchmittCA,LoweSW.Apoptosiscelldeathfollowingexposuretofluorideinratalveolarmacrophage.ArchToxical,1996,70:249-251HiranoS,AndoM.Apoptoticcelldeathfollowingexposuretofluorideinratalveolarmacrophages.ArchToxicol,1996,70:249-251,jjjkk,.,36,参考文献缺杂志、缺标点,Age-relatedincreaseinducibleatrialfibrillation201021(1):88-93.Age-relatedincreaseinducibleatrialfibrillation.JCardiovascElectrophysiol2010，21(1):88-93.,jjjkk,.,37,参考文献文题首词丢失,CampylobacterjejuniinfectionindifferentmicestrainsPrimaryCampylobacterjejuniinfectionindifferentmicestrains,jjjkk,.,38,参考文献丢了作者、写了单位,ClevelandClinicFoundation,Cleveland,OH,USA.Theglobalepidemiologyofheartfailure.MedClinNAm2004,88:1135-1143.YoungJB.Theglobalepidemiologyofheartfailure.MedClinNAm2004,88:1135-1143.,jjjkk,.,39,参考文献文题脱漏,FossellaFV,DeVoreR,KerrRN,etal.RandomizedphaseIIItrialofdocetaxelversusvinorelbineorifosfamideinpatientswithadvancednon-small-celllungcancerpreviouslytreatedwithplatinum-containingchemotherapyregimens.TheTAX320Non-SmallCellLungCancerStudyGroup.JClinOncol,2000，18:2354-2362.,jjjkk,.,40,滥用缩写,jjjkk,.,41,滥用缩写,Ca.C中survivn阳性“Ca.C”是什么？（一张照片的说明）（文内根本就没有见到过“Ca.C”）（猜想是癌细胞的意思）,jjjkk,.,42,英文摘要滥用缩写,Toscreenthegenesdifferentiallyexpressedinhumanrenalcellcarcinoma(RCC)celllinesusingSSH.Toscreenthegenesdifferentiallyexpressedinhumanrenalcellcarcinoma(RCC)celllinesusingsuppressionsubtractivehybridization(SSH).,（摘要首句）,jjjkk,.,43,滥用缩写英文摘要,IHCanalysisonTMArevealedthatImmunohistochemicalanalysisontissuemicroarrayrevealedthat,jjjkk,.,44,滥用缩写英文摘要,Objective：ToobservetheaffectofRGZandATRAonthegrowthofmyelomaxenograftinnudemiceandRGZrosiglitazoneATRAall-trans-retinoicacidaffecteffect,jjjkk,.,45,用错词,jjjkk,.,46,错词,大鼠给予药液灌胃AllratswerelavagedwithKFLsolution.AllratsweregavagedwithKFLsolution.,jjjkk,.,47,错词,神经上皮移植NeuralepithelialtransplantationNeuroepithelialtransplantation,jjjkk,.,48,错词,巴马小型猪12只12Obamamini-pigswererandomlydividedinto12Bamamini-pigswererandomlydividedinto,jjjkk,.,49,错词,LowdoesLowdoseHighdoesHighdose,通篇如此,jjjkk,.,50,错词,RT-PCRwasusedtoamplificationthefull-lengthsequenceofRT-PCRwasusedtoamplifythefull-lengthsequenceof,jjjkk,.,51,错词,GeneBankGenBank,jjjkk,.,52,错词用词颠倒了,正常、特异抗原批内变异系数分别为8.3%和6.4%，批间平均变异系数分别为9.7%和11.5%.Theinter-assaycoefficientofvariationofnormalantigenandspecialantigenwas8.3%and6.4%,andtheintra-assayaveragecoefficientofvariationwas9.7%and11.5%,respectively,jjjkk,.,53,错词,评价其抗癌作用Toaccesstheanti-tumoreffectToassesstheanti-tumoreffect,jjjkk,.,54,错词,探讨其作用机理ToexplicitthemolecularmechanismofToexplorethemolecularmechanismof,英文摘要首句,jjjkk,.,55,错词,系统性感染SystematicinfectionSystemicinfection,jjjkk,.,56,单复数,ThelevelofP24antigeninthesupernatantweretestedcontinuously.ThelevelofP24antigeninthesupernatantwastestedcontinuously.,jjjkk,.,57,其他,jjjkk,.,58,不好的文章首句,MG患者通常有眼肌受累，重症肌无力（myastheniagravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，,jjjkk,.,59,不好的摘要首句,ToInvestigatethemechanismofNAFLDingerbilsToInvestigatethemechanismofnon-alcoholicfattyliverdisease(NAFLD)ingerbils,jjjkk,.,60,中英文的语气应该一致,结论Ezrin、E-cadherin和CD44V6在NSCLC的生长和转移过程中发挥着重要的调控作用，Ezrin,E-cadherinandCD44V6probablyplayanimportantroleintheregulationofgrowthandmeastasisoflungcancer.,jjjkk,.,61,材料与方法,MethodsRatsweredividedrandomlyinto2groups.MethodsOnehundredandtwentyhealthyadultmaleratswererandomlydividedintotwogroups.,jjjkk,.,62,英文无顿号,ThevaluesofRi,Re,Cl,MVV,FVC,Fev0.2,Fev0.2/FVC,FEF25-75%,PEFwere1.81(0.94-4.10)cmH2O/mLs、1.83(0.71-3.57)cmH2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cmH2O、144.65(77.28-256.20)mL/min、8.49(5.82-12.70)mL、5.72(3.62-7.01)mL、68.12(39.14-85.28)%、34.11(2