复件+高级英语写作-句子结构.ppt

Nominalclause-that,1.人们普遍认为自然资源是有限的.2.越来越多的人达成共识:克隆人体器官是不和伦理的.3.认为快餐将取代传统食物的观点是荒谬的。4.毫无疑问，收音机和电视是信息交流的重要工具.5.制定更加严厉的法律和法规来震慑犯罪分子是必不可少的.,1.Ithaslongbeenacceptedthatnaturalresourcesarelimited.2.Thereisagrowingconsensusthatitisunethicaltoclonehumanorgans.3.Theviewthatfastfoodwillreplacetraditionalisridiculous.4.Thereisnodoubtthatradioandtelevisionareimportantmeansofcommunication.5.Itisessentialthatmorerigidlawsandregulationsshouldbeenactedtodetercriminals.,1.Itisapparentthat2.itisacommonknowledgethat3.itissuggestedthat4.itmustbepointedthat5.itiscommonlybelievedthat,Nominalclause-if/whether,有人对义务兵役制的合理性表示怀疑.2.关于赌博该不该合法化出现了一场激烈的争论.3.该不该给小孩零花钱引发了激烈的争论.4.辩论的话题是关于为了人类的利益我们应不应该牺牲动物的权利.5.关于该不该禁止克隆人引发了一场激烈的争论.,1.somepeopledoubtwhethercompulsorymilitaryserviceisjustified.2.Therearisesacontentiousdebateoverwhethergamblingshouldbemadelegal.3.Whetherornotchildrenshouldbegivenpocketmoneyhassparkedaheateddebate.4.Thisdebateisaboutwhetherweshouldsacrificeanimalsrightsforhumanbenefits.5.Whetherhumancloningshouldbebannedhastriggeredafierceargument.,Nominalclause-who/whom/who/whose/which,1.现阶段人们更加关心的是政府能否创造更多的就业机会.2.什么因素导致一些稀有物种的灭绝一直是科学家的研究重点3.一些心理学家认为,家长在孩子面前的一举一动将对小孩的行为举止有重大的影响.4.有才干的人有别于平庸的人的一个品质是如何利用零碎的时间.,1.Whatpeoplearemoreconcernedaboutatthisstageiswhetherthegovernmentcancreatemorejobopportunities.2.Whatfactorscontributetothedisappearanceofsomerarespecieshasalwaysbeenaresearchfocusofscientists.3.Whattheparentsdoandhowtheybehaveinfrontoftheirchildren,accordingtosomepsychologistswillhaveagreatimpactontheirchildreninshapingtheirbehaviors.4.Onequalitywhichmakesthedifferencebetweenamanofgreatcaliberandamanofaverageperformanceishowoddmomentsarehandled.,Nominalclause-when/where/why/how,1.近来在我们社区人们广泛讨论如何遏止急剧上升的犯罪率.2.这就是很多白领视跳槽为挖掘自身潜能的机会的原因.3.本图展示了雅思考生参加口语考试的过程.4.该图表描述了人们如何在野外取水生存的.5.在本文中,我将探讨很多语言和文化不断消失的原因.,1.Howwecancurbthesoaringcrimeratehasbeenwidelydiscussedinourcommunitythesedays.2.Thatiswhymanywhitecollarsworkersregardjob-hoppingasanopportunitytotaptheirpotentials.3.ThisdiagramillustrateshowanIELTScandidatetakesaninterview.4.Thisdiagramdepictshowpeopleobtainwaterinthewildinordertosurvive.5.Inthisessay,Iintendtoexplorewhymanylanguagesandculturesaredisappearing.,Sentencepatterns,1.,doing2.,with3.,relativeclause,Clause+presentparticiplephrase,Fordecades,thegovernmentsoughttocolonizeanddeveloptheAmazon,bringingsevereenvironmentaldisastertotheareaanditspeople.Inrecentyears,thegovernmenthaswagedamassiveadcampaigntoencouragebirthcontrol,offeringinducementssuchasfreetripstoMecca.,Noticethatthepresentparticiplesharesthesamesubjectwiththemainclause.Itusuallyindicatesreasonorresult.,Hediedinhismiddleage,leavinghisoldmotherandtwoyoungchildrenbehindhim.,他英年早逝，留下了年迈的母亲和两个幼小的孩子。,Heopenedthedoorquietly,_toleavewithoutbeingnoticed.,他悄悄地打开门，想不知不觉地离开。,intending,Hisfamilyhadbeenplanningtobuyanewcarbuttheypostponedthispurchase,_(等汽车价格下降)。.,inprice,waitingforafall,Doing1.Iknowthathewaspoor.Iofferedtopayhisfare.2.Webarricadedthewindows.Thenweassembledinthehall.Keys:1.Knowingthathewaspoor,Iofferedtopayhisfare.2.Havingbarricadedthewindows,weassembledin,Exercises:3.Inthischapterthecharactershaveaconversation.Theyarelyingfacedownwardsinaseaofmud.4.Thelionfoundhiscagedooropen.Hesawnosignofhiskeeper.Heleftthecageandwalkedslowlytowardsthezooentrance.Keys:3.thecharacters,lyingfacedownwardsinaseaofmud,haveaconversation.4.Thelion,findinghiscagedooropenandseeingnosighofhiskeeper,left,with+nounphrase,mainclause,Butwith188millionpeople,thecountryisnowstrugglingtoprovideenoughfood,shelter,andemploymentforitspeople.Butwithsuchalargepopulationbase,thecountrymuststillconvertmillionsmoretotheideaofbirthcontrolifitistoreachitspopulationtargets.,“with”heresimplymeans“having”,showinganadverbialofcondition.,_,hehastotakeupanotherjob.,有这么一大家人需要养活，他不得不再干一份工作。,Withaguninhand,thegangsterthreatenedtokillthehostageifhewasnotpaid.,Withsuchabigfamilytosupport,歹徒手里拿着枪，扬言如果拿不到钱就杀掉人质。,RelativeClause,Exercises:Combineeachgroupofsentencesintoonecontainingarelativeclause:1.Shewasdancingwithastudent.Hehadaslightlimp.2.Therewasntanydirectoryinthetelephonebox.Iwasphoningfromthisbox.,Keys:1.Shewasdancingwithastudentwhohadaslightlimp.2.TherewasntanydirectoryinthetelephoneboxwhichIwasphoningfrom.,句型,1、倒装句Hardly,scarcely,nosooner,few,little,seldom,never,so+adj./adv.Notonlybutalso,2.强调句Itisthat,RefiningbyCombining,OurpapercarriercollectsonFridays.OurpapercarrierdeliverstheWinnipegFreePressonSaturdays.,1.Youcanconnectthemwithanappropriatelinkingword,suchasand,but,or,nor,orforOurpapercarrierdeliverstheWinnipegFreePressonSaturdaysandcollectsonFridays.,RefiningbyCombining,2.Youcanchangeoneofthesentencesintoasubordinateclause.Ourpapercarrier,whodeliverstheWinnipegFreePressonSaturdays,collectsonFridays.OnFridays,ourpapercarriercollectsfortheWinnipegFreePress,whichshedeliversonSaturdays.AlthoughshedeliverstheWinnipegFreePressonSaturdays,ourpapercarriercollectsonFridays.,RefiningbyCombining,3.Youcanchangeoneofthesentencesintoamodifyingphrase.HavingcollectedhermoneyonFriday,ourpapercarrierdeliverstheWinnipegFreePressonSaturdays.OnFridays,ourpapercarriercollectsfortheWinnipegFreePress,aSaturdaypaper.,RefiningbyCombining,4.Sometimesitispossibletoreduceoneofyoursentencestoasinglewordmodifier.OnFridays,ourpapercarriercollectsfortheSaturdayWinnipegFreePress.,RefiningbyCombining,MeaningClarityCoherenceEmphasisConcisenessRhythm,RefiningbyCombining,Fastfoodsuchasfriedchickenandchipsisincrediblyhighinfatandsalt,whichresultsinserioushealthproblems.Fastfoodsuchasfriedchickenandchipswhichisincrediblyhighinfactandsalt,resultsinserioushealthproblems.,Itwasraininghard.Theycouldnotworkinthefields.,Itwasraininghard;theycouldntworkinthefields.Itwasrainingsohardthattheycouldntworkinthefields.Theycouldntworkinthefieldsbecauseitwasraininghard.Itwasraininghard,sotheycouldntworkinthefields.Asitwasraininghard,theycouldntworkinthefields.,Iwasborninasmalltown.Inthetowntherewasonlyoneschool,.Istudiedthereforsixyears.,InthesmalltownwhereIwasborn,therewasonlyoneschool,andIstudiedthereforsixyears.Iwasborninasmalltown,wheretherewasonlyoneschool.Istudiedthereforsixyears.IstudiedforsixyearsattheonlyschoolwhereIwasborninasmalltown.,RefiningbyCombining,IfFredisnotatCastleFrankstation,weshouldcalltherestaurantwhereheworks.2.Althoughmostpeoplelikechocolate,Inezdoesnotbecausesheisallergictoit.3.Holdinghands,thetwoloverswalkedupanddownLoversLaneuntilitwastimeforthemtopartforthenight.4.WhentheclockinthePeaceTowerhadstrucksixtime,wetookoffourskatesandwenthome.5.Margotcannotcometoclasstodaybecauseshehasatoothacheandhastoseeherdentist.,RefiningbyCombining,6.ThefamousCanadianpainter,TomThomson,wasanenthusiasticcanoeistwhodisappearedmysteriouslyduringacanoeingtrip.7.Pleaseservesomethingbesidespickerelsothatthoseofuswhohateitcanstillenjoyourdinner.8.Theloonscallsuddenlyechoed,startlingthetourists,whoraninsidethehotel.9.Terencecanregisterforclassesinthefallprovidinghepayshistuitionontimeandpassesallhiscurrentcourses.10.TheNorthernLights,whoscientificnameisauroraborealis,dancedacrosstheskylikefireworks.,RefiningbyCombining,1.TheCanadaGames,whichwerefirstheldin1967,are