徐新芸写作课PPT课件

.,1,.,2,.,3,JamesWhite,.,4,.,5,future?,.,6,第七单元,Writing写作课,授课人：徐新芸,.,7,A:Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?B:Iwanttobea/anwhenIgrowup.A:Wherewillyoulive?B:IwillliveA:Howwillyougotowork?B:Iwillgotowork,.,8,A:What?B:.A:Where?B:A:How?B:,.,9,以MyLifeinTwentyYears为题目写一篇作文。请你从职业，居住地，出行以及业余活动描述你二十年后的生活状况。要求：1.句子结构完整，条理清晰，文体规范。2.80词左右。,习作练习,1.判断文体：,记叙文,3.思考方向：,2.判断时态：,一般将来时,按照合理的逻辑顺序描述,begoingto.,will.,.,10,actress,Beijing,Bysubway,TakeactinglessonsMakefriends,keepadog,.,11,MyLifeinTwentyYearsIwanttobeanactressintwentyyears.IwillliveinBeijing.Iwillgotoworkbycar.Imgoingtotakeactinglessons,makefriendsandkeepadoginthefuture.,toosimple,.,12,.,13,Iwanttobeanactress.Whydoyouwanttobeanactress?IamgoingtoliveinBeijing.WhyareyougoingtoliveinBeijing?Iwillgotoworkbysubway?Whywillyougotoworkbysubway?,.,14,引题：探讨一：思想的小火花1：思想的小火花2：,Whatdoyouthinkyourlifewillbelikeintwentyyears?,Iwillbeanactress.,词,句,点题句topicsentence,Reasons(Why),2,SmallT.S.,20,.,15,归纳：探讨一：思想的小火花1：思想的小火花2：,Whatdoyouthinkyourlifewillbelikeintwentyyears?,Iwillbeanactress.,Ilikewatchingmovies.,Thejobisinteresting.,词,句,点题句topicsentence,Reasons(Why),2,SmallT.S.,20,.,16,探讨二：思想的小火花1：思想的小火花2：,IwillliveinBeijing.,Beijingisthemostpopularcity.,Therewillbemorejobsinthatcity.,词,句,SmallT.S.,reasons,20,.,17,词,句,探讨三：思想的小火花1：思想的小火花2：,Iwillgotoworkbysubway.,Takingsubwayisquickandcheap,althoughitscrowded.,Itcanmakelesspollution.,3,SmallT.S.,reasons,20,.,18,词,句,探讨四：思想的小火花1：思想的小火花2：思想的小火花3：,IfIamanactress,Iwilldomanythings.,Imgoingtotakeactinglessons.,Imgoingtomakealotoffriends.,3,SmallT.S.,Imgoingtokeepadog.,reasons,20,.,19,Ending(结尾):Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.,20,.,20,Whatdoyouthinkyourlifewillbelikeintwentyyears?.,Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.,点题，说明来意,小表结明全观文点,4,5,Iwillbeanactress.,Ilikewatchingmovies.,Thejobisinteresting.,IwillliveinBeijing.,Beijingisthemostpopularcity.,Therewillbemorejobsinthatcity.,Iwillgotoworkbysubway.,Takingsubwayisquickandcheap,althoughitscrowded.,Itcanmakelesspollution.,IfImanactress,Iwilldomanythings.,Imgoingtotakeactinglessons.,Imgoingtokeepadog.,Imgoingtomakemanyfriends.,in,20,years,.,21,Iwillbeanactress.Ilikewatchingmovies.Thejobisinteresting.IwillliveinBeijing.Beijingisthemostpopularcity.Therewillbemorejobsinthatcity.Iwillgotoworkbysubway.Takingsubwayisquickandcheap,althoughitscrowded.Itcanmakelesspollution.IfImanactress,Iwilldomanythings.Imgoingtotakeactinglessons.Imgoingtomakealotoffriends.Imgoingtokeepadog.,Whatdoyouthinkyourlifewillbelikeintwentyyears?,Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.,句,篇,.,22,.,23,Iwillbeanactress.Ilikewatchingmovies.Thejobisinteresting.,原因because,because结果so，sothat,tooto转折however,but补充说明and,suchas,forexample,Ithink,Iplan,Ihope,Iexpect,Iguessaseveryoneknows（众所周知）,allinall,添加过渡句、连接词,because,Ithink,IwillliveinBeijing.Beijingisthemostpopularcity.Therewillbemorejobsinthatcity.,Beijingisthemostpopularcity.Therewillbemorejobsinthatcity,IwillliveinBeijing.,andIguess,Aseveryoneknows,so,hopeto,作用：使句子间逻辑清晰，上下文联系紧密，整体性强。,and,differentkindsof,.,24,添加过渡句、连接词,原因because,becauseof结果so，sothat,tooto转折however,although,but补充说明and,suchas,forexample,Ithink,Iplan,Ihope,Iexpect,aseveryoneknows,andsoon,Iwillgotoworkbysubway.Takingsubwayisquickandcheap,althoughitscrowded.Itcanmakelesspollution.IfImanactress,Iwilldomanythings.Imgoingtotakeactinglessons.Imgoingtomakealotoffriends.Imgoingtokeepadog.,作用：使句子间逻辑清晰，上下文联系紧密，整体性强。,6,because,and,Forexample,andsoon,.,25,Takingsubwayisquickandcheap,althoughitscrowded.,Takingsubwayiscrowded,butitsquickandcheap.,Ilikewatchingeducationalandexcitingmovies.,Ilikewatchingmovies.,润色-加修饰性成分，灵活多变的句式,Becausetakingsubwayisquickandcheap.,Becausetakingsubwayisnotonlyquickbutalsocheap.,形容词、副词的运用,关联词、过渡词的运用,灵活的句式,7,.,26,Itwillbeabletomakelesspollution.,Itcanmakelesspollution.,Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.,“Nothingisimpossible!”Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.,润色-加修饰性成分，灵活多变的句式,Iwilldomanythings.,Iwilldoquitealotofthings.,高级词语替换低级词语,固定词组、习语、谚语的使用,7,.,27,IthinkIwillbeanactress,becauseIlikewatchingeducationalandexcitingmovies.Andthejobisinteresting.Aseveryoneknows,BeijingisthemostpopularcityandIguesstherewillbemoredifferentkindsofjobsinthatcity,soIhopetoliveinBeijing.Iwillgotoworkbysubway,becausetakingsubwayisnotonlyquickbutalsocheap,althoughitscrowded.AndItwillbeabletomakelesspollution.IfImanactress,Iwilldoquitealotofthings.Forexample,Imgoingtotakeactinglessons,makealotoffriends,keepadogandsoon.,Whatdoyouthinkyourlifewillbelikeintwentyyears?,“Nothingisimpossible!”Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.,句,篇,.,28,注意：锦上添花，量力而行，没有把握，宁可不动。,.,29,以MyLifeinTwentyYears为题目写一篇作文。请你从职业，居住地，出行以及业余活动描述你二十年后的生活状况要求：1.句子结构完整，条理清晰，文体规范。2.80词左右。,习作练习,1.判断文体：,记叙文,3.思考方向：,2.判断时态：,一般将来时,按照合理的逻辑顺序描述,begoingto.,will.,.,30,.,31,围绕主题，迸发思想的火花,梳理与归纳，完整阐述题