如何写好英文句子PPT课件

.,1,如何写好书面表达句子,.,2,1.Awayofsaying“Imsorry”2.Pattingthestomachbeforeameal.3.Thebreadmymothermakesismuchbetterthanwhatyoucanbuyatthestore.4.Tomakefriendsintheschoolwhichwasnotfarfrommynewhome.,Practice:判断是否是句子。,(N),(Y),(N),(N),.,3,无论字数多少，只要有主语和谓语（动词），而且能表达完整的意义的一句话就是一个句子。(1)Iamtired.(2)Pressingonespalmtogetherandrestingonesheadonthebackofoneshandwhileclosingtheeyesasifsleepingmeans“Iamtired.”（双手合拢，闭上眼，把头靠在手背上像睡觉的样子，意思是说“我累了。”）,.,4,(1)Comeinandsitdown,please.(You),省略主语(或主谓语)的句子,(2)Whataterribleday!=(Whataterribledayitis!),.,5,1)Workinghard,youwillmakegreaterprogress.2)Workhardandyoullmakegreaterprogress.3)Ifyouworkhard,youwillmakegreaterprogress.,努力学习，你就会有进步。,.,6,1.辨别下列句子种类(简单句/并列句/复合句),1)Workinghard,youwillmakegreaterprogress.简单句:只有一个主语(或并列主语)和一个谓语(或并列谓语).2)Workhardandyoullmakegreaterprogress.并列句:由并列连词把两个(以上)的简单句连在一起.并列连词:and,notonlybutalso,neithernor,but,so,for,or(否则).3)Ifyouworkhard,youwillmakegreaterprogress.复合句:简单句中的某一个成分由一个句子来充当.复合句种类:名词性从句/定语从句/状语从句.,.,7,典型错误：1)Theoldmanlikestakeawalkinthevillageaftersupper.Theoldmanlikestakingawalkinthevillageaftersupper.2)Ienjoytalkwithhimoveracupofcoffee.Ienjoytalkingwithhimoveracupofcoffee.,一个简单句不能同时有两个谓语,记住：在英语中,一个句子必须且只能有一个谓语或并列谓语。,.,8,(1)要赶上别人，你最好更努力。(2)这事故是怎么发生的？Howdidtheaccidentoccur/happen/comeabout?,二.常见的五大句型,主语+不及物动词(occur,happen,breakout,takeplace,comeabout,rise.),Tocatchupwithothers,youdbetterworkharder.,.,9,常见的系动词:be,seem,appear,become,go,get,grow,turn,look,sound,feel,taste,smell,2.主语+系动词+表语,他烧的饭菜味道很不错.Whathecookstastesdelicious.(2)集邮听起来是个好主意.Collectingstampssoundsagoodidea.,.,10,3.主语+及物动词+宾语,他不知道Bill是否已逃脱.HewonderedifBillhadmanagedtoescape.(2)我原不想这么粗鲁.Ididntmeantobesorude.(3)我外甥每天下午练习弹钢琴三个小时.Mynephewpractisesplayingthepianoforthreehourseveryafternoon.,.,11,4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语,give,offer,teach,tell,read,bring,pass,lend,write,throw,send,ask,make,buy,do,get,cook,sing,(1)MymotherwouldreadmeastorybeforeIwenttobed.MymotherwouldreadastorytomebeforeIwenttobed.(2)Buymeamorningnewspaper,please.Buyamorningnewspaperforme,please.,.,12,5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾补,Angrily,hefoundhismoneystolen.(2)ThegrowthinpopulationmadeNewYorkthelargestcityintheUSA.(3)你认为一天内完成这任务可能吗?Doyouthinkitpossibletofinishthetaskinoneday?(4)他让我在大门口等了一小时了。Hekeptmewaitingforanhouratthegate.,.,13,高考书面表达部分句型,【N2003】Itsasmallflatof25squaremeters,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.【N2000】Thecardidntstopbutdroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwest.【浙2006】Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.【N1998】Thefarmworkersgaveusawarmwelcome.【N2001】Thegovernmentcalledonschoolstoreducethelearningload.,.,14,【浙2006】Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.【N2000】IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.【N2002】40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers.【浙2005】butthemostcommonwayistoholdabirthdayparty,atwhichfriendsgettogethertohavefundrinking,singinganddancing.,.,15,记住：如果是一个复合句，主句和从句都应该分别有自己的主语和谓语。典型错误：1)Thosewhoeattoomuchwilleasilyill.Thosewhoeattoomuchwilleasilygetill.2)Whenhewalkinginthepark,hefeltalittletired.When(hewas)walkinginthepark,hefeltalittletired.,.,16,【浙2006】IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,and【浙2006】Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.【浙2004】Besidesplentyofexamples,ithasmanynotestellingyouhowtouseaword.,.,17,三.写作中的句型转换,把其中一句改为分词短语Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.,Havingfinishedsupper/Afterfinishingsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.,A.合并为简单句,.,18,三.写作中的句型转换,2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.,Hewasbroughtinwithhishandstiedbehindhisback.,.,19,B.合并为复合句1.TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.用同位语从句,ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.,.,20,2.Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthismakespeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.用非限制性定语从句,Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,whichmakespeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.,.,21,C.把复合句改为简单句,Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.,Havingfinishedherstudies/Afterfinishingherstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.,1.把从句改为分词短语,.,22,C.把复合句或并列句改为简单句,2.把其中一句改用介词短语,Wearehavingclassesandthedoorsareopenallthetime.,Wearehavingclasseswiththedoorsopenallthetime.,.,23,四.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,1.Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.,Wealthyas/thoughheis,heworkshard.,Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.,.,24,四.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,2.Hedidntgetupuntil7oclock.,Itwasnotuntil7oclockthathegotup.,Notuntil7oclockdidhegetup.,.,25,3.Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.(尝试多样化表达),Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly.,Themoment/minute/instantwearrivedatthevillage,wewere,.,26,Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediately/directly/instantlywearrivedatthevillage.,Nosooner/Hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagethan/whenwe,.,27,五.using“advancedwords”,使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,1.Dontworryaboutyourexpensesforuniversityeducation,andwewilltrytohelpyou.,andwewillmakethegreatesteffort/doourbest/tryeverymeanstohelpyou.,.,28,2.Atthattimethetaxidriverhadtoaskthetouristforhelp.,Atthattimethetaxidriverhadnochoicebuttoturnto/couldnthelpbutturntothetourist.,.,29,Icameupwithagoodidea.,3.Ihadagoodidea.,Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.,.,30,简单句,分词短语,介词短语,复合句,把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,三.避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,四.使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。,一.写对每一个简单句,二.句型转换,-写好书面表达句子,.,31,1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,Practice-合并下列句子,Whentheyarrivedattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,.,32,2.Iwillbegivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish.Hestudieshard.,IfIamgivenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.,Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.,InordertoimprovehisEnglish,hestudieshard.,.,33,听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._thenews,theygotexcited.2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错._manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.Unless_tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.,Hearing,Havingbeentold,invited,用非谓语动词形式填充,.,34,用非谓语动词形式翻译,1.面对困难时，他从不放弃。2.引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3.做完作业后，他回家了。,Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.,Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.,Havingfinishedhishomework/Afterfinishinghishomework,hereturnedhome.,.,35,Ontheothersideofthestreetstandsaclocktower.,她怀里抱着个婴儿在校门口等人.(用介词短语),Sheiswaitingforsomeoneattheschoolgatewithababyinherarms.,街的另一边有一座钟塔.(用倒装结构),.,36,尝试多样化表达方式,一就受到欢迎,.,37,AssoonasLienZhanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienZhanandhiswifeLienZhanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomeddirectly/themomenttheyarrivedattheairport.Nosooner/HardlyhadLienZhanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthan/whenthey.,.,38,2011年一位用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人“低碳哥(Low-carbonBrother)