读写任务作文课件.ppt

Taskwriting-Argumentation,2014年江苏省高考英语考试说明书面表达示例阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant,notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheofficemayworkhardattheweekend,paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.Whatisthereason，then?Inmostcases，itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy，likemakingupwoodenboxes，butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone，suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay：“Ihavemadesomething！”Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring”jobs.写作内容1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：(1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛；(2)假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？(3)你对平凡工作的看法。,议论文,Whatisasummary?,AshortenedversionofthetextMainpointsofthetextWritteninyourownwords,1.Whatsthemostimportantthinginanargumentativeessay?,Theviewoftheauthor.,2.Howtogetthemainideasofanargumentativeessay?,+,首段/尾段,topicsentencesofeachparagraph,论点,论据,Stepsforwritingasummary(步骤),Read,Find,Rewrite,Join,Readthepassageforoverallcontent(通读全文领略大意).,Rereadcarefully,findoutthetopicsentences.,Writeinourownwords.,Inourfinaldraft,inserttransitionalwordsandphraseswherenecessary.(用连词连接各部分),Youcanbeginlikethis:Fromthepassage,weknow.2)Thepassagemainlytellsusthat.3)Thewriterstatesthat4)Theauthorthinksargues5)Theauthorpointsoutthat,Task1:WriteasummaryofPassage1,Letshaveatry!,ReadPassageAandfindoutthetopicsentenceineachparagraph,Itgoeswithoutsayingthateveryonehashisowninterest.Forinstance,somepeopleareinterestedinstampcollecting,whileothersarefondoffishing.Somepeopleprefershopping.Others,ontheotherhand,havealikingforsports.Todevelopyourinterestwillhelpyoumakewayintheworld.Ifyouhaveastrongtasteforsomething,youwillfinditenjoyabletohaveitdone.Forexample,ifyouliketobecomeateacherandworkhardtowardthispurpose,youwillcertainlymakeyourselfasuccessfulone.Ifyoucultivateyourvariouskindsofinterestproperly,youwillprobablyfinditeasiertofindajoboraprofession.Sometimes,however,youhavetogiveupyourinterestforonethingoranother.Ifyourinterestseriouslyinterferes(干扰)yourworkorstudy,youhavetothinkofgivingitup;ifyouhaveafamilyandstillhavetoomuchinterestinwatchingTV,youhavetostopdoingso,sothatyoucanhelpwithhouseworkorspendsometimetakingcareofyourlovelychild.,Para1Para2Para3,IsitOKforustocombinethesetopicsentencestoformthesummaryofthepassage?,Everyonehashisowninterest.,Youhavetogiveupyourinterestforonethingoranother.,Step1FindoutthetopicsentencesofPassageA,Todevelopyourinterestwillhelpyoumakewayintheworld.,Step2:Rewritethesentenceinyourownwords.(用同义词、同源词或转换句式),Para.1.everyonehashisowninterest.,everyonehasaninterestofhisown,succeed替换makeway,Para3.youhavetogiveupyourinterestforonethingoranother.,forsomereason替换foronethingoranother”,Para2.Todevelopyourinterestwillhelpyoumakewayintheworld.,Theauthorpointsoutthateveryonehasaninterestofhisownanddevelopinganinterestproperlywillhelpyousucceed.Butonsomeoccasions,yourinteresthastobegivenupforsomereason.(35words),APossibleVersion:,Step3:Addsomeconjunctionalwords(衔接词),Task2:WriteasummaryofPassageB,Letshaveatryagain!,ReadPassage2andwriteasummary,Scientistsfindthathard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives.Evidenceshowsthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanthejob-holders.Astudyshowsthatwhenevertheemploymentrateincreasesby1%,thedeathrateincreasecorrespondingly(相应地)by2%.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint:workishelpfultohealth.Whyisworkgoodforhealth?Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy,awayfromloneliness.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy,worriedandlonelywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Instead,thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy.Workservesasabridgebetweenmanandreality.Bywork,peoplecomeintocontactwitheachother.Bycollectiveactivities,theyfindfriendshipandwarmth.Thisishelpfultohealth.Thelossofworkmeansthelossofeverything.Itaffectsmanspirituallyandmakeshimlikelytodisease.Besides,workgivesoneasenseoffulfillmentandasenseofachievement.Workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety.Whenawriterfinisheshiswritingorteacherseeshisstudentsgrow,theyarehappybeyondwords.,Fromthepassage,weknowthatworkcanmakepeoplehealthy,becausebusyworkcanridoneofloneliness,andmakeonefeelfruitfulandproudofhimself,whichcontributestoagoodbody.(34),APossibleVersion:,Whatshouldyoupayattentiontowhenwritingasummary?,写作内容2.然后以约120个词就“努力学习，快乐生活”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：a)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗？为什么？(至少两点理由）b)就你而言你如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活？写作要求(1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。,Bodywriting,Body1.按要点顺序逐个分段完成2.通过回答要点,写好主题句再展开,1)Itotallyagreewiththeauthor./Ijustcantpossiblyagreewiththat,2)Asforme,Ithink,StudyhardandenjoyyourselvesFromthepassage,weknowthatworkcanmakepeoplehealthy,becausebusyworkcanridoneofloneliness,andmakeonefeelfruitfulandproudofhimself,whichcontributestoagoodbody.Incommonwiththeauthor,Iagreethattheharderyouwork,thehappieryouwillbe.Asweallknow,knowledgeispower.AndStudyinghardbringsmealotofadvantages.Firstofall,itcanmakemewiseandknowledgeable.Whatsm