【恒心】高考英语突破-短文改错解题练习.ppt

短文改错,文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。,No.1Deareditor,Iamahighschoolstudent.Afewdaysbefore,oneofmyverygoodfriendtoldmethathewasgoingtostopschool.Hesaidthathewantedtostarthisownsbusiness.Itriedmybesttogethimtochangehismind,andfailed.Irealizeitisdifficultofmetochangehismind.Heisnotdoingsogoodinhisstudies.Theprocessismoreimportantthantheresultis.Nowthereareonly90daysbeingleftbeforethetest.Iamnotsurehisdecisionisrightorwrong.Ineededyouradvice.,ago,friends,own,but,for,well,whether,need,No.2Makingropesareoneoftheoldesttradesintheworld.Weknowwhatpeoplemaderopesmorethan5000yearsago,becausewehavefoundedropesinveryoldEgyptiantombs.Theymakesomeropesfromthehairofcamels.Theymadeanotherfromtwistedgrass.Peopleusedthemfortyinganimal,forgettingwaterfromdeepwellsandforpullinglargestoneswhichtheyusedtheminbuilding.Intheveryolddays,peoplemaderopesbythehand,buttodaymachinesmakethem.Inverypoorcountriestoday,peoplestillmakeropesashisancestorsdidthemintheveryolddays.,is,that,found,made,others,animals,their,No.3Mygrandfatherwasateacher.Hewastheheadteacherofaschoolforboysattheagesofthirteenandeighteen.Iknowthathewasakindman,becausewhenIamyoung,hegavemepresents,andsetmeonhisknees,andtoldmestories.Andtheboysathisschoolwereafraidofhim.Atschool,whenhewalkedintoaroomfullofnoiseboys,therewassilenceatonce.Whenhelookedataboywithacertainlookinhiseye,thatboywentredintheface,andlookeddownhisshoes.Ifaboybroughttohimcarelesswork,mygrandfatherpickedupaboysbookandthrewitacrosstheroom,shouting,“Doitallagain,andtakeitbackthefirstthinginthemorning!”Iftheboywaslater,orifheforgottotakethework,hehadtodoitagain.,between,was,But,noisy,eyes,the,bring,late,at,No.4IambackinBrightonnowaftergreatholidaywithRosieinDublin.Ireallyenjoyedit.Wetravelbytrainandboat.Ihatedtheboatjourney,forItriedtosleep,butitwasverydifficulty.Wewereallverytiredwhenwearrived.Wehadstayedwithherparentsfortwoweeksandtheycookedlovelymealstous.IpractisedmyEnglishallthetime.WevisitedRosiesfriendsandalsosomeoftheDublinsbeautifulbuildings.Thecastlewasclosesowedidntgetinto,wejustlookedattheoutside.Ilikedtheuniversityverymuch.Whatgreattobeastudent!,a,travelled,difficult,both,for,closed,in,How,No.5Afteradayofworkandplay,thebodyneedstohavearest.Sleepisnecessaryforgoodhealthy.Duringthistime,thebodyrecoversfromtheactivitiesoftheday.Therestwhatyougetwhilesleepingenableyourbodytoprepareitforthenextday.Therearefourlevelsofsleep.Eachisalittledeeperthantheoneago.Asyousleep,yourmusclesrelax.Yourheartjumpsmoreslowly,andyourbrainslowsdown.Afteryoureachthefourthlevel,yourbodyshiftsbackorforthfromonelevelofsleeptotheother.Ifyouhavetroublefallasleep,somepeoplesuggestbreathingslowlyanddeeply.Andotherpeoplebelievethatdrinkwarmmilkhelpsmakeyousleepy.Thereisalsoaoldsuggestionthatcountingsheepputyousleep.,health,that,itself,before,beats,and,falling,drinking,an,to,No.6ThecompanythatWaltDisneystarteddoesnotjustmakefilm.In1955WaltDisneyopenedafirstDisneylandinLosAngeles.In1971DisneyWorldwasopenedinFlorida.In1983TokyoDisneylandwasopenedinJapan.Itwascostbetween$500or600million.In1992EuroDisneywasopenedinFrance.Disneyparksarethecleanestparkswhatyoucanimagine.Theworkersworkingtheremustdresscleanclothes.InDisneylandallthecharactersfromWaltDisneysfilmscanbefounded.VisitorsliketheSleepingBeautyCastlebest.ManystreetsinDisneylandwerebuilttolooklikethatintheUSAin1890s.Peoplewalkaroundwearingnineteenth-centuryclothing.,films,the,and,that,wear,found,those,the,clothes,No.7Marywasapopstar.Sheboughtnewhouse,andhiredamantopaintingtheroomsinnewcolors.Itwasdifficultytogetticketsforhershow,becauseofeverybodywantedtoseeit.Soshedecidedtogivethepaintertwoofthebestseat.Shehopedthatthiswouldmakehimtoworkbetter.Hetooktheticketswithoutsayingsomething.Shelistenednomoreabouthim