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,Writing,高考英语写作高分策略,Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面,Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?,1.Thecharacterofthisgalaisthatitrelatespeopleslives,2.Themoststrikingfeatureofthisgalaisitstraditionallycloselinkwithordinarypeopleslives.,3.YoungpeopledontwanttowatchTV,sotheypayattentiontootherformsofcelebration.,4.YoungpeoplefocustheirattentiononotherformsofcelebrationinsteadofimmersingthemselvesinTV.,_,_,_,_,影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料,人靠衣装，文靠词装,A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；,B.句型结构运用灵活多变;,Practice,Findsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowings,good2.think3.clever,perfectexcellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent,inonesopinion/viewholdtheviewthatitiswidelysharedthat,wisebrightsmartintelligentcute,改变句子结构,与众不同,1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。,Astrong/bigearthquakehappenedinTangshaninthe1980s.,TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshaninthe1980s.,Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangShaninthe1980s.,2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.,IreceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenonAugust15ththismorning.,YourletterofAugust15threached/gottomethismorning.,改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化,1.Hegotexcitedwhenheheardthenews._thenews,hegotexcited.2.Thegirlwenthome,becauseshewashungryandthirsty._,thegirlwenthome.3.IstudiedChinese,EnglishandPhysicsatschool._includeChinese,EnglishandPhysics.4.Itwasearlyinthemorning.Mr.Smithwasinhisgarden.Hewaswateringflowers._,Mr.Smithwaswatering_.,Hearing,Hungryandthirsty,ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschool,Earlyinthemorning,inthegarden,使用强势句式，增强语句表现力,1.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell._weweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!2.Radiobroadcastsdidntbeginuntil1920.Itwas_.3.Heneverspeaksabouthisownfamily.Never_.4.Anoticeissaying”PleaseSaveWater”onthewall.Onthewall_.5.Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot._.,Howglad,notuntil1920thatradiobroadcastsbegan,doeshespeakabouthisownfamily,isanoticesaying”PleaseSaveWater”,Childthough/asheis,heknowsalot,影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词,and,then,also,besides,morever,whatsmorefurthermore,inaddition,morethanthat.,1.表递进.表转折.表因果.表目的.表归纳,but,however,although,though,inspiteof,despiteafterall,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand.,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequentlyasaresult/consequence,onaccountof.,inorderthat,sothat,forthepurposeof.,ingeneral,inbrief,inshort,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole.,如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？,Manyhousesandschoolsweredestroyed.Morethanfivemillionpeoplearelivingahardlifenow.Thestudentsthereneedhelpandschoolsshouldbebuilt.Studentscanreturntoclassessoon.,WilliamShakespeare(2008高考湖南卷书面表达)DoyouknowHamlet?HaveyoureadTheMerchantofVenice?ThesetwogreatworksarebothwrittenbyWilliamShakespeare,myfavoriteEnglishwriterandthemanofallages!Shakespeare,asonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,wroteplaysandpoemsthatarereadallovertheworld,Ilikehimbecausehiscomediesandtragediesbringmeintoafantasticworld;IlovehimbecausehispoemsletmeenjoythebeautyoftheEnglishlanguage;Iadmirehimbecausehiskeensightssetmethinkingandteachmehowtoleadameaningfullife!Since“Lifeisastage”,weareactuallyallactorsandactresses.Onthisstage,everyonehadhisownroletoplay.andIwilltrymybesttoplaymyrolewell.,_,影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想,小结：1.作文的卷面；-整洁的卷面2.文章的语言；-丰富的词汇3.行文的流畅；-流畅的结构4.文章的思想；-独到的见解,Homework,BuildaH