2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦

.2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine,he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular Id always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking.I guessed,even at that age,I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;I would always know Id done something wrong.Late on,my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son,Mike,wasnt there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mikes room and found Mike laying on his face on the floor,read a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite unwilling.Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite patient and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great surprised,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of hers!My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.She liked it at once.Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.As she did this,lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.It was turned out to be her own cup,that shed left on the shelf by mistake.The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,for I just thought it was funny!Christine was just a girl in one of my classes.I never knew much about her except for that she was strange.She didnt talk many.Her hair was black and purple,and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater,although in the summer.She was,in fact,rather attractively,and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her.Like the rest of my classmate,I didnt really want to get closest to her.It was only when we did their chemistry test together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates,richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,that is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and researching the computer software.An old saying go:“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy at English when I was a little girl.I got particular interested in foreign cultures or customs.To meet us curiosity,I read English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As for a result,I always did very well in English exam.Interest is the key to success.I think a good student may has a lot of qualities,and the following three are the basic ones.They are diligence,intelligence and confidence.Take Tom for an example,he is one of the best students in class and serves as our monitor.Although he is clever and learn fast,but he is not lazy.Unlike some other student who study well in the same class,he reads a great many of science books.These students are as hard-working as Tom and they dont have an equal rich knowledge.Last Sunday，I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full with freshness and beauty of spring，with the sun shining and birds sing.When I was enjoyed the fantastic scenery around，something unpleasant caught my eyes.A young couple in a boat are eating，talking and laughing loudly as if we were the only people in the world.What was worse，they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake，total ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby.What shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought.Because all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did so，the lake will be seriously polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.Last week I went to visit my former neighbor，Mr.Yang.He and I used to living next to each other for many years.About half a year ago，the order came that the old building，along with many other similar ones，was going to be pulled down to make rooms for a main street.So I had to move it apart.Mr.Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park.His new apartment is much big than before.The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area.Therefore，Mr.Yang doesnt seem to worry about the long distance.He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window.The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags.A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes.She took the child by the hand and led him into the store.There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing.They walked back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday.The little boy looked her and asked how she was God.She smiled and replied that she was just one of his child.On July twentyseventh last summer，I as well as my brother leave for Tianjin in order to go to Jays concert.I was very fond of Jays songs but I couldnt wait to see him.When we arrived the center of the water stadium，the large number of people were waiting there.We met a few fans of Jays at the stadium where we took some picture with them.We were waiting for Jay，smiled and excited.Finally，at 8 o clock in the evening，Jay turned up slow among the cheers of all fans.Dressing in a blue coat，Jay sang many more beautiful songs.Following my rhythm，I sang to music.Finally，the concert ended up with a famous song by Jay.2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（1）篇第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine,he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular Id always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking.I guessed,even at that age,I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;I would always know Id done something wrong.Late on,my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.答案:I was playing at my house.Since his family was than mine,he had more toys than I did.There was one particular Id always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking.I guessed,even at that age,I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or my cousin again;I would always know Id done something wrong. on,my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy and gave it back.She what had happened,but she thanked me and mentioned it again.剖析:此处应该用所有格形式。由than可知用形容词比较级。in particular尤其,固定搭配。put为及物动词,此处缺少宾语,应该加it。enjoy doing sth.是固定搭配。此处face与enjoy并列。later on 后来,固定短语。修饰动词用副词。slowly慢慢地。时态误用,此处应用一般过去时。根据句意应用否定词never,表示“再也没有提起”。2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（2）篇第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son,Mike,wasnt there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mikes room and found Mike laying on his face on the floor,read a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite unwilling.Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite patient and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great surprised,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of hers!答案:It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner they that their son,Mike,wasnt there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mikes room and found Mike on his face on the floor, a book.He was laughing! Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite .Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great ,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of !剖析:be about to do.when.为固定结构,意为“正要做这时”。整篇文章都是过去时态,因此应用found。lie意为“撒谎;躺”,现在分词形式为lying;lay意为“放置;下蛋”,现在分词形式为laying。reading a book为现在分词短语作伴随状语。副词修饰动词left,因此应用unwillingly。wonder后跟宾语从句且从句中又缺少主语,因此用what,that多余。wait为不及物动词,要加介词for之后才能跟宾语。由上下文可知史密斯夫人很不耐烦,因此应用impatient。to ones surprise“使某人吃惊的是”,为固定短语。to为介词,介词后跟名词,而surprised为形容词。故事书是儿子的,为男性,因此用his而不用hers。of后跟名词性物主代词或名词所有格形式,因此应用his。2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（3）篇第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.She liked it at once.Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.As she did this,lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.It was turned out to be her own cup,that shed left on the shelf by mistake.The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,for I just thought it was funny!答案:My sister saw a lovely cup when we shopping the other day.She liked it at once.Then she bent down and picked up to look at price on it.As she did this,lots of tea splashed on T-shirt! I had to try not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.It was turned out to be her own cup, shed left on the shelf by mistake.The assistant was clearly as as my sister, I just thought it was funny!剖析:短文讲述的是过去的事情,故应该用一般过去时。pick 是及物动词,此处缺少宾语。price在本句中特指那个杯子的价格。人称代词错误。指代my sister,形容词性物主代词应用her。hardly几乎不;hard adv. 努力地。want后需加不定式作宾语。turn out 结果是,证明是,不用于被动语态。非限制性定语从句不能用that 引导。embarrassed 感到尴尬的;embarrassing 令人尴尬的。前后两句为转折关系,并不表示因果关系。2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（4）篇第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Christine was just a girl in one of my classes.I never knew much about her except for that she was strange.She didnt talk many.Her hair was black and purple,and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater,although in the summer.She was,in fact,rather attractively,and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her.Like the rest of my classmate,I didnt really want to get closest to her.It was only when we did their chemistry test together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.答案:Christine was just a girl in one of my classes.I never knew much about her except that she was strange.She didnt talk .Her hair was black and purple,and she black sports shoes and a black sweater, in the summer.She was,in fact,rather ,and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her.Like the rest of my ,I didnt really want to get to her.It was only when we did chemistry test together that I to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.剖析:except for+名词/代词/doing;except that+句子,故需要把介词for去掉。此处用much修饰动词talk,而many不能用来修饰动词。此处动词wear作谓语,应用过去式wore。此处强调程度,且后接的是短语,故改为even。此处为形容词作表语。动词care与seemed之间缺少动词不定式符号to。“班里其余的同学”表示复数概念,因此应用classmate的复数形式。get close to接近,靠近,为固定短语。依据上下文可知无需用最高级。依据其前的we可知,此处要用our。根据句意“只有当我们一起做化学实验时我才开始明白Christine为什么这样打扮自己”可知此处应用began。2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（5）篇第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates,richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,that is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and researching the computer software.An old saying go:“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy at English when I was a little girl.I got particular interested in foreign cultures or customs.To meet us curiosity,I read English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As for a result,I always did very well in English exam.Interest is the key to success.答案:In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates, richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University, is the most famous in the world.He set up a company researching the computer software.An old saying :“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy English when I was a little girl.I got interested in foreign cultures customs.To meet curiosity,I read English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English .Interest is the key to success.剖析:最有钱的人,表示最高级,其前应用定冠词the修饰。引导非限制性定语从句,指物用which。用现在分词在句中作状语表示伴随情况,and多余。考查主谓一致,主语是单数。be crazy about对着迷,为固定搭配。修饰形容词、副词和分词使用副词形式。表示“文化和习俗”,为并列关系,用and。表示“满足我的好奇心”,需要一个形容词性物主代词。固定搭配as a result“结果”,for多余。因为前面有always表明不是一次考试,用复数。2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（6）篇第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。I think a good student may has a lot of qualities,and the following three are the basic ones.They are diligence,intelligence and confidence.Take Tom for an example,he is one of the best students in class and serves as our monitor.Although he is clever and learn fast,but he is not lazy.Unlike some other student who study well in the same class,he reads a great many of science books.These students are as hard-working as Tom and they dont have an equal rich knowledge.答案:I think a good student may a lot of qualities, the following three are the basic ones.They are diligence,intelligence and confidence.Take Tom an example,he is one of the best students in class and serves as our monitor.Although he is clever and fast, he is not lazy.Unlike some other who study well in the same class,he reads a great many science books.These students are as hard-working as Tom and they dont have an rich knowledge.剖析:情态动词后用动词原形,故用have。前后有转折之意,应用but。表示“以为例”用take.as an example/take.for example。由后文可知此处应是“在我们班里(in our class)”,而不是“在课堂上(in class)”。时态是一般现在时,且主语是第三人称单数he,故谓语动词用单数形式。前面有Although,不能再用but。前面的some和后面的study都说明student要用复数。a great many“许多”,后直接接名词。根据前后逻辑来判断,此处应用否定。修饰形容词(rich)应该用副词,故用equally。2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（7）篇.短文改错Last Sunday，I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full with freshness and beauty of spring，with the sun shining and birds sing.When I was enjoyed the fantastic scenery around，something unpleasant caught my eyes.A young couple in a boat are eating，talking and laughing loudly as if we were the only people in the world.What was worse，they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake，total ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby.What shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought.Because all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did so，the lake will be seriously polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.答案Last Sunday，I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was with或 freshness and beauty of spring，with the sun shining and birds .When I was the fantastic scenery around，something unpleasant caught my .A young couple in a boat eating，talking and laughing loudly as if were the only people in the world.What was worse，they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake， ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby.What shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought. all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did so，the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.2016年新课标高考英语备考短文改错集锦第（8）篇.短文改错Last week I went to visit my former neighbor，Mr.Yang.He and I used to living next to each other for many years.About half a year ago，the order came that the old building，along with many other similar ones，was going to be pulled down to make rooms for a main street.So I had to move it apart.Mr.Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park.His new apartment is much big than before.The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area.Therefore，Mr.Yang doesnt seem to worry about the long distance.He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.答案Last week I went to visit my former neighbor，Mr.Yang.He and I used to next to each other for many years.About half a year ago， order came that the old building，along with many other similar ones，was going to be pulled down to make for a main street.So had to move it apart.Mr.Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park.His new apartment is much than before.The only problem is that it quite a long time to get to the downtown area.，Mr.Yang doesnt seem to worry abo