锤炼句子---提高英语写作能力的基本之路

锤炼句子,1、改变句子的开头方式,句子不要一味都用主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词作状语等。试比较：,TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.,MybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycletheotherday.,Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldnthelpcrying.,2.Theyoungmancouldnthelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.,2、在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式。,在一篇文章中,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。,Itisthedogthathassavedmylittlesisterbravely.,A.强调句,ThedoghassavedmyLittlesisterbravely.,Whatwehadtodowastostandthere，tryingtocatchtheoffender.,B.主从复合句,Wehadtostandtheretocatchtheoffender.,Thedriverescapedwithoutstopping，leavingtheoldmanlyingontheroad.,C.分词短语，由with或without引导的短语,Thedriverescapedanddidntstop，helefttheoldmanlyingontheroad.,Notuntil11：30didIgotobed.,D.倒装句,Iwenttobedat11：30.,Whilecrossingthestreet，youshouldbecareful.,E.省略句,Whileyouarecrossingthestreet，youshouldbecareful.,Hestoppedusanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.,F.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力,1.Hestopusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextofffender.,Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing.,Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.,Earlyinthemorning,wemet.,试改变下列句子,使之变化多样,生动有力,Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.,WeakasIam,Iwillmaketheeffort.,AlthoughIamweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.,Singingandlaughing,Theywentbacktoschool.,Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.,Heleftwithoutsayinggoodbye.,eleftanddidntsaygood-bye.,Open,andyou.,病句:Openthedoor,youcanseeabedonyourleft.,Ifyouopen,you.,Hearingthenews,Iwasshocked.,病句:Hearthenews,Iwasshocked.,Iwasshockedatthenews.,学生习作评讲,视听的时候,只听其音量,不要试图听明白其内容.,Abouton-linefriends,Moreandmorepeoplemakeon-linefriendsontheinternet.Differentpeoplehavedifferent,Opinions.Somepeopleagreetomakeon-linefriends.Itmakeuscanmakemorefriends.Theycanexpresstheirideastoothers.Moreover,ithelpsthemtostudyforeignlanguage.Butsomepeople,Dontthinkisgoodtomakeon-linefriends.Becausetheythinkitiswasteoftimeanditeffectsourstudy.Maybesomepeopletobecheated.Wecantknowanyon-linefriendsclearly,sonotanyofthemisgood.,Ithinkmakesomeon-linefriendsisgoodforus.Butweshouldntspendtoomuchtimeonit.Studyismoreimportantthanit.,Moreandmorepeoplemakeon-linefriendsontheinternet.Nowadays,Moreandmorepeoplemakeon-linefriendsontheinternet.Differentpeoplehavedifferent,However,Somepeopleagreetomakeon-linefriends.,SomepeoplethinkitOk/allrighttomakeon-linefriends.,Itmakeuscanmakemorefriends.,Itmakesitpossibleforustomakemorefriends./Itenablesustomakemorefriends.,Moreover,ithelpsthemtostudyforeignlanguage.,Moreover,ithelpsthemstudyforeignlanguages.,dontthinkisgoodtomakeon-linefriends,dontthinkitgoodtomakeon-linefriends./Butsomepeopledontagree/dontthinkso.,Wecantknowanyon-linefriendsclearly,Weareunabletoknowanyon-linefriendswell.,sonotanyofthemisgood.,Sobecareful!Amansmeatmaybeanothermanspoison!,Ithinkmakesomeon-linefriendsisgoodforus.,Ithinkmakingsomeon-linefriendsisgoodforus.,Studyismoreimportantthanit.,Asastudent,studyisthemostimportantthing.Rember,studyalwayscomesfirst.,完成句子,1.Sheboughtabigsofa,_(serve)(它也可以当床用).,whichcouldalsobeservedasabed.,2.Ittakesabouttwohourstogettotheirofficebuilding,_(allow)(考虑到路上可能遇到交通耽搁).,allowingforpossibletrafficdelays.,3.Thoughitlookedlikerainthismorning,_(turnout)(结果却是晴天).,Ithasturnedouttobeafineday.,4.Theaudiences_(get)(变得慌乱起来)aboutthefireinthetheatre.,gotintoapanic.,5He_(witness)(作证说看见)themanentertheshop.,witnessedtohaveseen.,6.Hedrovehiscarslowly_(avoid)(以免撞着行人或被撞).,toavoidhittingpassengersorbeinghit.,7._(give)(多给我们一点时间),wecoulddomuchbetter.,givenmoretime,8._(difference)(无所谓)whetherhecomesornot.,Itmakesnodifference.,9.Doyouhav