3.3公开课“概要写作”.ppt

,高考新题型之概要写作,Summary,whatthesummarywritingis,thecriteriaofagoodsummary,howtowriteagoodsummary,1,2,3,5,Afterthisclass,Ihopeyouwillknow:,普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明,概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）,评分原则,本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分,Narration（记叙文）,Exposition（说明文）,FormsofLiterature,Argumentation(议论文）,Argumentation(议论文）,Topic,Supportingideas,Conclusion,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt,Step1:Read,topicsentence:,Inwhatorderdoesthepassagedeveloptoshowthedifferent“attitudes”?,(para1)Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.,(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt,topicsentence(inpara1),supportingideas(inpara2-4),Findoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph,think,believe,consider,regard,argue,support,beconvincedthat,inonesopinion,fromonespointofview,Para2:Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.,ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries,(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?,(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.,Step2:Makeanoutline,Inthe16thcentury,since18thcentury,Peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,hasnolongerbeenregardedascleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem,Step3:Rewritethesentencesinotherways,Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.,different,mixed,various,反义转换,opinions,views,ideas,同义词替换,Peoplesattitudestodirtvaryindifferenttimes.,towards,句型转换,Peopleholddifferentopinionstowardsdirtovertime.,Theattitudestodirtisnotalwaysthesame.,Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.,Haveatry!,Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.,think:believe,hold,consider,insist,argue,areconvinced.,同义词替换,blockoutdisease:protect/keepawayfromillness;,Onepossibleversion:Inthe16thcentury,peoplebelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.,.dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.,washoff,getridof,benefits,isbeneficialto,contributesto,Onepossibleversion:Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodyisbeneficialtoourhealth.,nolongerbeenregarded,begintochangetheirattitudesto,eversincethe18thcentury,about200yearsago,Nowadays,encouragespeopletoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.,Onepossibleversion:Nowadays,peopleareencouragedtobeexposedtothedirttoimproveourimmunesystem.,Peopleareencouragedto,语态转换,beexposedto.,improve/helponesimmunesystem,buildupastrongimmunesystem,Peopleholdmixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.,Inthe16thcentury,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.,Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtmorethan200yearsago.Theyhavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.,Nowadays,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.,However,Nevertheless/But/however,Addtwolinkingwordstomakethepassagecoherent,Step4:Makethesummarycoherent,nowadays,Step5:Revise,(67words),People