英语人教版八年级下册writing .ppt

-叙事类记叙文（Narration）,中考作文复习训练之二,叙事类记叙文主要是记叙所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有：故事、日记、新闻报道、游记等。,LearningGoals,1.Learnthestandardsofawriting2.Learnsometipsaboutanarration.Tip1:TenseTip2:LogicTip3:SentencesTip4:EmotionsTip5:Description,Groupwork,LastSaturday,allstudentsinourclassgototheoldpeopleshomewithourteacherMissLiu.Sheisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyes.Sheisofmediumheight.SheoftenhelpsuswithEnglish.Wearriveearly.Wedecidetomakethemhappy.Wecleantheirroomsandwashclothesforthem.Weplaychessandtalkwiththem.Inreturn,theytellusmanyoldstories.Welearnalotfromthestories.Wesinganddancetogether.Wearehappyandalmostforgetthetime.Whatameaningfuldaywehave.Wehopetogothereagain.,ASpecialTriptoOldPeoplesHome,Tense(时态),Description(无用的描述干扰主题),Sentences(句子过于简单),Emotions(缺乏情感),7-9分,Logic(逻辑),Tense1.主体：_2.结尾议论：_,请圈出需要修改时态的地方并写出正确的动词形式。,Task1,过去相关时态,现在或将来时态,Logic1._2._.,请在正文的空白处加上适当的表顺序的词，使得文章更有层次,Task2,时间顺序,空间顺序,Wearrivedearly.Wedecidedtomakethemhappy._wecleanedtheirroomsandwashedclothesforthem._weplayedchessandtalkedwiththem.Inreturn,theytoldusmanyoldstories.Welearntalotfromtheoldstories_wesanganddancedtogether.Wewerehappyandalmostforgotthetime.,Task2,Inthemorning,Intheafternoon,Intheevening,/Atfirst,/Afterthat,/Intheend,Sentences1._2._,请选出你觉得更好的句型，并仿写。,Task3,巧用高级词汇,善用多种句型,Whichisbetter?,1.他们很快的完成了任务。,ATheyfinishedtheirtasksquickly.BTheyfinishedtheirtasksasquicklyastheycould.,Task3,2.我希望你能帮助我。,AIwishyoucanhelpme.BImlookingforwardtoyourhelp.,试试将文中的句子进行优化！,4.她得到了一个礼物，她非常高兴。,AShegotagiftandshewasveryhappy.BShegotagiftwhichmadeherhappy.,Task3,3.他太弱小了搬不动这个箱子。,AHeistooweakandhecannotcarrythebox.BHeistooweaktocarrythebox.其他：,Heissoweakthathecantcarrythebox.,Emotions1._2._,请将下列发表看法抒发情感的句子进行翻译。(注意时态),Task4,适当发表议论,以情收尾,依我之见，这些老人就像我们自己的爷爷奶奶，而爱和关心对于他们则是最好的礼物。因此，我们应该多花点时间和他们在一起。我想这才是我们中国人的传统。,_,_arejustlikeourowngrandparents,andloveandcareare_forthem.,So,we_spendmoretimewiththem,_isthetraditionofChinese.,Inmyopinion,theold,thebestgifts,aresupposedto,which,Description删除无用信息,请把无用的干扰主题的信息删除。,Task5,LastSaturday,allstudentsinourclasswenttotheoldpeopleshomewithourteacherMissLiu.Allofushadameaningfulday.Wecouldntwaittoarrivetherebecausewedecidedtomakethemhappy.Inthemorning,wecleanedtheirroomsandwashedclothesforthem.Intheafternoon,weplayedchessandtalkedwiththem.Inreturn,theytoldusmanyoldstorieswhichwelearntalotfrom.Intheevening,wesanganddancedtogether.Weweresohappythatwealmostforgotthetime.,ASpecialTriptoOldPeoplesHome,Inmyopinion,theoldarejustlikeourowngrandparents,andloveandcarearethebestgiftsforthem.So,wearesupposedtospendmoretimewiththem,whichisthetraditionofChinese.Iamlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.,13-14分,1.Thegoodolddays(昆,15,A)2.Awonderful/beautiful_（昆,15，B）3.Ahappytime(昆,14，A)4.Letmetellyou_(昆,14,B)5.Atruestory(昆,12,A)6.Iwillneverforget_7.Themostspecial_8.Happymemorieswith_9.Ilove_(昆,16,B)10.V