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,Howtoimproveyourwriting?,单句改错*拼写1.Theiropinionaredevidedonthisprogramme.,Theiropinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.,Theiropinionsaredividedonthisprogramme.,2.Itmakepeoplefeelthattheycansuccesswithoutmakeanyeffort.,Itmakespeoplefeelthattheycansucceedwithoutmakinganyeffort.,Itmakespeoplefeelthattheycanachievesuccesswithouthardwork.,3.Itwillmisledtheyounginsomeways.,Itwillmisleadtheyounginsomeways/inaway/tosomeextent/tosomedegree.,4.Iteffectsourstudy.,Itaffectsourstudy.,Ithasabadeffect/influenceonourstudy.,5.Onthecountry,somestudentagainstedtheprogramme.,Onthecontrary,somestudentsareagainsttheprogramme.,somestudentsarenotinfavourofthisprogramme.,somestudentsdonotenjoythisprogramme.,*搭配(词性),Intheotherhands,20%studentsdontagreetothem.,Ontheotherhand,20%studentsdontagreewiththem.,Ontheotherhand,otherstudentshavedifferentideas.,2.Lettheyoungertofindmoreself-confident.,Lettheyoung/theyouth/youngpeoplegain/buildupself-confidence.,Helptheyoungbemoreself-confident.,equiptheyoungwithself-confidence.,3.Thisprogrammeisnotonlycreationbutpersonality.,Thisprogrammeisnotonlycreativebutunique.,Thisprogrammeiscreativeanditappealsto/advocatespersonality.,*高级(句式),Thereare80%studentssupporttheSuperGirl.,80%studentssupporttheSuperGirl.,Thereare80%studentswhosupporttheSuperGirl.,Thereare80%studentssupportingtheSuperGirl.,2.Itprovidesthestagetoyoungpeopletoshowourtalents.,Itprovidesyoungpeoplewithastagetodemonstratetheirtalents.,Itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents.,(offeropportunitiesto/givechancesto),80%studentssupportit.Theprogrammeiscreativeandunique.Itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents.Itletsyoungpeoplegainmoreconfidencethanever.20%studentsthinkthattheprogrammemisleadstheyouthtosomedegree.Letthemfeelsuccessdoesntcomefromhardwork.Beingyourselfisntthesameasbeingdifferentfromothers.Iamforthisprogramme.Aslongasourstudyisnotdisturbed,wecanwatchit.,80%studentssupportit.Theprogrammeiscreativeandunique.Inaddition,itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents,andhelpsyoungpeoplegainmoreconfidencethanever.Onthecontrary,20%studentsthinkthattheprogrammemisleadstheyouthtosomedegree.Whatsworse,theywillfeelsuccessdoesntcomefromhardwork.Afterall,beingyourselfisntthesameasbeingdifferentfromothersinbehavioursorappearance.Inmyopinion,Iamforthisprogramme.Aslongasourstudyisnotdisturbed,wecanwatchit.,Enjoyreading,Enjoythepassageandfindoutthephrasesorsentencesyoulikebest,Deareditor,IamwritingtotellyouaboutmyclassmatesopinionsaboutaTVprogramme-SuperGirl.Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.80%ofthemareforthisTVprogramme.Theyarguethatthisprogrammenotonlyprovidestheyoungwithastagetoshowtheirtalentsbutalsogivesachancetothemtobuilduptheirself-confidence.Whatsmore,thisprogrammeiscreativeandadvocatespersonality,whichmeetstheyouthsneed.,Onthecontrary,20%ofthemareagainstthisprogramme.Reasonscanbelistedasfollows.Foronething,itmisleadstheyouthstosomedegree,perhapstheywillmisunderstandthattheycansucceedwithoutanyhardwork.Foranother,beingyourselfdoesntmeanbeingdifferentfromothersbehaviourorappearance.However,everycoinhastwosides,thisprogrammeisnotanexception,ithasitsownadvantagesanddisadvantages.Yours,LiMing,Deareditor,IamwritingtotellyouaboutmyclassmatesopinionsaboutaTVprogramme-SuperGirl.Opinionsaredivided.80%ofthestudentsareinfavorofthisprogramme.Theysaythatthisprogramme,SuperGirlappealsthatweshouldhavepersonalities.Itnotonlyoffersusastagetoshowourselves,butalsoletsusfindmoreconfidence.,Onthecontrary,otherstudentshavedifferentideas.Theyholdtheviewthatthisprogrammewillmisleadteenagersinsomeway,becausesomepeoplehaveafeelingthatwecansucceedwithoutanyhardwork.ThoughSuperGirladvocatespersonalities,itdoesntmeanthatthisprogrammehasnothingincommonwithothers.,Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecanreasonablydrawtheconclusionthateverycoinhastwosides.Inmyopinion,SuperGirlisjustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Havingweighedupbothsides,Ifindthatitsbenefitsfaroutweighitsdisadvantages.Wemustmakeproperuseofthisprogrammeforthesakeofkeepingtidewithsociety.Yourstruly,LiMing,Summary:,审题-体裁,人称,时态列纲谋篇*曲线自救*规范整洁,Practic